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:star:Round One Results</u>:star:



1.
:icontelemaja: ENTRY telemaja.deviantart.com/art/WO…
VS.
:iconmeithrose: ENTRY meithrose.deviantart.com/art/W…

the-tired-leaf
telemaja</u> : I like the dynamic you’ve got going on between your two characters. Also think you handled the large frame scenes in the cave very well with respect to shading and lights/darks. Colouring style is really simple and clean, minus a few muddle backgrounds or two (characters stand out more though?). Story was easy to follow and had some good funny moments. Try and develop a motive for your characters, or add to the story in some way. Watch spelling in a few places.

Meithrose</u>: Your first page looked really nice with everything outlined. Had a nice simple stylized look to it! Wish you could’ve carried it throughout! Liked the reversed colour frames throughout for your characters inner dude (not sure what to call it haha). Can tell you put a lot of effort into creating an interesting fight. However, sometimes the action came across as a bit muddled. Enjoyed the inner conflict your character seems to be having.

Vote: telemaja. Although the storyline in Meithrose’s entry has a bit more depth, the humour and personality of telemaja’s entry won me over. The action in telemaja’s entry was also clearer.


RandomEffect

Telemaja</u>
Reason for victory: I enjoyed her fight scene more. There was good humour in it and colouring entries is pro. Colour~


oblivious-life
Telemaja</u>- Still at the first page, and already I anticipated for the second one. The well detailed characters and the background were beautifully laid out for all to see.  Simple CG coloring and yet eye catching. And the simple color coding of the characters’ lines was a really good idea. She really gave it her all.

Meithrose</u>- Your storyline was very good and that was where I think you excelled the most. You performed the fighting part quite well but it was a bit hard to follow due to how you did the panels. You could also have cleaned/each page to make it look a bit neater.  It looks messy in some parts, and the font’s are a bit small so it’s a little hard to read.

Vote: Telemaja


3-0

WINNER
:icontelemaja:



2.
:iconsavagenights: DISQUALIFIED
VS.
:icontezzy-arts: FORFEIT


3.
:iconlupineblade: lupineblade.deviantart.com/art…
VS.
:iconskecthkid: DISQUALIFIED

the-tired-leaf
Lupinblade</u>
Lupineblade: As you said in your description of page 3, the quality went down from there. Use all the time you’re given to maintain the quality throughout. Plot sort of seemed a bit rushed and sudden. Looking at the first page, I was pretty optimistic about your entry. Can tell you were running out of time as the pages went on. Work on really using your time wisely so you can create a coherent story with a consistent level of quality (like your first page).


RandomEffect
Winner: LupineBlade</u>
Reason for Victory: Disqualifiction of opponent


oblivious-life
Lupinblade</u>
Lupinblade- Okay, so the entry started out fine but the middle to ending sort of went low quality and I have no idea why. Pages needed to be a little neater as well. But the good thing is that even though it was all done in pencil, you can still clearly read the words. I think you should use a ruler next time. And also if you want the characters to stand out, trace it with a pen or something. Even a bic pen can do wonders to your work. So need more work, but still good.


WINNER
:iconlupineblade:



4.
:iconsakuracat-kim: ENTRY sakuracat-kim.deviantart.com/a…
VS.
:iconsilvachito: ENTRY silvachito.deviantart.com/art/…

the-tired-leaf
SakuraCat-Kim</u>: Really enjoyed your style and presentation of your story. The text stood out really nicely from the grayish backdrops. The backdrops also gave a sense of cohesiveness between each of the frames. Try not to force the humour too much. It’s obvious you’ve got a really fun quirky sense of humour, so let it naturally come out in your writing.

Silvachito</u>: Could tell just from your cover I would enjoy your entry. Really appreciated the prologue introducing the characters. Story was constantly moving, which made it interesting to read. Loved the look of your drawings! The ending closed things off nicely. The flow of the story was very good!

Vote: Silvachito Silvachito’s story and fast-paced action won out over SakuraCat-Kim’s quirky humour and stylish presentation.


