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How to Write a Transformation Story
transformation story (also known as tf story): a story in which a character physically and/or mentally becomes something different, and the change to that is detailed within the story.
Introduction
If you're like me, you have, or are yet to have, a similar story: you love reading transformation stories and became a deviant to write them. But are you ready to write one yet? Are you comfortable writing one? If not, then this guide will explain the necessary steps I, CrazyNaut, take when writing them. Soon, you will be a fluent TF writer too!
Part I: The Writing Process
First, we'll be taking a look at the skeleton of it all: the basic writing process. These are the basics of what you need to know about writing each story!
Step 1: Planning the Story
Before you write a TF story, or any story, you need to know what you want to do with it first.
First, you need to know who or what the subject will become. You start out by deciding:
Real or Fictional?
Human or Non-Human?
Animate
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She Hulk Transformation Tutorial
Tonight, we're gonna do something different. I'm gonna make a tutorial based on how to make a She-Hulk transformation work.
1. How to show a sign of change.
- Your model's irises would glow an emerald green color.
- The models eyes would widen.
- The models eyebrows would become bushy and black.
- The model would start to feel warm and sweat (the skin alteration would feel like an intense sunburn)
2. The change itself.
Body:
- The body of the model would become taller (at least by 2-3 ft.)
- The models entire muscle mass would increase to a size of a typical body builder.
Skin:
- As the model grows the skin changes from normal caucasian to pale to sickly yellow to military green
Hair:
- The hair can grow to any length you wish, only it must be close to her hips.
- The hair would change from blonde to dirty blonde to brown to greenish-black**
Face:
- The models teeth would become larger*
- The top of the models nose would scrunch up*
Nails:
- The nails would become a forrest green color
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Anatomy for TF Writers
AKA "Why knees should never 'reverse direction' in TFs. Ever."
Introduction
So. How many times have you read this exact sentence, or some variation of it, in a TF: "Bobby winced in pain, sickened by the loud 'crunch' of his bones as his knees turned backwards, and he fell to all fours, no longer able to stand"?
I'm guessing the answer is, as it is for me, 'too many to count'. Oftentimes, you find it in inexperienced works, but it's not the sole province of the amateur. You can also find it even in commercial transformation stories - KA Applegate, author of the Animorphs series, which got me and likely a lot of other people into TF, tries to work it in at least once a book, and it bugs me every time.
The main problem, and the reason it's so prolific, is that it makes sense. If you take a dog, or a cat, or a horse, or a bird, and you look at their hind legs, the first thing you'll probably notice is that they bend in the opposite direction of a human's. When a dog or bird lifts it
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Writing a Transformation Story.

        As defined by TV Tropes, "Transformation Fiction - a genre of fiction depicting a transformation or shapeshifting from one form or another."



        As defined by 
CrazyNaut, "transformation story (also known as tf story): a story in which a character physically and/or mentally becomes something different, and the change to that is detailed within the story."



        As defined by ZalaCambio, "Often abbreviated as 'TF,' [transformation art] focuses on changing a being from one species to another; most notably involving a human becoming an animal or mythical beast of sorts.
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Cliches - ''TF'' Stories
On Literature:
Most "TF" stories have a tendency to include the abbreviation "TF" somewhere in the title, in conjunction with what the transformee/victim is turning into.
Rarely will a TF story give much character development or expanded plot prior to the transformation.
Rarely will a transformation-themed story carry on beyond completion of the transformation.
In those that do (particularly short stories), the aftermath is typically brief in explanation, and often closed.
TF stories involving author-inserts are frequently derived from role-plays.
If present, TF stories tend to describe genitalia in:
deliberate 'kiddy' terms (i.e. manhood, woman-parts, member, etc); or
deliberate anatomical terms which seem out of place within the rest of the story.
This is especially common in transgender-themed TF stories.
On Settings:
The most common setting for a TF story is a generic non-descript locale.
if it is modern fantasy, it is usually Anytown, USA.
Transformations generally o
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Some helpful hints for Transfomation writers
Some helpful hints for Transformation writers
As a fan and novice transformation writer, I like to step back and really look at works I, or a friend have written and look a the closer detail of things (you could call it nitpicking in a way). But I also like to throw tips, tricks, what-to-do's and what-not-to-do's around in a critical way that's also constructive; One thing you want to do in transformation writing is include lots of detail right?
Wrong! But hear me out!
Yes, describe the setting, the transformation, the trigger and the character in detail. However, impertinent elements, such as how far the person walked down the lane, or the color if the neighbors bike, do not need to be thrown in. It's all about how much detail you use and where. Don't pour it all out at the transformation itself and skimp on the exposition, character or the aftermath.
Since the transformation is happening to a conscious being (duh), they will obviously sense it with all
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Spider-Woman 1 Cosplay Costume for G2F - G8F
Spider-Woman (Jessica Drew) Cosplay Costume for Genesis 2 Female(s), Genesis 3 Female(s). and Genesis 8 Female(s)

