Shop Forum More Submit  Join Login

foggy morning,
our wires tangled into
the crosshairs of
guns, vulnerabilities
stronger than each
gust of wind…

to run or hide,
to run or hide

:iconladybitterblue:
LadyBitterblue Featured By Owner May 24, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know how you do this, you fierce genius, but you paint a clear, gripping scene in these few words. I love the repetition and lack of punctuation at the ending.
To surviving  Tea
Reply
:iconnullibicity:
Nullibicity Featured By Owner May 30, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
You always make me smile and feel like even the tiniest thoughts I have are beautiful. :aww:
Thank you so much! I honestly never perceive imagery when it comes to my own writing (I mean, of course I hope for it, and I envision it when writing, but I can never see it upon re-reading), so I'm actually really relieved it is there. :heart:
To surviving, sweet one :tea: you inspire me more than you know.
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×

:iconnullibicity: More from Nullibicity


Featured in Collections

Treasured Literature by LadyLincoln


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
May 23, 2016
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
138
Favourites
7 (who?)
Comments
2