She was the quiet sort,
within her eyes,
to pottery skin;
she would mold herself
into moonlight butterflies
and glist'ning calla lilies,
pure and white and
and when night cast
itself upon her in
heated, hard'ning flames,
she’d smash herself
upon the rocks
and in morning start
She was the quiet sort,
I would fill her with poetry,
breathe it in her skin; she is the perfect metaphor,
so beautifully whole and wrecked.
I sort of was infatuated with a poet finding someone whom he wanted to write words upon—thrust his passion upon.
Your thoughts would be much appreciated (and any critique you may have: I'm still learning!)
EDIT: HOLY CRAP A DD! thank you a million times over!
I just want to express my overwhelming gratitude. I'm really just blown away that people would think it good enough for such an award. All the comments, favorites, and watches are extremely appreciated. This just means the world to me.
Also thanks a bunch to `HaveTales-WillTell for the suggestion and ^Beccalicious for the feature!
MagTehPapillon's artistic use/interpretation.
Honestly, from one poet to another. This is the kind of poem you should take to a slam or a contest. With something like this, you would give your competition a run for there money.
You have made a fan out of me.
I really, really appreciate it!
I hope you have a fantastic day! Best wishes~
you always have such amazing words to give to my own. I am very grateful.
Thank you so very much! I, myself, am stunned by your beautiful comment.
Have a fantastic day!
I don't know why you feel so honoured by my words, but I'm flattered! ^////^
Yuup, so they say, hahaha (;
Aaaaand, nahh, thank YOU ^^ You're equally as lovely and sweet as me (:
I'm so happy!
I really love what I've read from you, so that's a super big compliment~
Thank you so much!
and thank you for the comment c:
You're too kind.
I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get to your gallery!
I'll try to do so here sometime this week: My inbox is just exploding, and I should have tamed the beast enough by then
Thanks for the comment! It's deeply appreciated
If you'd like, you can post some links on my page? I may get to them quicker that way, as I'm already going through so many messages... it allows easy access and I'm more likely to jump on it sooner (I tend to be forgetful). It would be no problem at all!
-it was powerful
Now that I think about it, perhaps it really mirrors that... but more for everyone who feels they need/own a mask. thanks for the perspective you lovely person, you!
It was deeply appreciated .
Your comment is deeply appreciated!