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Eclipse by Ophelia-Overdose Eclipse by Ophelia-Overdose
Photographer: :iconhart-worx:

Model, make-up, styling, editor: myself

Corset: amf korsets

~ Wig is self-made ~
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:icondestroyinc:
Allrighty, hopefully I can do this and it all make sense. First of all, this is a good photo. Your costume, makeup hair, pose are all great. You never fail in that department. The photography is great also. Lit well, and interesting.

My honest feedback is that the touch-ups are killing the full impact of the photo. This was shot on a grey/dark background right? I use the technique in the photo ALOT in my work, and here it's not complete. Just a simple scene laid in the back, that's faded and funny looking. Its flat and makes you not feel a part of the scene. They grey background technique works really well for flat textures, like a wall or something. 3D scenes are much tougher. Not impossible, just here it looks fake. The BG needs to have more contrast and not so flat. Your well lit enough where it could be darkened/contrasted more and you will see look great.

You can see better result in the most recent photo of this series. The cracks look more interesting, and feel better in the photo.

I hope i'm helping out and its fair. Your as amazing as always, and the photo is well done, its just that background o_O

<3 Jesse of Destroy Inc
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:iconalembic-lynx:
Alembic-Lynx Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional Photographer
sheer beauty incredible
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:iconseawaterwitch:
seawaterwitch Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011
Hera Goddess, so beautiful :)
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:iconinsanitysqueen:
InsanitysQueen Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2011   Writer
Really like the colors in this one
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:iconsigurlin:
sigurlin Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
love the make up ! <3
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:iconinnave:
innave Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
this should be in HQ! :)
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:iconmackstudios:
mackstudios Featured By Owner May 23, 2010
Beautiful!
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:iconjb155:
jb155 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Your photos are...magnificent! Very nice job!
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:iconazulempire:
AzulEmpire Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010
Amazing. :)
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:iconknytcrawlr:
knytcrawlr Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful shot, great concept, dig what you did with the background.
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:iconmyneweyes:
Myneweyes Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
wooow! I want this marvellous corsett!!!
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:iconrobertogamez:
RobertoGamez Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010
I really like your legs
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:iconfrankebailey:
FrankEBailey Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010
This is BEAUTIFUL!
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:iconsyershasfeets:
syersHasFEETS Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2009
You are such an amazingly beautiful and talented model that it really hurts me to see you photoshop your work like this. Your abilities in posing and use of angles are amazing, your makeup and costuming is superb and you're certainly gorgeous enough to not need any severe photoshop.

I'm a huge fan of your work, but photoshopped bodies kind of make me sad. I miss the love and appreciation artist's have always had for the natural human body.
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:iconhykariki-mod:
Hykariki-mod Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2009
Is that you in the picture?
Your Gorgeous :)
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:iconrabidus-lepus:
Rabidus-Lepus Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009
Compared to Holy Flesh, I don't like this one as much. I still love the outfit and hair style but this hair looks better down instead of done up.

Additionally the background does not jive well with your pose and therefore you look like you're trying not to fall over. After further looking at the picture it appears to me that perhaps it's the hair that is making you look top heavy.

Either way, the outfits and your make-up are still phenomenal.
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:iconobsessedweirdo:
ObsessedWeirdo Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009
this is my fav colour combination - green and violet =) great shot btw, as always =) I was just wondering, with no sign of offence, do they use too much of retouch on you? or do you have naturally that nice face and body?
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:iconvampidor:
VAMPIdor Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2009
великолепно!
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:iconwirlgirl88:
wirlgirl88 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009
I love this, the colours areperfect together, and I'm recenty slightly obsessed with peacock feathers, so this works for me :) I do think that you could maybe have made the fabulous colours stand out more, but I wouldn't be sure quite how to do it myself, so I think that is wonderful :)
x
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:iconmllrg973:
Mllrg973 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009
Beautiful work, Ophelia!!! :hug: Love it! ;)
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:iconcamelottorose:
CamelottoRose Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lovely.
There's something about your right arm that makes it blend in with the background and is sorta 2D-ish... don't know if that makes sense ^^;
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:iconmegchristinem:
MegChristineM Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
perfect
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:iconmuskeg:
Muskeg Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009   Photographer
What wonderful colors, and you look stunning!
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:iconmebob:
Mebob Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009  Professional Photographer
Love the pose and colours ^_^
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:iconfreakwithissues007:
Freakwithissues007 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
Wow, lovely use of color :D I love the use of peacock feathers in your hair
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:iconmutsumipat:
Mutsumipat Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009   Digital Artist
It's very beautiful! MM but the background is too dark. It's a very strange contrast between the background and the girl.
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:iconxxgreenzebragorexx:
xXGreenZebraGoreXx Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool colors. I love the peacock feathers. ^.^
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:iconpurehazard:
PureHazard Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
really ,awesome i love the colors
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:iconrubymu:
RubyMu Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009   Photographer
Weird.. Gorgeous :)
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:iconhalifander:
halifander Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
this is really a great piece of art

