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FaLLEN Ch. 7 Page 10-11 by OgawaBurukku FaLLEN Ch. 7 Page 10-11 by OgawaBurukku
Rated TEEN+ by OgawaBurukkuThis manga reads from Left to Right by syo-senpai

Oh wow, it's Sunday. How did that happen? Sorry I missed the Friday update. I'll probably update my website with these two new pages later. Exciting things have been happening here, with Thursday being the day I finally got the key to my new condo!! I'm here now, even though there's stripped wallpaper and broken tiles everywhere because the crew coming in haven't finished what they were doing yet. I think I'll be able to officially move in next week, but I'll be in and out for the next week I'm sure. Very spotty internet here (using a portable router) and for some reason at night it's nearly impossible to do anything online (skype convos are a mess, constantly ending, etc). But my dog is having a good time being able to run around and such! So much more space than he is used to, haha.

Okay, blah blah, back to new page stuff.

NEW PAGE. And I think it's obvious next week's update is going to be big ;D




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:iconenoa79:
Enoa79 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
Great pages.
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much!
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Enoa79 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
You're welcome.
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ThePork-ChopExpress Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
I love your stuff! So detailed & amazing
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:iconogawaburukku:
OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much! (I like your user name! Haha made me smile :D)
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ThePork-ChopExpress Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
It's all in the reflexes.
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CuriousInferno Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
CLIFFHANGERRRRRRR

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:iconogawaburukku:
OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Professional General Artist
That face! bwahahaha
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:iconcuriousinferno:
CuriousInferno Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
is basically my currant face xD
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DarkFireHeart62 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student Artist
Congratulations on the new condo :)
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:iconogawaburukku:
OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thank you! I can't wait to officially move in. It's so nice and bug-free!
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DarkFireHeart62 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Artist
Glad to hear it :)
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death-angel-Neirukue Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Oye!!! Cliff hangers!!!
Still love the page and look forward to the next ^^
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:iconogawaburukku:
OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Professional General Artist
I am super looking forward to posting the next pages :D :D
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yurizemira Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
D'awww, Vox's little "Heh, heh" at the girls is perfect. :XD: The attacks look good, of the little we've seen for them.

Congrats on the new condo! :D
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Professional General Artist
I think I did a little better job on the elementals in the next set of pages, but it is certainly a learning experience! The next chapter has tons of magic attacks so I need to practice practice. 

And thank you!!! I've been in such a better mood since we got the keys... even though we aren't officially moved in yet, and there is nothing there at the moment, I like to go there when I need to blow off some steam and play with my dog. I think he likes having room to run around :3
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galacticpink Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PS the moles are cuties and I totally want a tiny one as a pet.
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Professional General Artist
I think they are kind of grossly cute, the way the gremlins were in the Gremlin franchise XD They are easy to draw, if nothing else. I'm looking forward to drawing the new monster critter in Ch. 9, though.
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galacticpink Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They remind me of naked mole rats (I presume their main inspiration) and water bears (this adorable more or less impossible to kill microscopic bug), which are both adorable. XD
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Professional General Artist
Ha! Yeah, naked mole rats are the main inspiration but I made them bear-sized. I call them moles, but other than their front paws they do look more like mole rats, haha. But oh man, water bears! They would have been a really great model to consider when I was designing these guys.
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galacticpink Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Water bears are the cutest possibly immortal things omigosh. <3
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Professional General Artist
Yeah, for microscopic parasite things they are pretty cute XD
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galacticpink Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Also is that attack fire intertwined with water or just water I'm not entirely sure man don't you wish you could color panels sometimes? XD
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Professional General Artist
It is, actually. If people can't tell there's fire in there, I'm okay with people thinking it's just water, but omg I still have to work on my elemental effects big time. First time drawing water like this and I was like "oh, hmm, this is kind of hard D:"
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galacticpink Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's not ideal, but once you make the reveal I think people will probably figure it out (It's how I did, to be honest). But yes, improvement never hurts! I foresee much elemental effect sketching in your future. XD
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galacticpink Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YES I CAN START REFERRING TO THEM BY THEIR NAMES, HAHA. XD
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Professional General Artist
After next week you sho' can! And I can finally post this MOUNTAIN of fan art I've gotten over the years for these two.
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galacticpink Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha. XDD
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HeartandVoice Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Student General Artist
I still like Arma's expression in that first panel xD gets me every time

hey, you have the same moving week as i do! :D I'm finally getting my own place.
Congrats on the new condo!
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Professional General Artist
Oh cool! We're moving day twinkies :D Hope your new place is a step-up from where you've been living (because it sucks to have to move to a smaller/ickier place).
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HeartandVoice Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student General Artist
yay~! :highfive:
Oh yeah i agree, last year i decided to stay in a dorm room during college, worst mistake of my life, especially since i had to share the tiny room with someone.
Anything is a step up from a dorm room i'd say lol
 
