Ah, back to basics. I like these. Your sketches are always so expressive. He looks tired but not broody here. One day I will play Inquisition and get to know him better.
I often find that you don't need a zillion details or smooth blending to get the essence of the image across. What is important for me is to know what the person is thinking or feeling at just this moments. The one's when I don't are usually my worst.