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Team SoulSilver by Ocsttiac Team SoulSilver by Ocsttiac
I'm really hoping for at least one comment on this one, unlike last time :C
Added Lugia and Ho-oh into the corners, because someone recommended I fill the vacant gaps.
... Kinda feel like I rushed this one...

Firebolt 2 - Typhlosion ♂
Diego - Dragonite ♂
Edward - Espeon ♂
Sally - Sudowoodo ♀
Walter - Quagsire ♂
Amy - Ampharos ♀
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:iconpsychoticgex:
Pokemon picture based off the team players have are always somethings
I like to enjoy and look at. The coloring looks good and the little shading here and there are good. Only thing I do have to complain about is that there really should be some kind of background. I feel that there should be something there to help. I do like the idea that your Pokemon doing different activities with the other Pokemon, especially with you and your Dragonite or your Ampharos with Quagsire. I say if you do more pictures like this, try experimenting that more through. Also the personalities of your Pokemon are a nice touch.
In an overall perspective, the picture looks good, but again, add some kind of background and make try some shading to see if the picture looks good or not.
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:iconcitynetter:
citynetter Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is a good looking team.
Nice of you to give them actual names!!!
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:iconocsttiac:
Ocsttiac Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much =D
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:iconcitynetter:
citynetter Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No prob!
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:iconemeraldtokyo:
EmeraldTokyo Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Professional General Artist
You have quite a bit of talent. From looking at your picture, I feel you used a reference (I do all the time, it's a good thing) However, it appears that you're drawing the figures from the outside lines. Try using the basic skeleton with shapes to flesh out a pose for each character, Pokemon, in the scene before moving to the outside line and finalizing your image.

Another thing is, your characters are spaced out all over the scene. It looses its dynamic impact. Try having the characters all close together and interacting more than just standing around.

Check out various poster designs to get a better idea of what I'm talking about and give it another go. Have your human trainer in the center, maybe sitting on a larger Pokemon with the smaller ones hugging around him. Make them the central focal point of the image so the eye doesn't have to wander all over the page. A simple background of a burst of color will fill the background nicely but not detract from the figures.

Otherwise, your drawing skill is very solid. Your lines are crisp and your colors are good.
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Ocsttiac Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much for spending time to compose this comment. This is probably the most well-thought out, insightful and useful comment I've ever received.
I'll be sure to use this feedback for any sequel drawing to this! I've been thinking about a new idea for the next one I do...

Also, no hard feelings about earlier, yeah?
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EmeraldTokyo Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Professional General Artist
There's no hard feelings at all. All, of your points were valid from the point of view you were coming from.

Yes, I took the time to come up with a serious comment that gave you real feedback. I don't like posting comments otherwise. Comments such as these take time to think out and phrase correctly, so I don't come off sounding like an overly righteous A-hole, or someone who doesn't know what the hell they're talking about.

You're welcome. I'm going to keep an eye on you so I can watch your progress. :-D
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Ocsttiac Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hell, unless you're trying to sound cruel and nasty, I'll never take things the wrong way XD
And thank you very much. I'm so glad I can calm down in terms of raging against people.
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Aledog Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
looks great!
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:iconocsttiac:
Ocsttiac Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much :3
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