Honestly you kinda came outta nowhere with this and I got limited knowledge with the character. Usually its common courtesy to introduce yourself first. That said, I do like your set here. I'm guessing this is the one from Sennan Kagura. Maybe include that in the description.
Also, don't go asking for quotes too much. While I am open to giving suggestions I'm kind of confident you can do them yourself. I mean everyone seems to rely on me ENTIRELY for the Sonic quotes rather than filling them out on their own. It kinda gets old. If its not too much a problem, can you at least give it a shot on your own? I mean I provide enough with characterizations from my movesets and I can assume you're a fan of the Sonic franchise.
Anyways, let me know if you're able to do it yourself or not. I for one have faith in your writing ability given what I see here. I would recommend lines with Blaze and Espio at the top of my head. Again my knowledge of Yumi's series is limited.
Thanks. I'll keep that in mind. Making my rounds towards the direction of my local comic store lately.