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Heroes

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Ravio is still one of my favorite boys ever... (next to Link ofc ;)) I do want Link to share some of his courage with poor ol Ravio.... I wanna see him learn to be the hero he always wanted to be. :'o
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As a writer rather than an artist, I feel ill equipped to offer you a critique, but I can at the very least give you a comment.

   Lovely artwork of Ravio and Link; you've presented the two characters and their differences very well through their expressions and even the background as it transitions from foggy purple to clear blue skies. Link looks on ahead confidently whilst Ravio's is turned aside, showing his uncertain frown and uneasy smile. The sketch marks are neatly used to show the difference in lighting between the two rabbit ears and look real neat as part of the scarf. I also think Link's somewhat rosy, somewhat chubby cheek is rather cute touch.

As for critique... well, Link's missing a hand. Perhaps that is why I feel Link's arm is oddly long or perhaps the lack of a more defined elbow is the cause. The ruppee symbol on Ravio's bag also looks a little off in the angle it's at... but I can't be sure on that. I think the background is amazingly done in concept and look but perhaps it could be even better with more of a transitioning colour in the middle between the purple and blue (it's more present up top, but lacking in the bottom half of the art).

   I doubt my critique will be of much help but hopefully my compliments are well received. The style of the artwork is lovely and the two characters have similar looks yet feel striking different thanks to posture, expression, tone and all; which is how the counterparts of Link and Ravio should look.