Void Knights

Hi, I found you over @ProjectComment . I think it`s an easy to understand, yet still imaginitive concept that lends itself well to a lot of storytelling. That your characters are basically only shaows adds a lot of mystique but I feel like you didn`t use all the tools at your disposal to make them as intimitating as possible. With Chtulu`s round head looming over them, in this case, I think the round shapes in the characters actually work well since they mirror him, but draw out the pointy shapes as well! Those wings, for example, draw them downward, let them have a defining, intimidating shape! Or the antenna on the earpiece, really ham that up. No thin lines that kinda seem unsure, you`re basically only working with silhouettes here, every line (or form) counts! Also I would play around with size and placement of the characters, especially in relation to each other, maybe you even find out that your kanvas format itself wasn`t the right fit after all, who knows? Basiclly, I would treat that picture right here as more of a concept art for the final piece. I think it had crazy potential if you overhauled it a bit!