Trilingual Dark Fantasy writer hailing from the Kingdom of Belgium. Chaotic good. Weaver of emotions and heartache.
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Thanks for a llama. I thought that as a person interested in fantasy and TFs you may find my story worth of notice. If your works include some longer animal/fantasy TF s, I'd be glad to return the favour by providing you with some feedback on my behalf.
I read parts of the first chapter and am quite certain there's a good, solid story in there. Ignoring your lack of expertise in English, it feels like you know where you're going and what you need to rite to get the story flowing. I only read parts because the chapter's too long for me, with that very first HUGE paragraph making it hard for me to get into the story. But I liked what I saw. I'd say what you really need is to improve your mastery of English, so you can edit this story and improve its readability.
PS English is my third language, so trust me: it's possible. XD
I hope you'll see improvement in the later chapters (since I try to proofread them; got even help from a native with the last one). Still, I know the whole thing needs a thorough revision but I have to bring the story to the end first. I count on your feedback. Don't hesitate to point out both the good nad weak sides, while I'll take a look at your writings.
Please don't count on my feedback. I have already two other people waiting and can barely keep up. After these, I won't be feedbacking thoroughly for free anymore.