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eBook Number 4: The eBook Master by notabot999 eBook Number 4: The eBook Master by notabot999
eBook 4: The Final Chapter didn't have the same ring to it and I didn't want to go with eBook 4: The Return of Michael Myers.

Greg has a steady job with a loving wife and the two are beginning to start a family. But as his wife becomes pregnant with six babies, Greg quickly learns the downside to his wife having triplet sisters who look and sound exactly like her.

Once again, big ups to zdemian for the cover art and bonus artwork inside.

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UnbirthingKitsune Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2018  Student Writer
What cup sizes are those breasts, they must be REALLY sore with the growing.
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KHAN1997 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017
Awesome
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RedThousand Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The ending isn't quite as cathartic as I would have hoped. I feel aggravated for the protagonist, but there's minimal vicarious closure. 

I can't really critique this without spoiling the plot, but I will say it would have been nice if he got more payback. 

The coming kids from the pregnancies also seems like a downer on top of his torment.
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I'll be brief and try not to spoiler it for people who want to read it, but the Summary and the Preview did not remotely touch the amount of psychological manipulation, cheating, victim-blaming, and emotional torture in this book. The moments of erotica were islands in a sea of angst, and the epilogue honestly made me furious for the weak-willed protagonist who doesn't have any agency but to be a horndog.
Please have at least some disclaimer about what content is in the book, or at least a more representative summary and preview. It makes it feel like a bait-and-switch. I had hoped for things to get better for the protagonist and it never did, it was just depressing.
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cade300 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 27, 2017
Thank you for putting this down. I had been debating on whether to buy this, wondering whether or not it took after "Be Careful What You Wish For" (his previous e-book with a male protagonist). Apparently it does, and I now know not to.

The sheer amount of angst the protagonist suffered through just isn't my cup of tea.
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Adipose-Rex Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Looks like it's up my alley, but I have to ask beforehand: it's just straight-up pregnancy, right? No unbirthing?
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notabot999 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2017
correct
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Adipose-Rex Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Cool
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underusedname Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017
I instantly bought it, and I was not let down! It was a really good read, and the emotional torment Greg goes through was a cool addition to the story.

You did a great job notabot, can't wait for your next ebook!Nice Work Sign 
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notabot999 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017
Thank you
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CaptainHowardWebb Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017
Very cool mate! Cheers! :D
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rikusorasephiroth Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Bought it!
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notabot999 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017
Thank you
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rikusorasephiroth Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
I have to admit, though, that the emotional torment the main character went through was somewhat off-putting. I'd never have that much patience if it were me in his position.
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LeslyeR Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017  Student Artisan Crafter
Beautiful
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