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SPIKE - chapter 15 by oomizuao SPIKE - chapter 15 by oomizuao
chapter 15!
Because even though this one is quite the cliffhanger, I think it's less so than the previous chapter, and it just feels more right to stop at chapter 15 than 14..

And no, this isn't the end of the novel. I have more chapters, I just won't post them because I'm afraid someone will steal my novel. ^^;


And thanks a lot to all of my lovely readers! :') much love to you all!
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chatleylslayer Featured By Owner May 8, 2018  Student Artist
You should print this novel when it is finished
I'd love to buy a coppy
Aquaraven9686 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 7, 2018
can you at least tell us what happens i've tried to piece it together i'm pretty sure spike is with his uncle for a while then books it
and meets Ray in some other city then the fall in love?
Aquaraven9686 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2018
Rooskie360 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2018
Is there any way to read the rest of the novel? I just finished the final chapter here and I'm in a show hole!!!
HaleWolfie Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Where can i read the rest of the story? I really wanna cry because i can't handle the pain of not knowing what will happen next.

Please I need to know!
ShadowFlight27 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Please let me know when you get this printed, I wanna know what happens this is so good!!!!
DragonRider4899 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2017  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
PLZ WRITE MORE THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!! plus i don't like cliffhangers. spike reminds me a little bit of myself only no abusive uncle.
Aikalynn Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2017
I'm honestly at a loss for words. This story and the characters in it have touched so many people in so many ways. I've been lost in it all since I first discovered it. You must've heard so many compliments and received lots of love and support already, so I doubt mine will make any difference. But, I still give it to you. It must be quite difficult or stressful at times to have such pressure from providing something so beautiful. But for everything you've made so far, we cannot thank you enough! :aww: 
JeffDawsel Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
III NEED MOOORREEE!!! i hat ecliff hangars :(
Jax-the-great Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great work I'm so hooked on this story keep it up!:) (Smile) :happybounce: 
Miah-999 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't wait to read your published work! You are inspiring me to finish one that I have been struggling with to put on paper for a while! Keep on going, we are all cheering you on!Clap 
friesbro Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I NEED to read more. Where can i read more? Come on, its 3:30 in the morning, ive been reading all night
ImmaGoddamPony Featured By Owner May 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohhhhhh no fair!!!!!!! This is so good, I know it's old, but come on... please tell me there's more.. or it's at least a published novel that can be bought  >.<
GriffinTheWolff Featured By Owner May 4, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love this novel so much. Does anyone recommend something similar to this that I can read until the next chapter is posted?
AFanOfStuff Featured By Owner May 4, 2017
so will the rest be posted in November?
Nikitycz Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2017
Well, I'm reading your novel twice, first when i was 14 years old and second time just now.  And I want tell You, your story bring me a tears still very well. Good job and thanks for a whole your work!  I'm waiting to buy your book and other "Spike stuff" when you end.

Regards from Poland,
Adam, your fan since 2012

P.S: Sorry for my badly english.
P.S: I've hope to happy ending for Sam.
QuietWind1 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2017
If you aren't going to post them, what will you do with them? We would all like to see more, please post more! :)
QuietWind1 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2017
I want more, I need more, please post more!!!

