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The pain of loss pg 5 (final) by ninpeachlover The pain of loss pg 5 (final) by ninpeachlover
Page 5 of my comic. Thanks to read this comic.
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NJDRAGON98 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2018
Why did I not read this sooner this is So Cool!
Awesome Job. Keep It Up.
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks
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NJDRAGON98 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2018
No Prob Bob.
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StarElisah Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Niiice!!
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks
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StarElisah Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
No problemo
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TOmega1 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Such a great comic story btw. I wish my comic I get as much views as your comic is getting. 
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why do not you try and spread your comic for everyone to see?
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TOmega1 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 10, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually I am spreading my comic for everyone to see but people are just ignoring my comic.


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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know.
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Qrow92 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2018
I like this origin story for your OC! ^_^

Also did you catch the Nintendo Direct? Smash is coming to Switch and we get to be Octolings on Splatoon 2! :happybounce:
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see. This is so nice that the inklings is on smash and octolings are playable 
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Qrow92 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2018
I know right? ^o^
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gold-ring-951 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2018
I'd give this story a 4.5 out of 5. :D Such interesting back story and character development. If the whole world of Smash Bros was cannon to all of Nintendo's franchise as well as the 3rd Party ones that took part in it, she would make such an interesting antagonist to all heroes and villains. It's a thought, but her tragic past could lead to having her maybe do what's truly right someday in the future.
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Maybe in the new smash bros 
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gold-ring-951 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2018
Which just got reviled at Nintendo Direct! :D
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theagentofvenom Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Professional Writer
It was pretty fun dubbing this story, even though Portuguese isn't my first language. 
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wish i could to dub this comic 
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ClaireAimee Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
I love her design! The bright and short blue hair contrasting with the dark and long costume. I can't wait to see more of Tabaata! (I'm gonna call em' Tabby)
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks 
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JackHammer86 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I remember meeting you on Miitomo and then discovering your DeviantArt and I never thought you'd make something like this. Good job.
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks
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If Mario ever heard her story, I bet he would say "Ah, you are so misguided...", and then tell her what Tabuu planned for them, and that it would only end in the destruction of the World of Trophies, and the Smash Bros themselves in the process. But if she didn't care and only saw the Smash Bros as nothing but evil villains, he should ask her: "Would destroying both us and this world, just to create an even bigger Great Maze in Subspace, make you any different than how you see us? If you don't believe so, then ask everyone else who lives here, not just us."
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AnonymousGX Featured By Owner Edited Mar 7, 2018
So basically the plot for the final season of Samurai Jack? (start at 0:32) youtu.be/LaMjzGrIgJM?t=32 and www.youtube.com/watch?v=EpdaPR…
Or maybe Avatar?
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TRUErealSEGASonicfan Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018
I'm not sure about that since she needs to be aware of the lives living in the World of Trophies, not just her enemies. Though she may not even think about them at first being so dead-set on both revenge, and rebuilding Tabuu's Great Maze. Though if you're talking about Ashi and the cult of Aku, then I get what you're saying.
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AnonymousGX Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018
Ashi is the plot of the final season, so yes.
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TRUErealSEGASonicfan Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018
Got it. Wish you were a bit more specific earlier though so that I could make sure I understood what you meant at the time.
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AnonymousGX Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2018
Sorry. I had replied, then edited it as I found relevant clips.
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TRUErealSEGASonicfan Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2018
Which Avatar were you talking about though? There's two different media with that name, a TV series and a movie, and both were popular.
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AnonymousGX Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2018
Not TLA. The one where Jake thought the outside world was cruel and savage until the natives taught him otherwise, then he realized that he was the invader trying to corrupt and destroy their native world rather than simply mining it for materials.
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good speech
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TRUErealSEGASonicfan Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018
Glad you liked it. But I really hope they can teach her that lesson somehow.
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TOmega1 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A Smash Bros OC? Cool. If Tabuu is that mysterious and powerful, we can only imagine how powerful Tabaata can be.
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She is very strong, more than your father
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TOmega1 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She's stronger than your dad as well.
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treystar679X Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Student General Artist
Any chance of a potential sequel to the comic?
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I do not know. I have not been thinking about it.
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AnonymousGX Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018
I'd love a sequel! I have an idea, but before I share it, I want to double-check. Who is everybody that Tabaata saw fighting Tabuu, off or on panel? I can make out Sonic/Wolf, Samus, Ness, (Adult?) Link, Kirby, Mario, and either Duck Hunt or Fox as a literal Fox.

My idea depends on if she did NOT see Pit. Is it possible that Viridi or Palutena can mistake her powers for a fellow goddess and take her in? A couple hijinks/interactions with Pit, maybe getting along with Dark Pit, learning about her father's killers before seeing how making Subspace threatened their worlds and people. Maybe a twist ending is that Tabaata cares for/loves Pit, but he was there too to kill Tabuu. Can she forgive her friend, accept her new family?
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, but I already have a plot in mind, and it's with Tabaata and his partners Master Gauntlet and Crazy Gauntlet organizing a great tournament for all smash fighters, but it was actually a trap to destroy them and so use the power of the two hands to activate a giant bomb
of the subspace
that will cover the whole world creating the new subspace.
And one more think:
Wolf does not participate on the story mode and Duck Hunt only appears on smash bros wii u and 3ds.
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AnonymousGX Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018
I knew about Wolf and Duck Hunt. It's just how I thought I saw them.

Decent plot there. I think the main problem is that Master Hand isn't a villain. He had to be manipulated, puppeteer by Tabuu. So for Master Hand and Crazy Hand to trust her, she'll have to be super convincing, and not let them know about her true goals.
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