very cool how you made and designed all that......

that is whats cool about it
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:iconmag1nho:
mag1nho Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
Deine Bilder und Outfits sind einfach fantastisch - auch in diesem Fall.
Allerdings find ich den gebastelten Hintergrund nicht so gelungen.
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:icongoofgirl:
Goofgirl Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
You have absolutely gorgeous photos, clothing, wigs. You are the perfect model. Do you ever travel here to the states?
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:iconads92:
ads92 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
wow, amazing job! love the wig!
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:iconthezombiequeen:
TheZombieQueen Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
i love this...everything!.. from the clothing colours to the background's tiles.
yay!
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:icongirltripped:
girltripped Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
So in love with this wardrobe
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:iconerylisiane:
erylisiane Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well as an other deviant has wroten ... woaw ^^ all the clothes are perfects but maybe the background is a little empty ... less structurated than you .. but that makes you more impressive more "first impression clear" so it could more a good choice to make figure be the only important thing in this pic ... anyway : good job!
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:iconpastorxxx:
PastorXXX Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
great work
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:iconomrikoresh:
OmriKoresh Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009  Professional General Artist
nice but i really hated the background.
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:iconkliwe:
Kliwe Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
sehr cool!
sieht ein bisschen so aus, als hättest du deinen *hübschen* kopf auf ein 3D-model kopiert <3
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:iconreapersgal13:
ReapersGal13 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
The colors of that outfit are amazing! :love:
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:iconwanderlouve:
Wanderlouve Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
*_* perfect clothes!
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:iconshirke:
shirke Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
amazing photo ...and i want that corset
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:iconspiritnip:
Spiritnip Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
love the outfit. you are stunning as usual.
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:iconpoof-foop:
Poof-fooP Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
I love this! I really do :) I agree with Pride85 and a few others that say the colour scheme is AMAZING!

One thing I don't like about it (the only thing haha) is that you look a bit photoshopped in. Like the lighting on you doesnt fit the lighting in the background, if you get what I mean :)

Other than that, this is perfection! Very creative and well thought out wig hehe ^^
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:iconsoilworker-82:
SOilWOrkeR-82 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
curste na dhair style are ABSOLUTELY cuuuuuuuuute :hug:
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:iconzanna2100:
zanna2100 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
your waist looks unrealistically small, therefore making your arm look larger than it actually is. the colors all tie in very well. the wig matches the outfit colorwise but not by style. the outfit is more warrior-style while the wig and headdress is kind of goddess-like. the picture makes me think of an aggitated caged animal. the image at a general glance is pleasing though
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:iconclaudiasutton:
ClaudiaSutton Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
Lovely work. I'm sure you get asked this all the time, but what makeup products do you use?

:floating:
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:iconreilune:
Reilune Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009  Professional General Artist
That's damn sexy!
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:iconalmark15:
almark15 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
again, wer do u get all these customes? their fabulous, i swear, if i had a body like u i would do the same thing
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:iconrenninja:
RenNinja Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009   Photographer
You are absolutely gorgeous!!
<3
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:iconinodrev:
Inodrev Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009  Student General Artist
The girl is gorgeous, but I fine that since the background looks so flat (probably because its a picture, its fake. It kind of clashes with her. I dont know. looks kinda odd to me.
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