I just read through the novel and I have to say, I loved it very much. The art was so ahead of its time, with colorful feathered dinos that acted like animals instead of movie monsters. You are a very skilled artist nowadays too. Props to you, my good fellow!
Need to change the articulation of the wrists... Pronation was not and is not possible in dinosaurs - avian and non avian alike. Something that REALLY needs to be addressed in movies/comics/etc