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Episode Seven | Internal Vision Arc | Femitokon
TCS Orcinus Ninety-East Ridge – Raxito`acarol 0300 Hours – Bamx 10, 2228 “Connie, I feel ridiculous hiding on my own ship,” the Promad tossed her axico onto the desk. Doctor Uym returned from her plateau dive twenty-minutes ago, Promad Kilvx. “That’s good,” Kilvx stood and pulled on her uniform jacket. “What’s the word on our shuttle?” Crew Two departed Orta fifty-eight minutes ago, Promad Kilvx. “Did they deliver the Ambassador without incident?” Yes, Promad Kilvx. Connie closed the door behind her when she departed. Entering the bridge, every Tenth and Eleventh-
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Episode Six | Tactical Pursuits Arc | Femitokon
*** The smear of blood along the length of the bulkhead prepared Velto for the trail of broken bodies that lead her to the Ornith. “Why are these men dead?” Velto asked. “They got handsy with my bird,” Sofita sat on the opening of Orny’s hatch. Her hands trembled as she struggled to slip a formed sheath over her finger. “What’re you doing with that pincher?” Velto demanded. “It’s a pheromone blocker,” Sofita snapped. “Ilo’s got my gash swollen, and my logic adjourned.” Velto snatched it from her, “Tilt your head, hizzah,” Sofita did as ordere
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Episode Five | Tactical Pursuits Arc | Femitokon
Atangapaxo, Yukat`wagidol Antarctica West Islands - 0230 hours Two in the morning found Koba Julo sitting in a human café feasting on baked crumb-coated bananas smothered in thick sour cream and brown sugar. She discovered the place the second week of her residency, after it became a gateway drug for her addiction to round dark-skinned ladies. Her favorite was Yevette Komba, a tall, stocky beauty whose coal-colored skin came alive under the bright light of the water-closet where she took Koba for clandestine sessions of oral sex. The petite girl behind the counter called out, “Do you need me to core you a pineapple before you
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Episode Four | Tactical Pursuits Arc | Femitokon
Cloister Hall, Utama Ramaxia - 1040 hours Communal urination was beneath Eppis, but at this age, holding her stream until she reached the familiarity of Level-Nine, was implausible. Eight gapirx extended up from the shiny tile floor and they might’ve passed as perfect replicas of the tall ice holes used by her ancestors, were they not anchored by a clunky ceramic base. Eppis bounded up to a porcelain saddle on the end, pulled aside her jacket-tail, and undid the enclosure below her gashcol. Mounting the high seat, she aligned her gurxil over its opening, and let loose a loud stream. The pressure on her bladder diminished, Eppis endu
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Episode Three | Suffocation Arc | Femitokon
ISO Station Vosk Vosk`tulak - Ramaxia Yubol (June) 5, 2228 - 0330 Hours The waters mentally taxed Sofita, sapping her will to build a mental wall. This water is loaded with mitokerotien. Ignoring the Shell, Sofita focused on the spider-like structure below. Its connection tubes branched out along the lakebed like ball-jointed arms. You need to stay hot here, don’t get comfortable for a second. Landing feet first onto the dome’s roof, Sofita crawled down its tharspin hull until she reached the bottom. The structure’s elevation allowed submersibles access to the base’s entry bay along its belly, and when the natura
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Episode Two | Suffocation Arc | Femitokon
(...) Disguised as a beach bum, Tara Whitley lingered among the farc pilots on liberty. Many of them had on the same uniform worn by Komadon Fusada Kul, that first and only time Tara ever saw her in Holy Cross. Tara had been fresh from her first week in the NAU Youth Corps when she spotted the muscular Komadon brazenly walking through town unmolested. The bullhead with a menacing shark tattoo on her scalp had somehow managed to secure entry, and Tara shadowed her to the shop of Mama Rogers. Morgana Rogers was an accomplished chocolatier in a time when cocoa beans were hard to find. After the Komadon left with a box of fresh milk chocola
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Episode One | Suffocation Arc | Femitokon
Kuril Base North – Primada Sector Raxuta`acarol (Pacific Ocean) Yubol (June) 1, 2228 0130 Hours Unlike the scores of other young men before him, the boy didn’t dive for a dark corner when she arrived, or collapse into a fetal ball, sobbing on the floor. Stepping over the threshold, Laxum found the heat stifling. Red-blooded helovx ran cold under the sea, and this boy persisted in turning the thermostat to its highest level. Setting down her bag, she moved her fingertips over the climate-control pad. “How are you today, Wu?” Laxum asked, in his native Hamgyong. Wu sat on the bench, entranced by the dark water outsi
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Character Profile: Velto Wram
Velto Wram (vel-tow | ram) is the owner and former Prime Chair of Wram Constructs now serving the Office of Helovx Advocacy as the Ambassador to the Slavic Empire. IMAGE LINK Velto Wram is a scheduled citizen of the Tenth Ramaxian Gen, design Bizak, born in 2185. Velto is the donation of Committee Member the Second, Lekada Wram. Velto's siblings are officer Zixas Wram, a Marix coded genetically to serve as the back-up Primary in Wait, killed during an Orta combat trial in 2224, and Zaxir Rez Polvix, owner of the Rezolution Citizen Bluzsh in Utama. Velto’s birther was also her mako, Ninth-Gen Subak Hal Wiv; Hal committed
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Atmospheric Shells and Domes
The benthic domes that house Ramaxia's major cities are grand in size to accommodate future generations. Those living inside take up a small portion of the dome's habitat sector. Those residing within do not see the structural makeup of the dome due to Atmospheric-Shell Technology. The AS technology incorporated inside the domes creates a habitat that camouflages its structure, maintains living conditions, and cycles weather patterns. An Atmospheric Shell maintains set temperatures, depending on the dome. In far eastern Orta the mean temperature is (...) Ramaxia Atmospheric Domes Major Ramaxian Cities Utama |&#160