RandomEffect
Winner: Silvachito</u>
Reason for Victory: I found Silvachito to have a better story and better fight, though I will admit I did wonder how Haran didn't manage to see explosives that were put in some obvious places. Sakuracat-kim's entry did have humour value, however I found it incredibly hard to understand what was going on due to some bad spelling and grammar along with sentence stucture. There was also a lot of unnecessary swearing, which turned me off a bit, and I thought the fight itself to be somewhat poor.


oblivious-life
Silvachito</u>- Liking the whole storyline. Grayscale was a good idea. Simple yet effective background; it was also entertaining. No fancy inking and it still looks alright. You could identify each character which is great cuz there seems to be like five or four of them fighting one another.

Sakuracat-kim</u>- Hmm, okay, so I wasn’t really sure what was going on in the whole entry and who was in what side and which person’s with which. Everyone was everywhere it seems and I had to read the whole entry twice to figure it out. The gum part was funny, everybody’s eating her or want to eat her which is both funny and a little bit disturbing :O_o:  I’m not sure what happened to their opponent, if they got stuck in a tree or something, it was not well portrayed.

Vote: silvachito


3-0

WINNER
:iconsilvachito:



5.
:iconblackdeath2000: blackdeath2000.deviantart.com/…
VS.
:iconumbrascitor: ENTRY umbrascitor.deviantart.com/art…

the-tired-leaf
blackdeath2000</u>: Can tell you know what you’re doing when it comes to your character. He was consistently well drawn throughout the entire story. Loved how many different angles you drew him from too! Was very dynamic! Really have no indication as to why they’re fighting though. Like how you added in a bit of storyline at the end. Try possibly outlining in black or something? Might give it a “sharper” look if you know what I’m getting at? Just a suggestion though!

Umbrascitor: Love how the camera zooms around to show various shots and angles. Makes it very dynamic. Adored the random bits of humour! The humour played well into the story without distracting from it. Voice acting was great! Fit all the characters perfectly! Used the setting very creatively. The effects were all very well done. Story was cohesive and made sense. Really enjoyed your entry!

Vote: Umbrascitor. Blackdeath2000 had bad luck drawing Umbrascitor for the first round. Although both entries were good, Umbrascitors animation, humour, and impressive use of the setting won.


RandomEffect
Winner: Umbrascitor</u>
Reason for Victory: Having a fucking awesome entry... that is all.


oblivious-life
blackdeath2000</u>- Needs a lot of cleaning, but really good effort though.  I know all of us doesn’t have Photoshop or whatever, but at least you did your best; plus you finished it. But you still have a lot to go and keep practicing. Good storyline and originality on not killing your opponent.

Umbrascitor</u>-  First of all, nice job. Second of all, that was just kickass-ingly amazing. I mean some of the characters (aka Freeman) needed to look a little bit more human-ish but other than that, that was just epic. Loved the idea how you made Tremor a decoy robot. It was great and your dedication on that entry paid off.

Vote: umbrascitor


3-0

WINNER
:iconumbrascitor:



6.
:iconanime-dragon-tamer: anime-dragon-tamer.deviantart.…
VS.
:icondark1992: ENTRY dark1992.deviantart.com/art/Wo…

the-tired-leaf
Anime-dragon-tamer</u>: The frames flow together really nicely. Very creative piecing together of the frames! Love your colouring too – very clean and simple without being TOO simple. Would have loved if you had been able to keep it up for all the pages, but that obviously would have been very time consuming. The back and forth between the actual story and action works fairly well. Can tell you had fun playing around with the character designs. Even without colour, the drawings still maintain a clean and simple look. Pre-fight and fight scenes are all dynamic, with interesting angles and perspectives used. Really like how you built up tension with the queen. Story seems to be well on its way!

Dark1992</u>: First page seems a bit rushed and a bit sloppy. Things definitely pick up the next page. Colouring is very good. Nice bright colours. Very dynamic poses and angles of the characters, nice sense of speed going on. Light effects from S.A.R.L.A’s light beam thing are beautiful. Love how the blue reflects on your character. Character expressions are really well done. Watch some of your spelling and grammar if you can. Wish you could’ve finished it. Story is simple and straightforward but it works.

