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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 23
March 11 Yagura sat in his new office, crying silently to himself. Though he was a warrior who carried out every mission without fail, he was not without emotion. Saizo was more than a mentor, he was a father to him. After Yagura’s parents died in the 2nd Great Shinobi War and the majority of his clan was decimated, Saizo adopted Yagura. Yagura sat in the seat of the “father” he just killed and had to find some sort of solace for his actions. “This was the death he wanted,” he thought. “I hope I can be the Mizukage he expected me to be.” Music started playing outside of his office window. Through t
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 22
March 10 Halfway through their first bowl of ramen at Ichiraku, “Tell me what you saw, Hizashi.” It was night and day in the difference between the way the two teens ate. Obito was a slob and Hizashi ate with manners. “There’s a seal on your heart. I can’t tell if it is restricting your chakra or if you were just holding back. Either way, this could prove dangerous in the future.” “Do you know what kind of seal it is,” Obito asked as he slurped up some ramen. “I do not. It is a very high level seal,” he explained. “We might want to tell Yondaime-sama and see what can be don
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 21
March 10 Aiko woke up to the sound of Madara coughing. She rushed over to him. “Ojii-sama!!!” She knelt by his side and clutched his cold wrinkled hand. “Ojii-sama? Are you okay?” “Yes, magomusume. I’m ok. Thank you.” Madara didn’t have long to live. He planned to spend the rest of his energy training Aiko to be the perfect weapon, to foster the hatred he implanted inside her and make her the greatest tool he ever wielded. “How are you feeling, child? Are you well enough to begin your training?” She nodded. Seeing her grandfather in such a sorry state hurt her to her core. He&#821
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 20
March 7 It had been a couple days since the recon mission to Uzushio. Kushina was still a wreck over what she had seen. Her entire clan wiped out, save for a few. Friends she’d known as a child, their parents, their children… all slaughtered. She couldn’t even speak when it was time to give Minato the report. She sat in her room on the bed in the dark with only a candle for light. There was a soft knock on the window. She didn’t move. There was a second knock. “Go away,” she uttered. She knew it was not her husband. He didn’t knock and he was still at the Hokage’s office. “We’re c
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 19
March 6 The sights, smells and sounds of Uzushiogakure resonated with Obito. He finally built up the will to visit his grandmother's grave. He took a bouquet of yellow roses that he'd gotten from the Yamanaka flower shop. They were her favorite. She kept them on the dining room table in an ornate vase adorned in the Uchiha colors. He stood there for what seemed like a lifetime before speaking. “Hi, obaa-chan. I got you something. It's those flowers you love.” He set the flowers on tree grass in front of her tombstone. “I am so sorry I wasn't here when you needed me, obaa-chan. I'm sorry you died not knowing that I was ok.&
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 18
March 3 It was early. The sun hadn’t even fully emerged over the horizon yet and the dew still rested on the leaves of the bushes. The smell of the fog was thickly mixed with the scent of the forest. Once past the edge of the forest, the team saw the entrance to Uzushiogakure. They stood on a cliff overlooking the island village. The waters surrounding the village were littered with whirlpools and jagged rock formations with dark clouds overhead. It was the perfect natural naval defense. “How the hell do we cross that,” asked Obito in shock and awe. Kushina had a big smile on her face. “We are gonna ride the waves,
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 16
February 28 Team Doutou completed their mission with minimal casualties. Doutou ordered Aiko and Kaede to return to Konoha as he and Hizashi transported the prisoners to Houzuki Castle to be detained. The fires quelled and the villagers calmed, the team parted ways. Behind the girls followed Black and white Zetsu. They knew of Hizashi’s sensory abilities and laid in wait for the perfect time to spring their trap. Aiko was the last piece of their puzzle, especially since they lost Obito. She had potential. But would she be able to reach the potential that Madara needed in such a short amount of time? Would he be able to cultivate that
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 17
March 1 Minato returned to HIS office and sat in HIS chair at HIS desk. He hung his robe and hat on the coat rack by the door. Shortly after he sat down, Kakashi and Obito walked in to his office. He summoned them for his first official mission assignment as Hokage. Obito had not changed the way he spoke to Minato. “Hey, Minato-sensei. What’s up?” Kakashi interjected, “Call him Hokage-sama or Yondaime-sama while we are in the office, idiot.” Minato smiled at his students. He wished Rin was there to see his progress, as well. The fact that he couldn’t save her weighed heavily on his heart. “I wante
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 15
February 27 Hiruzen recently announced his retirement. The village was in a frenzy getting prepared for the inauguration of the 4th hokage. Hiruzen has stressed, happy and sad that his time was coming to an end. But he felt it was finally his time to relax. In one of his final acts, he summoned Kushina, Shikaku, Obito and Mikoto Uchiha to his office. They all stood in front of his desk. It was early and the room was dim. “You 4 have been gathered here because there are reports of the Uzumaki clan has been attacked. Your job is to go to Uzushiogakure and investigate this attack. We’ve sent messages ahead, but there has been no wo
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 14
February 19 Minato returned from the summit with Hiruzen. It was time for Hiruzen to announce his retirement to the people of Konoha. In doing so, it was also time to announce his successor. This would be hard to announce due to all of the people who would show their disdain toward him: Orochimaru, Fugaku Uchiha, many more war heroes. And Danzo? Danzo would surely have words for Hiruzen. Words that he didn’t care to hear. Minato rushed home to see his wife and students. As he opened the door, he saw them all in the living room. Kakashi was reading on the couch. Next to him was Obito, eating a bowl of ramen he had made from leftovers.
