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Wig design especially for cyberloxx.de by Miss Overdose (www.miss-overdose.com) ♥
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Please add my facebook page for news, recent informations and private pictures [link] Model, make-up, styling, retouch:
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Normally I love your work because of all the usage of color. But the lack of it here seems to be what gives it it's beauty. The first thing I noticed was your face. It just looks no natural and in that there is nothing more stunning. On the surface this piece seems so simplistic but after taking the time to look at it I see more complexity. Very great work.
This is so beautiful!
My critique:
The reflection of your body, on the floor just brings this image to life! It adds a more life-like feel, that is just so amazing. I love the fact that your re technically nude, but did not reach the point of complete nakedness, which, to me makes it much more likeable...The soft face is just gorgeous! The fact that it is soft gives it a much more seductive nature, that draws me in, making me want more. The big tube-like curls are amazing, and placed well over your body...The only thing I would change about the hair, is the fact it goes so noticeably between your legs...I would relax it some...Though, I understand with a wig like that it would be hard to relax it, and still make it cover you up. The hints of gold on the silvery white tones give it a very dream-like feel to it, which is so soft and angelic.
The placement of your right foot does feel somewhat off to me; the way it is turned looks uncomfortable to me, and could be placed in a different way to make it look more natural.
I do really like your shoes, and I do like the way it looks on the silvery/white, but I probably would have gone with full gold, or silver...But, gold would just make it pop out more. The leopard print seems a little cheep on this picture. This has a very victorian feel to me, and I would have gone with a more sleek gold, or pale silver.
This is overall a wonderful piece! Nothing truly bad could be said about it...I love it
My critique:
The reflection of your body, on the floor just brings this image to life! It adds a more life-like feel, that is just so amazing. I love the fact that your re technically nude, but did not reach the point of complete nakedness, which, to me makes it much more likeable...The soft face is just gorgeous! The fact that it is soft gives it a much more seductive nature, that draws me in, making me want more. The big tube-like curls are amazing, and placed well over your body...The only thing I would change about the hair, is the fact it goes so noticeably between your legs...I would relax it some...Though, I understand with a wig like that it would be hard to relax it, and still make it cover you up. The hints of gold on the silvery white tones give it a very dream-like feel to it, which is so soft and angelic.
The placement of your right foot does feel somewhat off to me; the way it is turned looks uncomfortable to me, and could be placed in a different way to make it look more natural.
I do really like your shoes, and I do like the way it looks on the silvery/white, but I probably would have gone with full gold, or silver...But, gold would just make it pop out more. The leopard print seems a little cheep on this picture. This has a very victorian feel to me, and I would have gone with a more sleek gold, or pale silver.
This is overall a wonderful piece! Nothing truly bad could be said about it...I love it
I love the Styrofoam look of the your hair piece and how strategically it covers everything. I do not care for the leopard print shoes. I think the print detracts from the rest of the image. Something similar to the honey-brown in yoru hair would have worked better.
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I know you're going to hate me for this, but you have asked for critiques so I'm going to use that as my excuse ^^
I don't think your face stands out enough in this photograph. I keep waiting to see you do something risky with your expressions; you do have a beautiful face but you don't tend to try new expressions in pictures. Your expression is very safe--and please don't take that the wrong way, DA loves you, we all love you, take this as a challenge to try something risky (cus Zeus knows you are willing to be risky
). Your fans will still be here with you. We wouldn't leave even if you tried something and it was horrible--but I don't see how that could possibly happen to you, you are too pretty and too talented for that. <3
I don't think your face stands out enough in this photograph. I keep waiting to see you do something risky with your expressions; you do have a beautiful face but you don't tend to try new expressions in pictures. Your expression is very safe--and please don't take that the wrong way, DA loves you, we all love you, take this as a challenge to try something risky (cus Zeus knows you are willing to be risky
). Your fans will still be here with you. We wouldn't leave even if you tried something and it was horrible--but I don't see how that could possibly happen to you, you are too pretty and too talented for that. <3
Du im hellen Licht, Dein Blick, Deine Figur und die Spiegelung gefällt mir total. Besonders wunderschön auch deine Haarfarbe oben und die Cyberlox stehen Dir.
Let's see, you also wanted some critique on this so I'll try and have a go Let's start with perfecting. Most importantly you could have opened your beautiful eyes juuust a little bit more and the curls (or what they are called) going between your legs could have been a bit more relaxed. Right foot more relaxed. The yellow hair closest to your scalp is looking too fake though =/ Would have preferred something more in the lines of the curls, both in colour and material. And now for the good part 
The body position is really good! I can not stress this enough. It shows off your curves and you seem relaxed with your back, head not too far back because we like to see some neck Left foot in the air brings life to the picture and the mouth, even though open, gives a more sensual feeling to it. Great colours of course and other than that I don't know what to say. All in all 9/10 Hope my opinions can come to some good
Let's start with perfecting. Most importantly you could have opened your beautiful eyes juuust a little bit more and the curls (or what they are called) going between your legs could have been a bit more relaxed. Right foot more relaxed. The yellow hair closest to your scalp is looking too fake though =/ Would have preferred something more in the lines of the curls, both in colour and material. And now for the good part The body position is really good! I can not stress this enough. It shows off your curves and you seem relaxed with your back, head not too far back because we like to see some neck Left foot in the air brings life to the picture and the mouth, even though open, gives a more sensual feeling to it. Great colours of course and other than that I don't know what to say. All in all 9/10 Hope my opinions can come to some good 
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