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This is Issue 4: Inside the Med-Lab --16 pages
in this issue, there is pregnancy, gummi tf, boob expansion, a little more bimbo, the age-regressed girl has an appearance, and so does the giant butt girl, there is also stripping.

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:iconwiseman288:
Wiseman288 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2016
Such a great story! I'm actually a little sad it's ending, but I still have other stuff to look forward too :3
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Warl381 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2016
This was easily my second favorite issue so far! Not just because of the gummi tf but because of who it happened to, drastic changes in people that didn't deserve it or got it because they were trying to solve the problem always makes a story more interesting to follow. I greatly look forward to the fifth issue and anticipate it to be just as good if not better. 
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xavierwhite Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2016
Great stuff! Can't wait for the finale!
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Sonicrailin Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This story just gets wilder and more intriguing by the moment!  Can't wait to see what the ice cream machine does!  And I also can't wait to see what Wendy has planned for the two weasels among her guests!
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Nemo3313 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love this; can't wait to read more.
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bbjohn1976 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
I don't know. I liked this one more than 3, but I think the cliffhanger is sort of a negative for me. especially if 5 is going to be the final issue. That leaves 3 others, plus the one in peril now, and I guess I would have preferred it without the cliffhanger. I really hope the next issue isn't the last, if only because i'm worried the stuff might be a bit crammed in there in only 16 pages. 

Still, this is a better issue that 3. Not as good as the first two I think, but not bad. 

I'm just hoping that 5 is either longer, or isn't the end. 
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okayokayokok Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2016
Basically, it was a challenge to know how to handle the end of this issue. I discussed the ending of this comic with B-ridge too to get a second opinion. I think we ended up choosing the best way to end it and that should show with the next issue. It'll be a climactic ending for the series and a full issue from the start. 
I am sorry to have a cliffhanger like that. It's not what I originally wanted, and was weighing several options after laying out all the pages. One option was to cut the gummi bear tf and just have her get pregnant, one was to cut the comic short a few pages earlier and not have that final scene at all and make the next issue 2 issues, and the other option was the cliffhanger. This option allows for a good buildup that's not rushed and a tf that is not rushed in the next issue. I do have some writing to do for the next issue's script as the original script had this ice cream scene taken care of in 4-5 pages i think which turns out is too short to do it justice. And I want to think over the ending awhile to make it the best it can be. I want to make sure everyone's end scenes are included in the best way possible.
It's entirely possible that the next issue could end up becoming two since I haven't gone into it carefully and laid out pages yet and the end scenes aren't really described/ written in yet. 
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juan1234125 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2016
oh! i hope in the end we could see all of the getting out of the factory for example the girl who eated all those mini pies seeing her after she had digested all those pies and the girl in the chocolate funnel seeing them getting out like in the en of willi wonka movie :3 it is just an opinion if you want bye
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bbjohn1976 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2016
Well, I know that if you decided to do 6 rather than 5, I'd still buy it, and I think a lot of other people would as well. Given that it's a matter of time, manpower hours, and work, I can imagine the idea of more work isn't exactly appealing. 

That said, I am certain that whatever you do will be, in your mind, the best thing to have been done, and will only be done after careful planning. 

I will also say that part of the reason I was a bit unhappy with the cliffhanger is the space in between issues; given what you have on your plate in terms of commissions and other comics, I suppose it's just hard to really be happy with that given how long it will be till the next issue. 

That said, I'm certainly not unhappy with the issue as a whole; it's a good issue as I said. It just leaves me sort of wanting for more given the fact that it ended abruptly as it were. 

Though again, I think that whatever you decide to do will be for the best. If you do decide to do two issues, that would basically leave the final issue as the ending that you wanted. Though as I also said, whatever you decide to do will be fine, given that I and many others will buy it anyway. So no worries there. 
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Pozzia Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016
"the reason I was a bit unhappy with the cliffhanger is the space in between issues"

Dude, tell that to those of us that having been waiting for Sanderson Step Sisters... that's on like, 1 or 2 issues a year at this point...
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b-ridge Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2016
Oh man, believe me when I say I'm right there with you. The suspense between issues is going to KILL me.

That said, I wholeheartedly think that okayokayokok made the right call here. Splitting issue three into 2 issues left a bit of space in this one, but not enough to be filled with an entire sequence unless he drastically cut down the gummi bear tf (making it solely a pregnancy sequence). Instead of doing that, he decided to run the gummi transformation in its complete glory, and then include all the buildup to issue 5's tf, which will allow for issue 5 to really take the time it needs to focus on the good stuff, since it will hit the ground running. I'd actually say that this feels more like a "comic book" ending than some of the past issues, with everything set up so that the reader knows exactly what to look forward to at the start of the next issue.