Vote: Anime-dragon-tamer. This was a really tough call. Both of the entries were equally as impressive visually. However, in the end Anime-dragon-tamer’s story captivated me more than Dark1992’s.


RandomEffect
Winner: Anime-Dragon-Tamer</u>
Reason for Victory: Incomplete entry from opponent


oblivious-life
anime-dragon-tamer</u>- So the whole fight was really entertaining. Too bad it wasn’t all colored though O^O Cause it would have kicked way more ass. I liked how she was able to include my characters without even changing the storyline.  Fighting scene was really well portrayed, without confusing readers. Entry was neat and clean but needs to be inked. This entry had so much potential, so the next time, don’t procrastinate <.< (lol, like I don’t too. Hahaha)

dark1992</u>- It was really good, there was color, background, great character portration (I found it was not a word, but you get the idea), and you didn’t finish it =_=lll So it’s not very assuring in the future to come. It had so much potential, I was even anticipating for the next page and I was like :O_o: what the heck happened? But still, it was fun to read. In the first page, I don’t know why you didn’t type their lines but, at least you did in the next 2.

Vote: anime-dragon-tamer


3-0

WINNER
:iconanime-dragon-tamer:




7.
:icon5amu5: ENTRY  5amu5.deviantart.com/art/WotD-…;
VS.
:iconwingednovelist: ENTRY wingednovelist.deviantart.com/…

the-tired-leaf
5amu5</u>: From facial expressions to his personality, can definitely tell you enjoy drawing and working with your character. Sometimes when you draw the characters, the proportions seems a bit off, especially when you’re doing perspective. You’ve got the right idea with it, just work on making the proportions a bit more realistic! Obviously you had to switch to grey scale due to time constraints, however I wish you would have been able to carry the colouring all the way through. However, the story is really nicely done, moves along really well. Watch for clichés though (for example, the ending was slightly cliché;). Like your characters complexity, seems very cocky and willing to get the job done, however, he spares both of their lives. Liked the scenes where he was like a shadow, think you could have a lot of fun with that in the future!

Wingednovelist</u>: Like your simple black and white colouring style. Serves its purpose well! Also enjoy how you built tension between each page. Thumbs up for the contrast in the characters colouring while they’re fighting (your character in dark clothes with white hair, the opponent in white clothing with dark hair and such). Pages have a very “clean” look to them. Like the splash of red for effect later in the story. Adds a lot of style to the colouring. Possibly play off this stylization in the future? Sort of Sin City-esque? Like how the story is progressing as well.

Vote: Wingednovelist. Again, both entries were equally as well done. Both have nice stories going as well. However, Wingednovelist’s entry managed to captivate me a bit more than 5amu5’s. Wingednovelist’s story also seemed to have more room for progression in the future.


RandomEffect
Winner: 5amu5</u>
Reason for Victory: I liked the story better, although I found the ending to be a bit lacking when he suddenly refused to kill Adam. Also there was some confusion in the fight scenes that the opponent drew, as in I had to look it over again to be completely sure of what had transpired. Colour is nice, so that also attributed to 5amu5's victory.


oblivious-life
5amu5</u>- Characters were well portrayed. It had a simple yet effective background. Nice fighting scenes; not too overly dramatic and not boring either. Great originality and good use of colors (but then it went to black and white...). Clean and edited.

WingedNovelist</u>- Simple black and white greyscale. That was a nice way to start your entry. Great way to start with Isaac and the others, meaning you didn’t just rush off to kill your opponents. Good storyline, great effort, but the fighting scene was a bit dull; you needed to pace it a little bit. Also another suggestion so you won’t have so many pages, stick like 2-3 pages to each other so you’d have like an 8 ½ by, say 33 instead of 8 ½ by 11.

Vote: WingedNovelist


1-2

WINNER
:iconwingednovelist:



8.
:iconmelaye: ENTRY melaye.deviantart.com/art/HPot…
VS.
:iconouroborosi: ENTRY ouroborosi.deviantart.com/art/…

the-tired-leaf
Melaye</u>: I like the way one of the characters will say something, like “What happened to your clothes,” and then you’d go into a description of the clothes they were wearing before. Also love the first-person perspective used. Watch your spelling in some areas. Love how the humour naturally meshes into the story. The action is very naturally paced, which is something very refreshing. Things don’t seem too forced. Really enjoyed your characters. It’s clear that you’ve developed your own style of writing.

