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ZW2013 - Gravity
She was cornered. No water anywhere, and the first part of the fight had left her pretty much energyless. Worse, it was the new moon.
But as he emerged from the bushes, his stare was not the one of a killer, or even of a fighter. Gently, he spoke.
- Katara, come with me. Think of what we could do! Together!
His voice softened and he closed his eyes, almost humming to himself.
- Unlimited... Together we're unlimited. Together we'll be the greatest team there's even been, Katara... Dreams! the way we planned 'em.
She was strangely under this charm. She wanted to say something, but her mouth articulated almost on its own.
- If we work in tandem...
A smile flashed on his face. She was almost there.
- There's nothing we cannot win.
Her eyes widened in surprise. They had said this at exactly the same time, in perfect sync.
- Just... — he gave her his open hand.
- You... — she hesitated but started extending her arm.
- And... — they touched, as if for the first time.
- IIII,
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Please...
The sound of her footsteps was resonating against the stone walls of the corridor, as she was rushing toward the stairs to the next floor.
"Mother, I have to go. I must protect Teddy, but it won't be helpful at all if I sit here while others are fighting… The only way I can protect him is by fighting with them. I can't just wait for a new future; I have to give him that future. Please Mother, will you take care of him?"
"… I understand and I will. Just… just… Be careful… Nymphadora."
She then looked directly in her daughter's eyes, trying to say what words could not say loud enough. For the first time in years, Tonks smiled at that name.
"I love you too…"
Then she disapparated.

She climbed the stairs as fast as she could, echoes of fighting coming from everywhere. She took left, barely knowing where she was supposed to go. She fired at a black figure without even looking back. He wasn't there anyway.
Death Eaters, everywhere. She fired one
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Snowman
Snowman, O snowman,
With eyes of crumbles of bread,
You shall soon be dead.
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Le mal est parmi nous...
Lentement, le Mal descend sur la ville,
Sournoisement, il s'infiltre dans les esprits.
Je le vois, il approche,
L'échéance n'est plus bien loin.
Dans une lunaison, la terreur envahira nos rues,
Elle nous dépouillera de tout ce que nous aimons.
Je l'ai vu s'infiltrer, préparer son retour,
Il prend les esprits faibles et les convertit à sa cause.
Partout autour de moi, je vois ses couleurs
Des affreuses nuances orangées ainsi que la plus sombre teinte.
Je n'en vois que peu pour l'instant
Mais je sais que bientôt il sera partout.
Le moment venu il s'emparera vraiment des corps,
Les déformant affreusement au contact de sa corruption.
Nos plus jeunes seront les premiers touchés,
Étant plus malléables que nous.
La rue ne sera plus sûre
Je n'ose imaginer le chaos.
Encore une fois le Mal sera repoussé
Mais je sais quelles séquelles il laissera
Comme à chacun de ses passages parmi nous.
Je vous mets en garde
Il ne faut p
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Frisson l'ours polaire
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Tout là-bas, dans le Très Grand Nord, sur la banquise infinie, vit un  petit ours nommé Frisson. Il est auprès de sa mère, l'énorme fauve blanc des régions polaires. Son père chasse le phoque et le poisson d'argent. Parfois d'autres ourses croisent leur chemin ou viennent rendre visite à sa mère. Comme toutes les mères du monde, les grandes ourses blanches, toutes sauvages qu'elles soient, parlent de leurs enfants, du bonheur de leur existence, et des soucis qui les accompagnent. Mais lorsque les autres mamans ourses se plaignent en souriant des bêtises de leurs petits, ou racontent comment ils ont pêché leur premier poisson, ou dévalé leur première pente de glace, la maman de Frisson se tait. Elle écoute, la tête légèrement penchée, son regard se pose parfois sur son petit  avec une expression un peu triste et pleine d'amour. Les
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Writing Tips
I'm sure by now you've seen many, many stories on a variety of websites that run the range from being a life changing experience to making you want to swear off the internet forever. It doesn't have to be this way though; with a bit of work you can create some engaging stories that are a joy to read. This guide can give you a few tips that can help.
Have some idea of the plotline before you start to write
I know this seems like a no-brainer but some people will just start hammering out a story without giving much thought to the plot. In this case it does help to have some idea of the plot before you sit down to write. Now you don't have to have anything fancy in this case, just some notes dealing with the plot focusing on information you want to remember for the story itself.
Have a good flow for the story
You notice how any good story you read just flows along from one plot point to the next to the next? You notice how that can work as well if there is a break from one p
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PE Prose Basics: Pacing ( and Show vs. Tell)
Hello, everyone! As you all know, this week over at projecteducate is Prose Basics. We're here to help all you prose writers (whether flash fiction, short stories, or novels) get better at your craft with some basic tips for growth. Today, I'm going to be talking about something you've probably heard about again and again: pacing.


