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The story of Lisa- Pg1 by OcularFracture The story of Lisa- Pg1 by OcularFracture
An OC I made a few years back. Somehow, it got really popular on the internet. People are calling it "The Pink Backpack."
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"This is Lisa. She is my friend. My mom and dad cant see her so they sed she is an imaganery friend. Lisa is a nice friend."

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Seriously, stop using this without my permission. It's overwhelmingly frustrating. 
And people accusing me of stealing it from a child: Come on. It's really depressing to think that some people would rather believe that a kid was friends with a ghost who killed people and told a perfect story about it, rather than believing the obvious truth that it was an art project by an adult. 
I own the book I drew it in, I have numerous videos of me showing said book, and I have the words of the people who watched me draw it. I never expected it to gain such popularity; I thought it was stupid and cheesy. But jeez, if I'd known what a huge deal it was going to be, I would have recorded the ******* drawing process! Why is it that I can draw all this other crap I draw and no one questions it, but the moment ONE THING goes viral, suddenly everyone starts harassing me about it and refusing to believe I drew it? 

Check out the Creepy Pasta OC folder in my gallery. There's other stuff like this. Look in my literature folder. I write horror. Okay? It's what I do. And if you would rather believe that a little girl with a ghost friend actually sat down and wrote a coherent story with a beginning and an end, then you may want to seek special help, and in the mean time, have fun making your tin foil hats and playing with Ouija Boards in your mom's basement.
But stop harassing me, because I didn't do anything wrong. All I do is make art, which is what everyone else on dA does, and I don't see any other artists getting harassed over the legitimacy of their work. 
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:iconcurrykitten:
CurryKitten Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
I will say, this story scared the shit outta me! 
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! Or... I’m sorry? XD Whichever.
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:iconhai1000:
Hai1000 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018
So your the owner of the famous Lisa ^^ well done my friend well done
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:iconthunder4361:
Thunder4361 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
eternally greatful to the youtube commentor who pointed out that you drew this. 
thanks for the spooky shit, fam. 
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:iconadeldee:
Adeldee Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope the people who didn't believe that you made this also "go to sleep". Except I want them to never wake up. Haha, you know what I mean.
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:iconthat-last-guardian:
That-Last-Guardian Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2017  Student General Artist
One of the little girls feet is like way bigger than the other! XD
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:iconhanliger:
hanliger Featured By Owner Edited Oct 14, 2016
This is absolutely AWESOME.
Can I use this piece of art to create my final exhibition project about ghost stories? (This is course assignment so I won't get any money from it)
Basically it's a interactive piece of art with PC and Leap Motion, and I wanna build a virtual creepypasta museum.
I know you're very sensitive about the issue, so I will exclude this from the exhibition whenever you want to.

Of course I'll credit you, and let everyone who watches my work clearly know that this is made by you.
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:iconfreyah:
freyah Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I knew this wasn't done by a child from the first page when I saw it on YouTube.  XD
Children evolve their drawing skills pretty uniformly (at various lengths of time tho) and these images mixes these stages "wrong". 
Same thing with lettering and sentence structure, the mix is "wrong" for a child.
These stages are very well documented, go and google-fu, doubters. =)

This is done by someone who has mastery over drawing, writing and language emulating a person who has not.
Like someone who can sing really well and has done so for a long time trying to sing falsely for a whole song.

And that is not easy! I'm really sad that people are disrespecting the artists' skill in this.

This is really funny and cute!
Too bad you're not getting enough credit for this
I'm glad you have printed version for sale tho, it's going on my to-buy-list! <3
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:iconharcirah:
harcirah Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016
Omg, I thought this was a REAL diary! Well done, this is extremely realistic! The art and the writing style made it look like a kid's work.
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:iconmoonstar005:
Moonstar005 Featured By Owner May 30, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
oml it's this story again
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:iconmykie1109:
Mykie1109 Featured By Owner May 19, 2016
This is brilliant!! Awesome job. 
The imitation of the a kid's drawing and hand writing is just too real.  

It is frustrating to see your work without being credited, even worse, being bullied by what's rightfully yours. I will spread the words and post this page whenever I see your work being posted. (I am pretty sure the did not receive any of your permission since it is already spread here in Taiwan). 
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Gumio-tan Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016
Oh god, I remember this story. I was reading this when I was 9 or 10 and I was so, so scared(still is)! I actually thought it was a 5 years old girl who drew this! How can you draw like that? I want to draw like that too, I want to creep my family!