Again, I totally get that the cliffhanger is frustrating because of the wait (he's done great cliffhangers before, like in Apocalyptic/Size of the Blueberry, and Sanderson Step Sisters, only with less wait in between), but I think that once all the issues are out, you'll see that it was the best decision, and the story as a whole is going to be a LOT stronger because of it.
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darkdonny Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2016
Really glad the Gummi tf made it in. it really makes this issue special. (and I clearly have an affinity for gummi tfs)
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omijae Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2016
I think I would've liked it more with regular pregnancy instead of the gummy bear transformation stuff. I feel like her being pregnant with an actual human (or two) would hold more consequence than her being pregnant with inanimate gummy things. But I can understand why people would prefer what we got and it fits better with the candy theme.
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FourtySeven Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
How many parts is this expected to be in total?
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Warl381 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
What does the "tf" stand for?
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LordofDarkA Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
Transformation
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LordofDarkA Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
And sorry for that last post, got all hopped up on ideas and sugar.... and sugar... did I say sugar already?
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LordofDarkA Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
Re read the comic a few times, looked at the cover, and realized what a teas it is ^^.  It is like comic I would get from Marvel or DC, cause it teases a certain scene in the comic or hits at what happens, and yet, all though very well done, I can't help but wish what happens on the cover to actually happen in the comic.  I mean yes we have had some food based tfs, but one have even been tasted yet.... well one does in this issue, but it was not the one who gets fooded.  Even if you have a good ending lined up, I wish you could make a "worst case scenario" ending for each character.  Like Berries either pop or get made into jam, big bellies lead to getting turned into pies cause of "you are what you eat" logic, baby mom ends up becoming actual baby inside Wonka who can now have a daughter to inherit her stuff instead of an orphan, gummy cop gets munched like on the cover, big butt cop marries Wonka (ok, she makes it out ok ^^), brain dead lawyer gets turned into mash mellow, hench girl is forced to eat her and then gets turned to chocolate making a gooey treat, reporter gets turned into her own "scoop" and gets munched, spy girl gets found out and sent back to her company as a complementary box of filled chocolates, and... oh ya, the massive chocolate filled skater girl would end up being a living chocolate vat after some mechanical additions are added.
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Hereforthefun Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2016
Not judging but by the way it sounds, you just want everyone to get a vore based ending. ._. 

Like if that's your think okay but the WW Series touches on a bunch of different fetishes, not just vore for the whole thing. TBH it'd be a bit disappointing if OKAYOKAYOKOK went that route because it would take away from everything built up over the whole series.
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LordofDarkA Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2016
not all of em got eaten, and besides, it is a chocolate factory series.  food tfs are kind of the bread and butter of that story type.  Also, mentioned those were worse case senario ideas, and what is worse then being eaten.... well there is alot, but in a candy factory there are not many.
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:iconfourtyseven:
FourtySeven Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
I love an ending where all the protagonists get their just desserts. No pun intended.
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:iconlordofdarka:
LordofDarkA Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
Oh yes it was ^^.
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reverter1 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
If Ryan's mother keeps getting younger, she'll need a mother herself. Wonder if one of the woman will volunteer to be pregnant with Ryan's mother.
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Theregressed Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2016
That would be awesome!
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fartmaster5 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
Once more I'm amazed by everything that you have done on this comic.  You've added taste, classiness, and enough juicy details to give us the experience without going overboard.  So excited to see what happens next, especially with my favorite girl and the icy situation she is in.  I also can't wait to see the fate of everyone else, especially the mother daughter combo we had in the first issue.  
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darkdonny Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
I like the cover more than i like the TF in the actual comic (which is still excellent though)

the plot gets thicker. Like soft serve.
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Powerslammer Featured By Owner Edited Feb 13, 2016
OH! This one was awesome! I didn't think I'd like gummi tf, but the way drew it made me LOVE it! So.... what's going to be in the last issue, and when is it coming, because I want it now! Now, now, now.....NOW!!!
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mackZ7 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
just got it and all i can say that it is good 
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SrgntDrew Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
was a fun one and now I can't wait to see what happens with the ice cream machine.
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LordofDarkA Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
That cover!  I want more of that cover!  What happens in the comic is good, but it leaves so many questions!  I know you have another comic on the docket to be made next, but this one is just so good!
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Robotnik14 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
Well giant butt girl get bigger later?
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