Test page for my graphic novel titled Evil Deeds

working on a graphic novel using digital means --- manga studio, photoshop, macromedia freehand (NO ILLUSTRATOR! ). It has heavy religious and christian relationship themes for a main character that is trying to understand the meaning of being a hero and tempering his anger while working through moral choices. Would like your feed back and opinions. (but please be gentle, cause "im an artist and im sensitive about my 'ish'!"