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Shahd manga cover

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:iconranranruuplz:Finally i manged to upload my manga hope that you will enjoy it :D

Next page [link]

Plz tell me your opinion i would really like to take my art to the next level :)
Helped in editing my dear friend :iconmaoriesirens:
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Sep 22, 2011, 12:49:46 PM
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elyunni's avatar
Well done and congratulation on creating your own manga. It's an interesting shoujo type manga.

Keep working on what you have done. You still have more room to improve. So improve with all you want ^^

On what part do you want to improve?
ockbaenma's avatar
Thank you a lot TT^TT

I will try my best, could you please read this one [link] :D and tell me what you think :D

All of it I need to work on the backgrounds, the anatomy specailly males, and I really need to use more motion in it Q^Q I hope i can improve I can use any advice I get, So could you help me, plz :D
elyunni's avatar
Am I very welcome to do so? I'm happily love to share what I have learn so far. So, one day you could share what you could get to others too ^___^
ockbaenma's avatar
I hope that too :D
elyunni's avatar
I notice in your manga about removing hijab inside a building (school) that only have girls inside. Is that a custom in your country?
ockbaenma's avatar
No not really I just wanted to change a little :D
elyunni's avatar
Really? It's unique. I never see any manga with such idea.
ockbaenma's avatar
Do you think so I really tried to make
it unique thank you a lot It really means a
lot to me to hear it from you XD :iconsobeautifulplz:
QueenyTheAWSUM's avatar
hawww!!!! again a manga!!!!! i´ll read it, deaaaar!^^
ockbaenma's avatar
Thak you a lot :iconiloveyouplz:
I really hope that you enjoy it :iconaawplz:
QueenyTheAWSUM's avatar
i didn´t enjoyed it... I´M ADDICTED TO IT!!!!!
ockbaenma's avatar
:iconyaayplz AM REALLY GLAD THAT YOU LIKED IT :iconyaayplz:
Tkdflash's avatar
LIked
But Where iS the ColORS!
ockbaenma's avatar
Thank you :happybounce:
I though about leaving it like that so it looks like a manga, but i will try to color it :iconcarameldansenplz:
Tkdflash's avatar
yes yes
i unerstood U
FIne
ANyway GOod Work :D!!
ockbaenma's avatar
Thank you again :squee:
Tkdflash's avatar
welcome AGain and Again :D!
Shirinaraku's avatar
wow! wonderful art and story! are you planning to join a contest in :iconmuslim-manga:
ockbaenma's avatar
Thanks a lot :iconiloveyouplz:
Am thinking about it,am not sure it will be accepted but i will try :D
Shirinaraku's avatar
:iconaawplz: your welcome!
Insha'Allah! you can do it! :iconcheerplz:
ockbaenma's avatar
:iconaawplz:
insha'allah :D
By the way do you know how to submit it :)
Shirinaraku's avatar
just submit it here :D [link]
ockbaenma's avatar
Thank you dear :iconsweethugplz:
Shirinaraku's avatar
your most welcome!
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