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School's OUT!!!

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Something I've been slowly working on also I'll be posting 5 additional pages tomorrow. Featuring Pokey From :iconrandommode:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

TL<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>R: All in all, great piece! It get's me excited and intrigued to read your comic (as a good cover should). However, I'd recommend going 'all out' on the added effects and logo to really hit it home next time.
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I'd have to say, this piece is indeed a great cover/ promotional for the series! It was also masterful of you to match each character's color scheme with the background. The action lines and use of bright, basic colors really grabs your attention as you gaze at the piece. While the overpowering red initially demands your attention, the contrast of blue and then middle ground of green cause your eyes to wander the image and take it all in. Including the three main characters while showing their personalities: ferocity, confidence, and innocence was a great touch as well. Might I also add that by making each character box a different (and not equal) shape, you successfully showed that while they might not be close friends, they are not entirely opposed to each other (as equal box size would suggest).

While this is truly a powerful piece, there are some things that I'd say prevent the technique (and through that, other factors) from gaining more points. Primarily it's the size of different components to your composition. First, I noticed you were trying to make the dividing lines look "cracked" as if the girl in red has just punched the screen. While indeed a good touch, I feel adding some glare from the fractured glass or perhaps more jagged lines along the left side would really send the message home. Secondly, the main title of the comic seems too small. While I understand that you want to bring attention to your amazing character designs, you also want people to remember to remember the name of your series. Perhaps centering it and definitely enlarging it would help this piece.

All in all, great piece! It get's me excited and intrigued to read your comic (as a good cover should). However, I'd recommend going 'all out' on the added effects and logo to really hit it home next time. I hope to see more hype stuff from you in the future! Stay Cool!
-C30
tlwelker's avatar
INTENSE ANIME ANGLES are always a welcome sight, nicely done!
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Thank you very much
Hoovy-Time's avatar
Is gud, I'm tempted to write a critique review, however I suck when it comes to saying stuff so ya did a good job ma ninja
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Superjustinbros's avatar
I would so read a Pokey comic...

Sweet art man! Always love seeing your trio of school kids. :3
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DeadCobra's avatar
This is quite nice
RevTakko's avatar
This looks awesome!
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RevTakko's avatar
Your welcome man
FantasyRebirth96's avatar
How enjoyable this is~ Very nice job!
Randommode's avatar
May I ask a follow up, was the comic a reference to some other work or it was just random things ? 
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Just random mode
Randommode's avatar
Dude thank you so much for the reference I got to do one of the School's OUT characters now Kawaii Turtle The art is really awesome, their designs are great 
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Np dude, and thanks
Sorantheman's avatar
I'd wonder why Pokey is running from the lovechild of a carrot and a Prinny, but I feel as if the answer would only raise more questions.
Either way, nice work on this one.Looking forward for more pages of the comic.
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