Oh, and I'm so sorry that people keep using it without your permission No, I disagree!.
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sugarteacat Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Oh man I remember this story (scared me so much haha) and I can't believe I found your account again!!  It's a shame about the art thievery, and I'm sorry to hear you recieved harassment from your own work :-/
But keep up with your work, its brilliant and refreshing to look at! Really, you have such a unique style!! :>
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:iconipundertale:
Ipundertale Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHUT
IN
THE
ACCTUAL
F***
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:iconfirathefox:
Firathefox Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice story and I am happy to find the creator! Annoying if people are using it without your permission No, I disagree! 
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Oh, yes. It never ends. I ask people to credit me. They ignore me. I submit a copyright claim. They harass me and send their fans after me to also harass me.
I genuinely hate people right now.
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:iconkatiwinter:
KatiWinter Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016
Can i use your beautiful art and the story for a creepypasta on youtube? I would credit the pictures and translate it to german. i would write a link to your art in the descriptions.
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for asking permission. I appreciate that! I will give you permission as long as you agree not to monetise your video and please link me when you upload it so I can see and add it to my list of videos that have permission. :)
Thank you for helping spread my story to the German community! I hope one day it will make it around the world~
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KatiWinter Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2016
Oh thanks a lot! it will be uploaded next wednesday! and for sure i wont monetise it! its your work and all i do is to give it a voice! :) I will post a link on wednesday evening so u can see the video! :) Thanks! :)
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you too!
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:iconkatiwinter:
KatiWinter Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2016
And here it is: www.youtube.com/watch?v=gJbP5e… Thanks a lot! :)
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:iconrubenftguiso:
Rubenftguiso Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016
Lisa it's love, Lisa it's life
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Aww. <3 What a sweet thing to say. I appreciate that kind of support~
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:iconrethiosama:
Rethiosama Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2016
www.facebook.com/checkunderyou… keeps posting your story without credit. I've told them many times about your situation.
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Welp, I guess they're getting a copyright strike. Thanks for the tip.
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kurtisatdeviantart Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2016
its creepy to think about but so awesome of a story :) good job 
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you. :^)
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:iconkurtisatdeviantart:
kurtisatdeviantart Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016
no problemo :D 
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:iconwhiskers542:
whiskers542 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
This is fucking awesome. It's a real shame that people don't credit you for it. They really should. Anyway, great job~ *
(PS thanks for the nightmares XD)
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much, truly. It means a lot to hear stuff like this.
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:iconwhiskers542:
whiskers542 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
No problem!!! :D
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Evaseditions Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's actually not made by a child and is made up? It's amazingly realistic, gee, I can say that you did an amazing job! :clap:
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
<3 I appreciate that.
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:iconclericofmadness:
clericofmadness Featured By Owner Edited Feb 4, 2016  Professional Writer
Just to let you know, as per the DMCA, the story has been removed from the Creepypasta Wiki.  I would like to apologize for any inconvenience caused.  I posted the story to the site on March 1st, 2011, likely not long after it had been posted to /x/ and if I had known an author at the time, I definitely would have credited you.  Again, sorry about that.

EDIT: If you would like us to host a redirect to one of your personal websites where you have the image hosted or to this dA page (something like what we did with SlimeBeast's stories when he asked us to take them down) we'd be glad to send traffic your way.
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
It's okay. The main problem was just that people were under the impression that it was public domain, and so they were using it without my permission and some were profiting from it while I sit here with pennies to my name and no one knows who I am.
I'm not really sure right now if I want anymore attention, since most of it has been negative so far. I'm sorry about having to do what I did. I hope you understand.
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clericofmadness Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2016  Professional Writer
You do what you have to do.  I understand, as an artist.  It may not make sense to everyone, but you did what you felt you had to do.  Hopefully things turn out better for you.
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Genasidal Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
It's sad how a simple story made for fun made such viral credibility and people didn't even stop to credit you but instead commit chinese whispers purposely just to stir up the internet.
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Tell me about it. -_- It is wearing me down like crazy.
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Annabeth5110 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Professional Writer
You know that's in YouTube, right?
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Oh yes, it's all over youtube being used without my permission. There are only a handful of videos on Youtube that I authorized. It's getting old.
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Annabeth5110 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016  Professional Writer
Painful, huh? And now freaky Planet Dolan used it in Creepy Things Kids Draw, announcing it as if Lisa WERE real and it all HAD happened. I can't tell him wrong since I don't have an YouTube account anymore.
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Omg. x_x It's about time to get some legal action going on. 
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:iconannabeth5110:
Annabeth5110 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016  Professional Writer
Well, keep me posted, he DID scare a lotta people. Have you seen it?
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
No. It sucks, because I actually really like Danger Dolan. But I'm really upset that he could be so lazy to not research things before making a video like that. I'm going to have to have it removed because I'm not getting a response. It's kind of a shame. I'd be happy to let him keep it if he just credited me and ceased monetization.
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VideogameKitty99 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow. I saw this already on another website and seriously thought it was real! Amazing job and very creepy~ :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you. :) Love the Undertale icon, too. <3
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TheDeathSmile Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015  Student General Artist
I just found it on Piterest. I really like Lisa and I think that their friendship is cute :3
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you. :)
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cayiika Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Oh, I remember seeing this quite some time ago! Really cool to find out about the creator. I recall that a lot of people thought it was a real child's journal, so you definitely made it convincing!
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:iconocularfracture:
OcularFracture Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! :D
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