I had a dream about this, I was running and I hid in a small wooden room on a cliff, while it was thundering and lightning outside.
Then a girl came in in a hurry but she risked her life running again outside the room towards her friend who was in a smaller shelter beside this room.
I called her to come back coz its lightening a lot, but she never hears so a strong lightening hit her head!! But she continued running while she was in pain.
I sat near the open window, looking at the cloudy sky, waiting for it to clear again. It was a thoughtful moment before woke up.
This is an awesome work, but if you just removed the patch of the face, the whole work is flawless. Great job.