Please, this is so touching...
FangsTheFox Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wait, so you're still making the novel, just not posting it? Even if you finish, will you post it? Because this novel is really good!
Canine--Artist Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is there any place to read the rest/buy novel??? I must know!!!Kitty begging 
JenniFeary Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw man! Is there anyway to read the rest? Is there somewhere to buy the novel or something? I must know what happens next!X_X
Midnight-Blaze1 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Keep us posted!!!! I need to read more!
catbug-meow-JELLY Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
nooooooooooooo cliffhanger!!!!!!!! plz post!!!!!
MissSakura-Senpai Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2016
Wait what? So we will never find out what happens???!!! Why not publish the story that way people can't steal it and so readers can finish it. Seeing the this was posted 6 years ago that will never happen and we will never find out what happens next.
Zipotricks Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2016
Wasnt the yet released parts of the novel till page 16? Or am i messing up things?
oomizuao Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2016
There are 16 posted chapters including Chapters 0 to 15 :)
Zipotricks Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016
Well, makes sense.
I just had in mind it goes up till 16.
Blackmist-tailess Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2016
I'm crying now ! Plus, the song "Wish that you were here", that I was listening just fit with this chapter. Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! 
Tvorsky Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Oh my god, my heart is gonna explode!
The novel is awesome, I can hardly wait to read
the other chapters. Pleaseee, I need to know what 
will happen ;w;/.
XxProzanxX Featured By Owner Edited Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I am not active on Deviantart anymore, but I log on every now and again JUST to check on this novel. I first read it in 2013 and was captivated. I have fallen in love with your OC's and literally cannot wait for the novel to be fully published. You are an inspiration. Keep up the fantastic work. 
CaliJonas650 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016
is there a next chapter becuz i really want to read it :D (Big Grin) 
WolfLordJake Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Are you ever going to publish this book so it can go on amazon one day? and that graphic novel you were working on will you publish that as well?
F0xWr1tter Featured By Owner Edited Jul 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Love your story can't wait to see more :)
F0xWr1tter Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
P.s: sorry for the previous comment I didnt knew you were still writing I tought you had given up xD. Well can't wait to know how the story goes :)
M0UNTAINSIDE Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist

I'll pay any amount for the finished novel, hope you tell when  out! ^^
Dinoal188 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was a great 15 chapters! can't wait for the Novel to come out!
Blackmist-tailess Featured By Owner May 29, 2016
red-mohawk Featured By Owner May 25, 2016  Student General Artist
Are you going to redo the hospital scene? It has a few flaws. Like the fact he managed to get out without being detected.
OliverRouge Featured By Owner May 17, 2016
I just stayed up till 1 in the morning ON A SCHOOL NIGHT to read this, and it ends like THIS?!?!?!!??! I will pay $100 for this book if you will PLEASE publish a book on this!!!! I'M DYING!!!! You can save a furry life if you publish a finished version of this novel!!!
ForestGH123 Featured By Owner May 4, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
is there some where we can find it plz im not here to steal it is just so good i need to know what happens next 
CoolStarRigel141102 Featured By Owner May 2, 2016
You are a great, very great, best writer ever. You have great talents, really. And also I love your novel. It really has strong emotions in it. Keep up the good work!

(And also, please post more of the chapters. I want to know what happens at the ending.)
RemedysMelody109 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 7, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG That was amazing! I love it! especially the twist he commited murder, that was interesting
RWBY42 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
furshadowhusk Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2016
Please, please, please continue... I'm literally begging for you to post more, this caught my eyes and heart so strongly. And in a way I can relate to the the novel, and I want more because... god I don't know, I need therapy now...
WolfSlayer175 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016
your killing me, i need to know what happens!
Skye227 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ummm, how long do you think it will be before you get this published? This cliffhanger is killing me......
NoticeForEnemies Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2016
Your novel gave me so much mixed feelings, I really want to know more. Do as you want, I'm a patient guy (a patient guy who need a therapy right now, after reading all of that ^_^) and I wish you to release your book when finished, because it is a beautiful (and sad) story and you're a good author. Your story is hurting me so much I think I haven't lunch on the last 48h but I don't care, I'm worried about Sam and Spike.

Good luck to you, and thank you for that story.
papajack1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
You are an amazing writer. Really, truly, talented. And I really enjoy this book. I hope you publish soon so we can see the rest.

Damn, how long have you been practicing your writing?
Emocracy Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
So we may never see the last chapter D:
M3MBluewolf Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015  Student Photographer
At 1st I was like no just no... but it's true, if someone told me this was a true story I would believe them. It's a sick world. With this it's a real eye opener an the love I feel from the characters, and the story writing is writing is absolutely amazing. It kept me going, It raises the bar every chapter. Therefore very, very awesome work. I hope I, with so many here see more of this story line.
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