Ouroborosl</u>: Careful not to go into descriptive overload! It’s nice to be able to read something and experience it from all of your senses, but try not to force it into your writing. Work on punctuation and not forcing too much into one sentence. Don’t be afraid to use shorter, more blunt sentences. Sometimes they’ll be a lot more effective than long run-on ones. Some words that you’ve used don’t make sense in context. For example, “Both stood up semantically.” Watch your spelling in some places. Really enjoyed the amount of action you put into it though. Appreciate your effort!

Vote: Melaye for a more effective and stream-lined story.


RandomEffect
Winner: Ouroborosi</u>
Reason for Victory: Less spelling mistakes. Too much time was spent trying to understand some of the things opponent was writing... Both could use work in terms of spelling and grammar, however. I won't go into any more of this or else I will end up wasting hours correcting, and possibly rewriting, their entire entries... grammar-nazi ftw -_-


oblivious-life
melaye</u>- Well there were a lot of grammatical errors, and misuse of words (ie through was used for the word throw, etc.), nice visualization though. I could actually picture them two fighting. Needs a lot of editing but just keep going at it, and keep writing. Practice makes perfect.

OuroborosI</u>- Well, indent next time please. And a few errors here and there but nothing you can’t fix. Overall, great entry, great storyline, great originality. The fighting part was literally appealing. Nice that you didn’t kill your characters (meaning more people the gravediggers can kill *mwahaha* lol).


Vote: OuroborosI</sup>

1-2

WINNER
:iconouroborosi:




9.
:iconyorax: FORFEIT
VS.
:iconlazymanly: DISQUALIFIED




10.
:iconyoichi8: ENTRY yoichi8.deviantart.com/gallery…
VS.
:iconthe-unequal-one: FORFEIT

the-tired-leaf
Yoichi8</u>: Really love the way you draw your characters. The plain colour backgrounds could have been very boring, however, your character expressions and the action between the characters more than made up for it. The fight scene between the two characters is very well done and moves along at a nice pace. Really like the dark ending too. Favourite frame of the entire entry was the first one on page 9 – has an awesome stylized edge to it! The backgrounds grew on my throughout the entry as well!

RandomEffect
Winner: Yoichi8</u>
Reason for Vicory: Forfeit of opponent


oblivious-life
Yoichi8</u>- It was a bit long and confusing at some parts, but detailed. It had okay background and good character portrayal.

WINNER
:iconyoichi8:




11.
:iconnovalyyn: ENTRY novalyyn.deviantart.com/art/Wo…
VS.
:iconanotoman123: anotoman123.deviantart.com/art…

the-tired-leaf
Novalynn</u>: Like the background info given in the Author’s Comments. When I’ve been writing comments up, I’ll typically take a break from reading a person’s entry to type up my thoughts. However, with your entry I read it straight through. Loved pretty much everything about it. Beautifully descriptive without being forced. Everything was explained well. For example, the reason for your character travelling to Fire Mountain. A lot of other entries have just sort of randomly taken place in certain areas. It was refreshing to have some logic behind it. Excellent entry!

Anotoman123</u>: Love the apparent complexity of your character! Very nice characterization going on. Really enjoyed the way you drew the characters. Action scenes were very nicely done. The pages that were inked had a nice clean crisp look to them. Try and work on a bit of shading. Even if you just shade small areas, it will really add to your drawings I think! Like where you’re going with the story, and hope you continue it even if you don’t move on! However, please be careful that the story doesn’t get too confusing, as it bordered on this near the end of the entry!

Vote: Novalynn123</u>. Sorry Anotoman123, but Novalynn’s entry was a powerhouse! Luck of the draw for competitors I guess!


