FaLLEN Ch. 4 Pages 26

While working on this page, I counted about six different earthquakes... this week has been rather shaky and I'd be lying if I said it didn't make me a little uneasy. Really hoping these aren't leading up to anything like 2011's big one.

This chapter was originally supposed to end with "Freckles" interrupting Vox's explanation to say "I bet the others are worried... why don't we go home!" Emphasis on the use of "home", like they are all one big family, I guess. Pffft. I think even the novel is like that but I don't know why I wrote it that way. I thought it was pretty irresponsible writing for me to let the little girl's feelings go unnoticed (to the reader). She's not just a damsel in distress (well, for now she kinda is), and this kind of leads into her fears of bringing the group down. Plus, this way I start and end the chapter with her, and I really like the way I drew her in the last panel. I think I've finally gotten the hang of drawing her! And it only took me four chapters... d'oh...

The next chapter will be a bit of a cool-down, so no action but I'll be expanding on the other girls we met in Chapter 3's personalities as well as some other stuff. There is at least one other battle before I end Vol. 1, rest assured

Confused? Didn't read the first three chapters?

CHAPTER 1 FIRST PAGE


CHAPTER 2 FIRST PAGE
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CHAPTER 3 FIRST PAGE
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