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August 12, 2014
The suggester says: "Stellar sense of lighting. Fantastic job with a simple composition, so the eye moves steadily through the picture."

Jonah's Torment by OmriKoresh
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Suggested by neurotype
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Jonah's Torment

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Jonah in the belly of the beast (:

100x150cm (47x59 inch)
Oil on canvas

i hope you like! (:

Repunzle by OmriKoresh Sleeping Beauty by OmriKoresh Beauty and the beast by OmriKoresh Ariels by OmriKoresh Litchi Girl by OmriKoresh The Pied Piper by OmriKoresh 
Image details
Image size
1003x1500px 1.13 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 30D
Shutter Speed
1/5 second
Aperture
F/6.3
Focal Length
34 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jul 23, 2014, 5:09:49 AM
Sensor Size
6mm
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Comments30
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SilensPatronus's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Overall, I think this piece is fantastic. I like that you use a man as the subject, since (as others have said) men aren't often portrayed in art in this way. Your eye for detail is incredible and use of textures in the stones, body hair, and flowing liquid are all very well done.

My only real critique is that there are two points where the body proportions seem a little off (and these are made obvious because the rest of the piece is so good).
-The first is his left shoulder, which seems too far from his neck/torso to have the rounded look you give it. Either the shoulder itself needs to be closer to the body or farther back into the liquid, or the shoulder socket/ joint (and resultant deltoid muscle) needs to be moved further up the arm into position.
-The second oddity is his left foot, which appears either swollen or awkwardly foreshortened. In its given angle, the heel of the foot would either be under the liquid or obscured by the foot in front of it and it looks as though you tried to include more than should be visible. The same is said for the fleshy 'ball' of the foot which should continue in a steady slope toward the back of the foot (out of sight).

Other than these two minor issues, great job.
Kero33's avatar
it is really  fabulous . God bless u . 
saveworld's avatar
Excellent work..
nikkita91's avatar
The whole image flows together beautifully, great job.
leiyue's avatar
Congratulations on the DD! :love: 

Have a nice day :iconlainloveplz:
Tenshi-no-Kanashimi's avatar
This is fantastic! So much emotion and movement, emotion in motion?
pearwood's avatar
In the depths of the sea.  Beautiful.
AgonizingSwordfish's avatar
Congrats on the DD! :)
kopljar's avatar
Very expressive! I love the body position and the way the water compliments him.
TheWeeLad's avatar
this is quite good
Xumaeris's avatar
HOLY F*** ..What?

your facebook fan page, here i come
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blanket86's avatar
Very interesting and beautiful work! Great conception. Congratulations! :-) (Smile)
TheGalleryOfEve's avatar
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
I’m very happy for you!!! :iconloveloveplz: :tighthug:
OmriKoresh's avatar
read first.
then read what you wrote.
that's my response.
KevinTinholt's avatar
Ooh it's traditional. Never mind, you have my respect.
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zJoriz's avatar
Traditional art?? HOW?? :jawdrop:
Looks more than just pro. Amazing work.
pufflemon's avatar
that water is outstanding 
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