For Daz Studio and Poser! (Note: Poser support files require DSON importer to use.) Has been fully tested in Daz Studio.


This is a cosplay costume based on the outfit of the original Spider-Woman (Jessica Drew) and her original costume. Hope you all enjoy!


This costume includes 6 figures (1 bodysuit, 1 boots, 1 gloves, 1 wings, and 2 eyepieces), as well as material settings for both 3Delight and Iray.



If you want the original Spider-Woman to come strike evil into the villains of your renders, then please use the purchase button above and to the right. Otherwise, please donate $10 US dollars via the link below:

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I'll send you the download link as soon as I see the email confirmation of the donation. Though that might take longer if I happen to be asleep at the time, etc.


If you have any questions, please let me know.


I hope you will like this costume! 



Extra pics below:

Spider-Woman: On Patrol by OrionPax09  Spider-Woman: Stick The Landing by OrionPax09  Spider-Woman: Aerial Combat by OrionPax09  Spider-Woman (Jessica Drew) - What's Included? by OrionPax09  Spider-Woman (Jessica Drew) - Contents by OrionPax09  Spider-Woman (Jessica Drew) - Three Generations by OrionPax09

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She-Ra Cosplay Costume for G2F - G8F
She-Ra Cosplay Costume for Genesis 2 Female(s), Genesis 3 Female(s). and Genesis 8 Female(s)

For Daz Studio and Poser! (Note: Poser support files require DSON importer to use.) Has been fully tested in Daz Studio.


This is a cosplay costume based on the costume of the classic 1980's She-Ra series, but with some touch-ups. Hope you all enjoy!


This costume includes 6 figures (1 dress, 1 boots, 1 bracelets, 1 armbands, 1 cape, 1 tiara, and 1 sword), as well as material settings for both 3Delight and Iray.



If you want the classic She-Ra to show the forces of evil in your renders that she does indeed have the power, then please use the purchase button above and to the right. Otherwise, please donate $10 US dollars via the link below:

www.paypal.com/cgi-bin/webscr?…

I'll send you the download link as soon as I see the email confirmation of the donation. Though that might take longer if I happen to be asleep at the time, etc.


If you have any questions, please let me know.


I hope you will like this costume! 



Extra pics below:

She-Ra: A Peaceful Moment by OrionPax09  She-Ra: She Has The Power by OrionPax09  She-Ra: Wasteland by OrionPax09  She-Ra - What's Included? by OrionPax09  She-Ra - Contents by OrionPax09  She-Ra - Three Generations by OrionPax09

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The Captain and The Prince
A story idea I'm currently toying with around fits of inspiration. Hope you enjoy what I have so far.
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She-Ra - Three Generations
It took some doing, but I was able to make my She-Ra costume compatible with G2F, G3F, and G8F. I hope everyone enjoys.
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Wed Feb 27, 2019, 12:20 AM
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You know, with all of the grim out there, it's nice to see people in power doing something special for those in need. Thank you, James Cameron and everyone else who worked on Battle Angel Aelita to give some added hope to the world.



I mean, okay, I'm sure it makes for some good PR. But I'm willing to accept that if it means people who have suffered the loss of their limbs can have better lives.




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J4RRE77 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Hey bud. Uruz11 told me that he was recently involved in a car accident. He's not hurt except for the front of his car, but you might wanna be a sport and give him some encouragement in this troubling time for him.
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Happy belated birthday. And Christmas and New Year.

I owe you art for this. On top of the request for the two Vanguard girls.
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Are you gonna remake the superwomen of Eva?
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Thanks for the faves! La la la la Woot! Stay tuned as more fanart and brand new original content are coming up! Exciting times ahead!! :happybounce: :squee: OMG! I can't contain my excitement! :D (Big Grin)
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