I saw a lot of art with Daniel, but your's variant is the best. It's my IHMO, of course)))
Still, Clothes, face, hairstyle is correct for that period. Also, dark atmosphere and Bro (PewDiePie's name for grunt) on background.
What about emotions: there are a few people, who can draw fear and deduction together. Daniel on your work is scared, still, he is going to find Alexander. Not so many, who gives attention to eyes and face, especially to micro emotions.
But, I like the most is the correct emotion. Not female histerical fear, but a man fear, when he goes over himself and go further to dark.