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Done for :icondeviantacademy:'s wings of steam challenge [link] took about an hour
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elixer-dream Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's great
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nunt Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010  Hobbyist
thanks :)
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Doodlee-a Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Hey there!
Man, I love how this looks like a bird, and how you got most of the image conveyed without messy lines. I also like how you included different textures with your brush strokes. The machine definitely has a feeling that it could fly, even if it may not in real life. Now, I'm gonna go off the critique of the subject, and go into the background a little. I like the sub glinting on the clouds, but I also think there could be some other hues in the sky. Also, with clouds, they are most often flat on the bottom, with them going lighter and smaller in the bottom. But anyways, hope this helps a little!
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nunt Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010  Hobbyist
Thanks for the tips. The background was very rushed I'm afraid, you can only see the tops of the clouds, so not much scope for flat bottoms.
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Doodlee-a Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, I guess that happens in conceptual paintings. I really need to do more of those!
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nunt Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist
don't we all
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Andy-King Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
Hi, I am part of your critique group for this challenge. :wave:

I like this piece and the loose way in which you have drawn it. The design is very good and looks as though the Wright brothers could have flown in this machine. The colours you have used work very well together and your use of shading is also very well applied. There looks to be a chimney incorporated into the machine with steam coming from it but I was not sure if this was steam or just another cloud.

Overall a very good piece. Keep up the good work.
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nunt Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist
thanks. Yes it was supposed to be steam, I didn't know how to distinguish it from the clouds.
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:iconandy-king:
Andy-King Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
Maybe steam would just be a little less dense than the clouds with slightly less shading? Hey your guess is as good as mine..Cheers AK :thumbsup:
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:iconnunt:
nunt Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010  Hobbyist
I thought it would be darker because it might have some smoke in it, like in a steam train.
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Kopanitsak Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010  Student Filmographer
Great idea and you chose fantastic colors! :D :D :D
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:iconnunt:
nunt Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010  Hobbyist
thanks :)
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:iconkopanitsak:
Kopanitsak Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010  Student Filmographer
You're welcome! :aww:
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hiaamir Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010
that superb, our color combination is GR8, Jen u always done GR8 job. 10/10
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nunt Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2010  Hobbyist
Thanks. I need to do more speedpainting
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:iconhiaamir:
hiaamir Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2010
offcourse, your work is superb i m sure u will achieve your goal,
my prayers are with you.
wishing u best of luck in all of yours fields
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