RandomEffect
Winner: Novalynn</u>
Reason for Victory: The writing was lovely, I especially liked the description that was provided when Kyra was being thrown around, though the quality of the overall story was great.


oblivious-life
Novalyyn</u>- awesome storyline, very intense, gripping and downright cool.  I love how you included every tiny detail to your entry, from background description to fighting sequence. Even without any visual help, it didn’t matter since I could just visualize it myself just by reading the entry.

anotoman123</u>- Needs a lot of cleaning and editing. You should try not to have too many panels in one (8 ½ by 11) page. I like how you were able to do the characters without destroying their original design.

Vote:Novalyn


3-0

WINNER
:iconnovalyyn:




12.
:iconchirom: ENTRY chirom.deviantart.com/art/WOTD…
VS.
:iconsensparda18: ENTRY sensparda18.deviantart.com/art…

the-tired-leaf
ChiroM</u>: Enjoyed your main characters inner conflict/background story. Try adding in more dynamic poses and such in the fight scenes. The characters are all really well drawn. I like how at the very end, your character’s perspective of their opponent totally changes. Sort of how someone’s actions can come across as bad, but their motives are actually pure. This was mirrored in your little blurb midway through your first page. Really appreciated that touch!

SenSparda18</u>: Like how your character has single clear motive that drives them throughout the story. Loved the way the story moved along. Things were very naturally paced. Your narration throughout was very well done, and gave a nice mental image of what was occurring. The action was very clear and well described. Nicely written. However, watch overusing ellipses and work on punctuation around quotes.

Vote: SenSparda18. Both entries are very well done. Stories in both are very strong, and both have very nice attention to detail. Very tough decision choosing! However, I found myself more taken into SenSparda18’s story, and thus my decision


RandomEffect
Winner: Sensparda18</u>
Reason for Victory: Couldn't finish reading the opponents entry as it would not enlarge. To me this is the equivalent of disqualification as it should be made sure that all judges have access to the full entry.
I also just liked the fight presented by Sensparda better...nice description was used.


oblivious-life
ChiroM</u>- Great use of the panels; it didn’t look to cramp nor too rushed. Nice effort on background. But use bubbles for your lines next time. It was a little bit confusing in most parts. Overall, it was enjoyable to read.

SenSparda18- Really long but it was still entertaining.  It was very detailed.

Vote: ChiroM


1-2

WINNER
:iconsensparda18:




13.
:iconvausch-rekab: vausch-rekab.deviantart.com/ar…
VS.
:iconkenshinmeowth: img14.imageshack.us/img14/700/…

the-tired-leaf
Vausch-Rekab:</u> Beautifully coloured. Everything is very bright and crisp. Shading is very well done as well. Really enjoyed the bits of humour you had too! Fit in well to the story! All of your frames are nicely organized. Story progresses really nicely. The black and white pages still look really well drawn. Amazing attention to detail. Especially loved the frames where your one character jumps to attack Press Start, and the next one where he’s punching him. The poses and perspectives you used are incredibly lively. The dynamic between all the characters is also hilarious.

Kenshinmeowth</u>: The narrative for the story is great. Drawings fit the narrative perfectly as well- a simple, comical style. The entry was simple, to the point, yet hilariously done.

Vote: Vausch-Rekab. Although I adored kenshinmeowth’s simple yet humourous entry, Vausch-Rekab’s entry managed to combine the humour of kenshinmeowth’s entry with a well-drawn, well thought out story. Simply put, Vausch-Rekab’s entry was a much more fleshed out effort.


RandomEffect
Winner: Vausch-rekab
Reason for Victory: Good humour, effort put into his pages, including backgrounds... all around better story.


oblivious-life
Vausch-Rekab</u>- haha, didn’t know it was right to left XD i was confused on the first page. But you should state within the page itself that you did it in manga style. Very vibrant colors. Really dynamic. The eating part was just dandy. I’m not sure what happened in page 7 though :O_o: Nice ending too. XD

Kenshinmeowth</u>- Okay, so not really very creative at all in the entry. You just head shot the enemy (which was sort of funny I admit), but there really wasn’t much effort put into it.

