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By Olidood
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So I'm very much alive and from this moment forth, my balloon of inactiveness has popped, dispersing into its surrounding area (ready to return and form a new balloon like probably right after I post this).

Okay so college has been busy but great, I have all these new fantastic great friends, and my Creative Writing classes are great. As work for one of these lessons, I had to experiment with a new form. I'd never done a cinquain before, so I did one of those. That ended up being just the 5 lines of the final version, which arguably could be better than the final product. It was developed into this after my teacher encouraged me to experiment more.

I understand the second half of it's probably hard to read. Just like the truth, huh?
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Deep self reflection. So much you get locked inside of yourself. Like over-analysing? That is how I read it right now, but of course many more interpretations are possible.