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eBook Number 4: The eBook Master

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Published: September 25, 2017
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eBook 4: The Final Chapter didn't have the same ring to it and I didn't want to go with eBook 4: The Return of Michael Myers.

Greg has a steady job with a loving wife and the two are beginning to start a family. But as his wife becomes pregnant with six babies, Greg quickly learns the downside to his wife having triplet sisters who look and sound exactly like her.

Once again, big ups to zdemian for the cover art and bonus artwork inside.

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Telephone235's avatar
They’re so pregnant it’s great, those big bellies and those boobs are to big for those tops, they also look pretty thicc. They look so pretty and now they look better with big bellies and gigantic boobs, great job
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UnbirthingKitsuneStudent Writer
What cup sizes are those breasts, they must be REALLY sore with the growing.
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RedThousandHobbyist Traditional Artist
The ending isn't quite as cathartic as I would have hoped. I feel aggravated for the protagonist, but there's minimal vicarious closure. 

I can't really critique this without spoiling the plot, but I will say it would have been nice if he got more payback. 

The coming kids from the pregnancies also seems like a downer on top of his torment.
timebomber427's avatar
I'll be brief and try not to spoiler it for people who want to read it, but the Summary and the Preview did not remotely touch the amount of psychological manipulation, cheating, victim-blaming, and emotional torture in this book. The moments of erotica were islands in a sea of angst, and the epilogue honestly made me furious for the weak-willed protagonist who doesn't have any agency but to be a horndog.
Please have at least some disclaimer about what content is in the book, or at least a more representative summary and preview. It makes it feel like a bait-and-switch. I had hoped for things to get better for the protagonist and it never did, it was just depressing.
cade300's avatar
Thank you for putting this down. I had been debating on whether to buy this, wondering whether or not it took after "Be Careful What You Wish For" (his previous e-book with a male protagonist). Apparently it does, and I now know not to.

The sheer amount of angst the protagonist suffered through just isn't my cup of tea.
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Adipose-RexHobbyist Writer
Looks like it's up my alley, but I have to ask beforehand: it's just straight-up pregnancy, right? No unbirthing?
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Adipose-RexHobbyist Writer
Cool
underusedname's avatar
I instantly bought it, and I was not let down! It was a really good read, and the emotional torment Greg goes through was a cool addition to the story.

You did a great job notabot, can't wait for your next ebook!Nice Work Sign 
CaptainHowardWebb's avatar
Very cool mate! Cheers! :D
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rikusorasephirothHobbyist Artist
Bought it!
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rikusorasephirothHobbyist Artist
I have to admit, though, that the emotional torment the main character went through was somewhat off-putting. I'd never have that much patience if it were me in his position.
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LeslyeRStudent Artisan Crafter
Beautiful
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