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Yan Chan by Noxiouschocolate-3 Yan Chan by Noxiouschocolate-3
 while this is unfinished, i wanted to upload it so i can get some critique.
the reasons for this should be obvious.....
anyway! i'd like to get to improve my line-art too, so any comments on that would be appreciated!
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(remove the hands, i would also like to have the facial expression improvved) 
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InfiniteDiversity Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Good job. It's great that you used different line strengths in this image. It really helps create interest. Well done.
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falcoDArgento Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi ther! What exactly do you mean by “remove”? To erase?

And what kind of expression do you want her to have?
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Noxiouschocolate-3 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I probably should have edited my description XD
well i'd like the hands to look like actual hands instead of rather shortened stubs. as for her facial expression i'd like her to look mischievous with her smile looking more like a smirk.
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falcoDArgento Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahahaha no worries, perhaps you should have, but we can now chat it out

Oh! Now I get it... HAHAHAHA Shortened stubs xDDD C'mon,you've done pretty good, true it can be improved but the idea is clear.. I think your most terrible mistake would be her hand drawn backwards, you see, the thumb area should go exactly at the opposite end
Apart from that, I would point proportions, but it's common mistakes, we all have them

I'm working on a redlining, hope it becomes useful
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