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Julian And Juliette by Orhblin
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The butcher, the innkeeper and the huntsman. act 1
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Aye I lived there. It used to be a quiet town y'know. I worked at the local slaughterhouse; it was a fair paying job. It al started out like any other day, I had gotten meh hands on one them BIG ol' fit smelly pig, a real' swine I tell ya. People were crazy for getting their hands on it. I suppose the entire town came to meh home that morning HAH. I sold him to our local innkeeper, a fine man; he used to keep em' snukly strangers out of town. We don't want them pest to disturb our great peace. Though I always wondered how he kept business running when he rejected all the outsiders. But he was a man to be respected.
Later that day my working hunter came into meh empty store. He was a strong young lad, capable of pullin' his own weight. About to hit his 20's I guess. He came in shouting at me, telling that he hadn't gottn' his fair share of the pigs payoff. Foolish lad, when life gives you an opportunity ya gotta take it. and that's why I lowered his payme
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a stranger in ponyville Chapter 3
He dropped the note, 'I should be able to remember that.'  He thought to himself.
Stranger then turned his gaze on Twilight.  He looked at her as if she was some kind of object he had to deal with …like garbage. Not with hate or disgust, not with grief or irritation, more like as if she was some kind of a responsibility he couldn't let down.  He walked over to take a closer look at her; despite her troubled mane, she was a beautiful mare. The morning sun lit up her pony face trough the window; she looked so peaceful in the light, like nothing of this world would ever hurt her.  Stranger moved his hoof slowly trough her mane, even though it was twisted from all the missing sleep and the stress caused by her frustrations, it was still quite soft and neat.  Stranger was still putting on that serious face; he wasn't thinking about abusing her while she slept, he just wanted to feel her purple hair in his hoof.
'How did it come to this?
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a stranger in ponyville Chapter 2
It was almost Night now or at least it felt like night, it was very dark. Where had all the time gone? Only a few minutes ago the rain was just a little downpour and the sky was sort of bright but all of a sudden the slow rain had turned into a power storm and the sky was completely black as ink.  For now, Twilight and Stranger didn’t have time to think about the odd weather all they cared about was getting into shelter.
They both galloped towards the tree almost breaking down the door as they reached it.  “Well I did say I liked rain but I do have my limits.” Stranger said smiling, bad luck and bad weather didn’t seam to affect him much.
           Twilight on the other hoof was not in such a good mood. She was late on her studies, completely soaked, and she had to let a stranger live with her for who knows how long.  Rather, she didn’t need to, but she felt it was her duty.  Twilight closed the door and l
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a stranger in ponyville Chapter 1
this text is taken down because it was too embarrassing.  
sorry. but i couldn't let this stay on the internet publicly.
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i'm generally a future writer who still need to improve .... a lot

even though my primary goal on deviantART is literature i write Critiques, and enjoy it a like nothing else... with the exception of music, i think music is the one thing god truly have given us humans. i take critique requests so just ask me and i will happily bite you and your work no matter how good it is it cant be perfect, and i WILL find that thing and tease you with it for the rest of your life. i'm unknown for my fan fiction "A Stranger In Ponyville" but it will grow it will expand, and you are going to like it, whether you like it or not. i give hard critiques so don't expect me to be nice about it.

i think this is some stamps..... I'm not entirely sure.

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Saja-Lyn Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you so much for your fave :) (Smile)

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Orhblin Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Please don't have bots/prewritten messages sent to the people who favorite your art. It's a kind gesture, which I can appreciate, but it can at times fill up my inbox. 
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Saja-Lyn Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Sorry I didn't want you to cause any trouble!
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Orhblin Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Don't worry, I'm not about to cause trouble :V
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JerryKhor Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Hello?
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Orhblin Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Sup fella.
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JerryKhor Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Myself in real life:
-Real name: Jerry Khor Jiunn Lin
-Hair: Black
-Eye: Black
-Gender: Male
-Age: 17
-Country: Malaysia
So, your real life please? :)
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Orhblin Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Flaunting around with real information on the internet can be ill adviced. It's a cesspool of strangers. Sorry, but real information is kept between me and close acquaintances.  
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Amura-Of-Jupiter Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
I WANT YOUR TETH

SO I CAN PRAISE THE GOD OF GRASS
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