Vote Vausch-Rekab


3-0

WINNER
:iconvausch-rekab:




14.
:iconklangoda: ENTRY klangoda.deviantart.com/art/Ha…
VS.
:iconumbri-girl: umbri-girl.deviantart.com/art/…

the-tired-leaf
Klangoda</u>: Love the style of your drawings. Has a nice “smudgy” look to it. The choice to use red and blue as accent colours was really nice. Added an extra touch to it. Love the little details you threw in as well (like when the character is disappearing, the symbols around her ). Story was very straightforward and nothing was really explained! Try and flesh out a story line in the future. However, the quality of drawing was amazing. Definitely one of the better looking entries! Nice!

Umbri-girl</u>: Your characters train of thought at the beginning is especially funny. It also left the door open for future story progression. Love the look of your colouring – it’s uniquely yours. Like you noted, the quality of the drawing goes down after the first page. The shadowy stuff in the second and third page look a bit messy. Enjoyed the banter between both of the characters, however.

Vote: Umbri-girl</u>. If I were deciding the winner solely based on quality of the drawings, Klangoda would definitely win. However, I believe that just by seeing these entries, Umbri-girl’s story has more room for progression. Sorry Klangoda!


RandomEffect
Winner: Umbri-girl</u>
Reason for Victory: I found her story to be more engaging...


oblivious-life
Umbri-girl</u>- What? What just happened? The first page was soo good, I was hoping for the fight of a lifetime and then it just ends with her zapping her opponent? =_=;; That was a bit anti climatic. And yes, you did start off really promising, but the ending was just..meh. Good beginning, not so good ending. The quality sort of decreased too =_=lll

Klangoda</u>- Pretty great entry for someone whose only started using Photoshop. Simple greyscale also worked with the entry. Not too overly dramatic, and an effective fast death – I mean defeat. Liked how you added a little bit of color for her lightning powers and the use of red for blood. Nice job.

VoteKlangoda</u>


1-2

WINNER
:iconumbri-girl:


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Round 2 match ups will be posted by tomorrow night

Meme based off the tourney thanks to :iconyorax: yorax.deviantart.com/art/World…
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:iconumbrascitor:
Umbrascitor Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Done! Enjoy.

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*crosses an item off the ol' to-do list*
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:iconlupineblade:
Lupineblade Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student General Artist
Thanks everyone for the constructive criticism :D I'll work on managing my time and keeping things evenly paced (plot). The first few pages were in ink too btw :)
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student Filmographer
We're they? Hmm, maybe you should adjust the level a bit
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Lupineblade Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student General Artist
Yeah, I'll see what I can pull off with my scanner for the next entry; won't be able to use :iconchirom: 's this time. Kinda bummed that he lost for a technical issue..
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student Filmographer
Ok well good luck in the next round
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:iconlupineblade:
Lupineblade Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student General Artist
Thanks :D
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:iconmeithrose:
Meithrose Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Well,It was fun...But now the sadness died and I wanna see the spectator entry Naoh!
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:iconoblivious-life:
oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student Filmographer
^^; It'll takea a while
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Meithrose Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Aww...Oh well,I can wait.
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5amu5 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
Well, it was a fun ride..even though a short one ^^; Well If I wanted to lose to anyone it would've been Wingednovelist so, I'm not to bummed. The critisism was a great help! I'll look to improve in the future. Good luck to future contestants.
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student Filmographer
Well, you have one more thing to anticipate. And that's the spectator's entry... :> Which is mine
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5amu5 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
Heh, I guess I'll look forward to that...
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telemaja Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
`YEAAAAAAAAAA AWESOME WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOO
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student Filmographer
^^;
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ChickensareCUTE Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
WAAHOOOOO VICTORY!!
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:iconoblivious-life:
oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student Filmographer
lol
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ChickensareCUTE Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
:iconimhappiestplz:
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:iconoblivious-life:
oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student Filmographer
:la:
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ChickensareCUTE Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
:woohoo:
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student Filmographer
:O_o:
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anotoman123 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I was a bit tied up because of class here. My entry was so rushed, even the story got cut off. Oh well, I figured I didn't have much chance against Nova's entry when I read it the first time around anyway.
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Umbri-girl Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
HOLY SHAT! I WON!! :wow: U-Um... Thank you. I'm so grateful that my crappy thing actually passed, and XD gosh oblivous-life as if the guilt weren't enough you magnified what I've been thinking about, I'm terribly sorry to everyone that my fight wasn't better, as it prolly could've been ¬¬'

