This is fantastic work and she looks as lovely as ever, and I'm lad you didn't hold back on the scars. It's kinda annoying seeing so many depictions of Hanako with reduced and/or concealed scaring; it's part of who she is and who she is is beautiful.
Just finished Hanako's good ending, cant say i wanna bring myself to read the rest of the games story arcs, im quite satisfied with this story! Good art by the way! ^_^