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Professional General Artist
I had 5 roommates throughout college... two were totally insane, two were kind of weird but totally lovable, and one was a nice Japanese girl who helped me with coming to Japan. But I definitely enjoyed my freedom when I lived on my own for the first time :D Now I guess I will have a roommate for the rest of my life because I'm married, haha, but I get the house mostly to myself until evening anyway. Well, I will once my husband gets a job :p

So yeah, dorm rooms are the pits XD But you do get some funny stories out of them, heh.
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HeartandVoice Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Student General Artist
oh my god! 5? I wouldn't be able to handle that xD did you live in one of those dorm suites? or was it all one room?
Yeah, the freedom of living on my own was great too, except my roommate (totally awesome person though) always went to bed early when i wanted top stay up drawing, and of course any light that was on would keep here from sleeping, so i would usually hall all my stuff down to the dorm basement to draw most nights, so I'm glad I'll finally have my own studio space to draw in while she'll have her own room this time ^^

Can't disagree with you there xD so true
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Professional General Artist
Oh sorry! Not 5 roommates at the same time XD But in two years I had five different roommates for various reasons (first was a drunk and brought strange men home with her, second was a cool witch girl but left school mid-year, third was totally racist and dating a drug dealer, fourth was clinically depressed and slept a LOT during the day but was otherwise super sweet, then I changed schools and got a Japanese girl as my last college roommate). 

If roommates don't have matching sleep schedules it can be a real pain @_@;;
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HeartandVoice Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Student General Artist
oh i see xD some of my friends live in these dorm suites and end up having 6 or 7 roommates. i seriously can't imagine why they'd do that unless they were close friends with all of them.
man, you got a whole variety of strange roommates xD all i got was a majorly extroverted caffeine crazed musician.

yeah, dealing with her sleep schedule was quite the hassle. Not only was it the lamp i had on that bugged her, but apparently the scratch sound my pens made were too loud, so i just gave up and drew else where, since I'm such a nice person...:no:
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Professional General Artist
My friend had three roommates one year. I don't think she talks to a single one of them now @_@ Visiting was always unpleasant because they all just screamed at each other. I thought suite dorms sounded nice but apparently when you have to share a kitchenette things can get vicious!
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dhmanga186 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
I wonder what that was in the upper left hand corner.
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Professional General Artist
It was a very poorly drawn elemental attack. I am going to have to learn to draw effects better >_<
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dhmanga186 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Water elemental maybe?
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:iconogawaburukku:
OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Professional General Artist
Perhaps ;D
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dhmanga186 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
I would say I've seen enough hentai to know where this could've gone, but I won't. But I've seen enough Left 4 Dead. (Left 4 Dead hentai maybe?)
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Professional General Artist
I honestly had to ask a friend if it would be a bad idea if I went all hentai tentacle on Arma XD My friend reminded me that "Arma's not that kind of character... LAMIA'S that kind of character" so at some point in the future I might have her face some dastardly mole tongues, ahem.
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dhmanga186 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
I'd probably think both or all of them are susceptible to mole tongues, just depends on who might enjoy it. Or you can just let the fanfics/fan art and extended universes do that work for you. Maybe in the comments we see a fanfic in the making...
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Professional General Artist
Oh my god, I would love to see people drawing erotic fan comics or whatever with my characters someday XD I'm sure the mole tongues would be perfect for that, as well as their tendency to become puddles of goo when they are killed, haha. For the side stories for the graphic novels I'm going to put in a few raunchy jokes and pictures just because I'm a pervert and the side stories are basically free for alls.

I got some erotic fanfics a few years back that were a lot of fun XD I'd love to get more fanfics, heh heh. 
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MaryBellamy Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Professional General Artist
Yay! More girls identities to come. And yay for the apartment. :)
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Professional General Artist
Yay new condo! I've been using a toilet where I can just use the flush lever to flush without having to manually reach into the tank and pull the chain... which is a nice change. Can't wait for next week when everything is official and I get to move in!

And YAY. No more saying "that girl!". I'll also be able to update the galleries with tons of new artwork once I post the pages for next week... no more spoilers!
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