I SHALL REDEEM MYSELF NEXT ROUND!! WATCH OUT NEXT OPPONENT I'M NOT HALF-ASSING IT THIS TIME!
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Filmographer
:XD: I'm glad you've taken the criticism well. It gives you room to improve (or whatever). But yep! On to the next round =]
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Umbri-girl Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
Oh goodness the next round! I'm so nervous to find out who've I've been paired up against. How do you guys choose btw? Is it just random? Do you use like a random generator thing or just like stick us all in a hat and pull our names out two at a time XD?
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Filmographer
My sister will be the one deciding that :3 She doesn't know what the hell's going on too xD

We also made her choose our secret santa too mwahaha
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Umbri-girl Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
So our fate rests in her hands!? O_O This makes me scared for some reason now. But I guess its better then throwing some dice and praying.
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Filmographer
haha, maybe I should do that next time :XD: Dicing :3
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Umbrascitor Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, and might I suggest starting up a new journal for Round 2? There's a LOT of comments here.... (;'_';)
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Filmographer
Uh I was actually thinking of doing just that ^^; It'd be REALLY cramp if I put Round 2 here xD
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Umbrascitor Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Sweetness! Onward to Round 2.

Now I need to figure out how to keep up the same level of awesome with less time and another tourney going. But hey, I'm giving it my all! I can't wait to see who I'm up against next.
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the-tired-leaf Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
congrats on making it to round 2!
you're entry was definitely one of my favourites. obviously you're going to be really strained for time with the next round and you're going to have to cut back, but I'm confident your entry will be just as great as this round!
good luck in the next round ;)
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Umbrascitor Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm looking forward to it! Really the trickiest part will be in the planning stages.
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Filmographer
Well grats on getting to Round 2 =]
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Umbrascitor Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! There are a bunch of good artists in the running and competition looks like it'll be stiffer, but I still have some plot devices up my sleeve....
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Filmographer
:iconweekenddanceplz:
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RandomEffect Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
Pfft, constructive critism? What's that?

God I suck. xD
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Filmographer
No you're just lazeh :P
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RandomEffect Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
Or I didn't want to make people cry with my normally borderline-adusive critiques. 8D
It's all to make them better artists I swear.
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Filmographer
To become better artists, you need to accept criticism, whether they be harsh or not =_=
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RandomEffect Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
I meant better artists from taking my criticism to make you cry... probably shoulda made that clearer..
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Filmographer
Make who cry? Me?
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RandomEffect Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
-_-
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student Filmographer
:|
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Klangoda Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Whewy, I'm glad Umbri-girl won haha. I was afraid that I might drop out later because of school assignments and such ;) Thanks for the fun!
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the-tired-leaf Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
hey heyy!
obviously I don't have to do this, but wanted to thank you for your entry! know you mentioned you just started using photoshop, but your entry was beautifully done! i'll definitely need to check back to see how your photoshop skills develop - i'm sure they'll be NUCKIN FUTS in no time!
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Klangoda Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Hahaha. Thank you for judging and thanks for the comments =)
Yeah please do check from time to time!
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Filmographer
:thumbsup: good luck with anim. I wish I could join you at Sheridan, but sadly I backed out :(

:whisper: Don't tell Lisa. :XD:
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Klangoda Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Haha thanks a lot =D
You shouldddddd haha. Are you still going to Sheridan?

Lol I cant really tell Lisa, I dont know your real name. :( Well if you're around school, I'm sure Matt or Lisa will make introductions =)
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oblivious-life Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Filmographer
Nooo I'm taking accounting instead over here at my hometown XD I backed out of VCA at the last minute.

But if you say my name to them (Neilizza) they'll remember me xD

And if you tell Lisa I backed out, she's going to start screamin at me on msn :icongwahplz:
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Klangoda Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Oh I see. Fun fun, accounting lol.

Well g'luck in accounting!
I'll keep my mouth shut, though she'll find out eventually lol. ;)
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