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Water's Way pg. 1 by Oceanrush Water's Way pg. 1 by Oceanrush
I actually made this a while ago and forgot I never submitted it XD
Btw, Layla's hiding behind a wall listening to Amelia and Griffin talk in the last panel, I know it might be hard to tell.

Everything here belongs to me :) :iconoceanrush:
DrawingLamandSam Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Constructive criticism here: 1. The text kind of looks boxed in and squash to fit in a text bubble. When I make a comic, I try make the text first then add bubble so it doesn't look constrained. 2. The characters eyes could use a bit more emotion. Now, I''m not perfect at giving my characters the perfect cartoony eyes but I think I have some pointers. If you're going for sort cartoon look check this out I made this for my  comics. I try to exaggerate each emotion. Like for a sad expression I try to exaggerate the heck out of it. Maybe my examples are too extreme since you may got a more serious style here, but I think it might help a little bit. 3. Try to make font text for speeches instead of writing it yourself. For some reason when you do it yourself it looks sloppy. I don't know why but that always confuse me on why my writing text looks worse than my computer's text. But it's always a lot more cleaner looking. Also if you can make perfect circles in the program you're using, try to do that for the speech bubbles as well. Sorry if I sounded a little over my head in this. But I just felt a artist can always improve on a few things. Even me
Oceanrush Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! This is my first time drawing a comic and this helped. :)
DrawingLamandSam Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem!
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