What is Pacing?
No, it's not what you do when you're stuck on a scene and need to get up and stretch those leg muscles to get your writing juices flowing. It's actually a very important ability that writers have to control the speed their story is read. You as the author get to manipulate the reader in a way and make the speed of the story match the scene. What better way to drop the reader right into the moment? But, pacing also holds the ability to make or break your story and keep or lose your reader's interest. This is why it's so important in writing.
Setting the Scene:
One o
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Passive Voice vs Active Voice
Hello everyone! :wave:
You've probably already read some of this week's wonderful journals on audience and beginning a story, and you're also probably wondering what exciting topic I've brought for you today. I suppose I'll tell you instead of keeping you in the dark.
Passive Voice vs Active Voice
I can see you're all excited.
To begin this article, I'll start by defining exactly what passive and active voice are.
Active Voice
With active voice, the agent (the person or thing carrying out the action) is the subject:
Harry ate six shrimp at dinner.
John opened the door.
Sue changed the flat tire.

Passive Voice
There are two different types of passive voice constructions.
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Hook, Line, and Sinker: How to Start Your Story
Hook, Line, and Sinker: How to Start Your Story
 
 
You have the story idea, a brief outline (or not), and enough motivation and/or preparation to place your fingers on the keyboard and think, Let's begin. But how does one, in fact, begin a story? How do you select the perfect scene to situate your reader without putting him to sleep? It's easy to become overwhelmed by the sea of possible beginnings before having typed a single word. This article provides a list of different ways to begin a story, long or short, pointing out their respective advantages and disadvantages. The right beginning can give you just the push you need to send you flying into the world of your characters.
Prologues
A prologue is a scene or chapter that pertains to the story without featuring your protagonist at the present time. It might show your hero as a child; it might show your antagonist plotting to take over the world; it might show a
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Guillaume L.M.
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
France
- Humble Frenchman with 28 Earth revolutions.
- Photographer
- Musician
- Writer
- (lame) Drawer

Current Residence: Nantes
Favourite genre of music: celtic
Favourite photographer: Bertrand Castelli (bebertc.deviantart.com)
MP3 player of choice: Winamp
Interests

Still alive

Sat Apr 16, 2011, 2:42 PM
  • Reading: La malédiaction d'Old Haven
  • Watching: Castle
  • Playing: Darksiders
This was a triumph.

Quote of the day:
"Wit beyond measure is man's greatest treasure"
Jean-Claude Van Damme

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SawuScimitar74 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2018
Hey there! Hope your birthday was a good one! I would've replied sooner, but I was busy at the time. :/
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Awfully sorry to be this late, but do I know you? I don't recall saying things ._.
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No worries! I just like to be nice to others. Treat others the way you want to be treated right? ;)
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Yeah but it's about the "reply" you mentioned, did I say something before?...
Being nice is good though =)
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Happy birthday! :D
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:woohoo: :party: :iconcakelickplz: !!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!! :iconcakelickplz: :party: :woohoo:

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We hope you had an awesome day with lots of birthday fun, gifts, happiness and most definitely, lots of cake! Here's to another year!

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happy birthday~ :D
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Thanks for the watch.
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