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Citizenry Transit
Transportation in the domes and between the domes is available to the citizenry without cost by Ramaxian Citizenry Transport. Mass transit of citizens began in the era of the Second Ramaxian Gen, with the advent of the Rounder, and reached its zenith among the Fifth Gen, with the creation of a levitation transit train, called a SLIDE. (...) Ramaxian Transportation Operational | Individual Carrier Permission & the Channel Grid Ramaxian Citizenry Transit
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Episode Seven | Internal Vision Arc | Femitokon
TCS Orcinus Ninety-East Ridge – Raxito`acarol 0300 Hours – Bamx 10, 2228 “Connie, I feel ridiculous hiding on my own ship,” the Promad tossed her axico onto the desk. Doctor Uym returned from her plateau dive twenty-minutes ago, Promad Kilvx. “That’s good,” Kilvx stood and pulled on her uniform jacket. “What’s the word on our shuttle?” Crew Two departed Orta fifty-eight minutes ago, Promad Kilvx. “Did they deliver the Ambassador without incident?” Yes, Promad Kilvx. Connie closed the door behind her when she departed. Entering the bridge, every Tenth and Eleventh-
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Episode Six | Tactical Pursuits Arc | Femitokon
*** The smear of blood along the length of the bulkhead prepared Velto for the trail of broken bodies that lead her to the Ornith. “Why are these men dead?” Velto asked. “They got handsy with my bird,” Sofita sat on the opening of Orny’s hatch. Her hands trembled as she struggled to slip a formed sheath over her finger. “What’re you doing with that pincher?” Velto demanded. “It’s a pheromone blocker,” Sofita snapped. “Ilo’s got my gash swollen, and my logic adjourned.” Velto snatched it from her, “Tilt your head, hizzah,” Sofita did as ordere
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Episode Five | Tactical Pursuits Arc | Femitokon
Atangapaxo, Yukat`wagidol Antarctica West Islands - 0230 hours Two in the morning found Koba Julo sitting in a human café feasting on baked crumb-coated bananas smothered in thick sour cream and brown sugar. She discovered the place the second week of her residency, after it became a gateway drug for her addiction to round dark-skinned ladies. Her favorite was Yevette Komba, a tall, stocky beauty whose coal-colored skin came alive under the bright light of the water-closet where she took Koba for clandestine sessions of oral sex. The petite girl behind the counter called out, “Do you need me to core you a pineapple before you
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Episode Four | Tactical Pursuits Arc | Femitokon
Cloister Hall, Utama Ramaxia - 1040 hours Communal urination was beneath Eppis, but at this age, holding her stream until she reached the familiarity of Level-Nine, was implausible. Eight gapirx extended up from the shiny tile floor and they might’ve passed as perfect replicas of the tall ice holes used by her ancestors, were they not anchored by a clunky ceramic base. Eppis bounded up to a porcelain saddle on the end, pulled aside her jacket-tail, and undid the enclosure below her gashcol. Mounting the high seat, she aligned her gurxil over its opening, and let loose a loud stream. The pressure on her bladder diminished, Eppis endu
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Episode Three | Suffocation Arc | Femitokon
ISO Station Vosk Vosk`tulak - Ramaxia Yubol (June) 5, 2228 - 0330 Hours The waters mentally taxed Sofita, sapping her will to build a mental wall. This water is loaded with mitokerotien. Ignoring the Shell, Sofita focused on the spider-like structure below. Its connection tubes branched out along the lakebed like ball-jointed arms. You need to stay hot here, don’t get comfortable for a second. Landing feet first onto the dome’s roof, Sofita crawled down its tharspin hull until she reached the bottom. The structure’s elevation allowed submersibles access to the base’s entry bay along its belly, and when the natura
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Episode Two | Suffocation Arc | Femitokon
(...) Disguised as a beach bum, Tara Whitley lingered among the farc pilots on liberty. Many of them had on the same uniform worn by Komadon Fusada Kul, that first and only time Tara ever saw her in Holy Cross. Tara had been fresh from her first week in the NAU Youth Corps when she spotted the muscular Komadon brazenly walking through town unmolested. The bullhead with a menacing shark tattoo on her scalp had somehow managed to secure entry, and Tara shadowed her to the shop of Mama Rogers. Morgana Rogers was an accomplished chocolatier in a time when cocoa beans were hard to find. After the Komadon left with a box of fresh milk chocola
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Episode One | Suffocation Arc | Femitokon
Kuril Base North – Primada Sector Raxuta`acarol (Pacific Ocean) Yubol (June) 1, 2228 0130 Hours Unlike the scores of other young men before him, the boy didn’t dive for a dark corner when she arrived, or collapse into a fetal ball, sobbing on the floor. Stepping over the threshold, Laxum found the heat stifling. Red-blooded helovx ran cold under the sea, and this boy persisted in turning the thermostat to its highest level. Setting down her bag, she moved her fingertips over the climate-control pad. “How are you today, Wu?” Laxum asked, in his native Hamgyong. Wu sat on the bench, entranced by the dark water outsi
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The Cloisax`Ramax
The Cloisax`Ramax is a two-body system overseen by a third, with an hereditary oligarchy controlling national interests, and chosen officials representing the citizenry. The Ruling Platform consists of a Primary and her Committee of Five; they share power with the Citizenry-Chamber, a group of region-specific representative's democratically elected from each of Ramaxia's cities. These two sides convene every ninety days in the Cloister, located in central Utama, where the Sernatae oversees the parliamentary procedure. For the Ruling Platform, a generational line of hereditary succession must be designated by Femtrux to be recognized by the
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