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 23
March 11 Yagura sat in his new office, crying silently to himself. Though he was a warrior who carried out every mission without fail, he was not without emotion. Saizo was more than a mentor, he was a father to him. After Yagura’s parents died in the 2nd Great Shinobi War and the majority of his clan was decimated, Saizo adopted Yagura. Yagura sat in the seat of the “father” he just killed and had to find some sort of solace for his actions. “This was the death he wanted,” he thought. “I hope I can be the Mizukage he expected me to be.” Music started playing outside of his office window. Through t
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 22
March 10 Halfway through their first bowl of ramen at Ichiraku, “Tell me what you saw, Hizashi.” It was night and day in the difference between the way the two teens ate. Obito was a slob and Hizashi ate with manners. “There’s a seal on your heart. I can’t tell if it is restricting your chakra or if you were just holding back. Either way, this could prove dangerous in the future.” “Do you know what kind of seal it is,” Obito asked as he slurped up some ramen. “I do not. It is a very high level seal,” he explained. “We might want to tell Yondaime-sama and see what can be don
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 21
March 10 Aiko woke up to the sound of Madara coughing. She rushed over to him. “Ojii-sama!!!” She knelt by his side and clutched his cold wrinkled hand. “Ojii-sama? Are you okay?” “Yes, magomusume. I’m ok. Thank you.” Madara didn’t have long to live. He planned to spend the rest of his energy training Aiko to be the perfect weapon, to foster the hatred he implanted inside her and make her the greatest tool he ever wielded. “How are you feeling, child? Are you well enough to begin your training?” She nodded. Seeing her grandfather in such a sorry state hurt her to her core. He&#821
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 20
March 7 It had been a couple days since the recon mission to Uzushio. Kushina was still a wreck over what she had seen. Her entire clan wiped out, save for a few. Friends she’d known as a child, their parents, their children… all slaughtered. She couldn’t even speak when it was time to give Minato the report. She sat in her room on the bed in the dark with only a candle for light. There was a soft knock on the window. She didn’t move. There was a second knock. “Go away,” she uttered. She knew it was not her husband. He didn’t knock and he was still at the Hokage’s office. “We’re c
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 19
March 6 The sights, smells and sounds of Uzushiogakure resonated with Obito. He finally built up the will to visit his grandmother's grave. He took a bouquet of yellow roses that he'd gotten from the Yamanaka flower shop. They were her favorite. She kept them on the dining room table in an ornate vase adorned in the Uchiha colors. He stood there for what seemed like a lifetime before speaking. “Hi, obaa-chan. I got you something. It's those flowers you love.” He set the flowers on tree grass in front of her tombstone. “I am so sorry I wasn't here when you needed me, obaa-chan. I'm sorry you died not knowing that I was ok.&
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 18
March 3 It was early. The sun hadn’t even fully emerged over the horizon yet and the dew still rested on the leaves of the bushes. The smell of the fog was thickly mixed with the scent of the forest. Once past the edge of the forest, the team saw the entrance to Uzushiogakure. They stood on a cliff overlooking the island village. The waters surrounding the village were littered with whirlpools and jagged rock formations with dark clouds overhead. It was the perfect natural naval defense. “How the hell do we cross that,” asked Obito in shock and awe. Kushina had a big smile on her face. “We are gonna ride the waves,
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 16
February 28 Team Doutou completed their mission with minimal casualties. Doutou ordered Aiko and Kaede to return to Konoha as he and Hizashi transported the prisoners to Houzuki Castle to be detained. The fires quelled and the villagers calmed, the team parted ways. Behind the girls followed Black and white Zetsu. They knew of Hizashi’s sensory abilities and laid in wait for the perfect time to spring their trap. Aiko was the last piece of their puzzle, especially since they lost Obito. She had potential. But would she be able to reach the potential that Madara needed in such a short amount of time? Would he be able to cultivate that
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 17
March 1 Minato returned to HIS office and sat in HIS chair at HIS desk. He hung his robe and hat on the coat rack by the door. Shortly after he sat down, Kakashi and Obito walked in to his office. He summoned them for his first official mission assignment as Hokage. Obito had not changed the way he spoke to Minato. “Hey, Minato-sensei. What’s up?” Kakashi interjected, “Call him Hokage-sama or Yondaime-sama while we are in the office, idiot.” Minato smiled at his students. He wished Rin was there to see his progress, as well. The fact that he couldn’t save her weighed heavily on his heart. “I wante
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 15
February 27 Hiruzen recently announced his retirement. The village was in a frenzy getting prepared for the inauguration of the 4th hokage. Hiruzen has stressed, happy and sad that his time was coming to an end. But he felt it was finally his time to relax. In one of his final acts, he summoned Kushina, Shikaku, Obito and Mikoto Uchiha to his office. They all stood in front of his desk. It was early and the room was dim. “You 4 have been gathered here because there are reports of the Uzumaki clan has been attacked. Your job is to go to Uzushiogakure and investigate this attack. We’ve sent messages ahead, but there has been no wo
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 14
February 19 Minato returned from the summit with Hiruzen. It was time for Hiruzen to announce his retirement to the people of Konoha. In doing so, it was also time to announce his successor. This would be hard to announce due to all of the people who would show their disdain toward him: Orochimaru, Fugaku Uchiha, many more war heroes. And Danzo? Danzo would surely have words for Hiruzen. Words that he didn’t care to hear. Minato rushed home to see his wife and students. As he opened the door, he saw them all in the living room. Kakashi was reading on the couch. Next to him was Obito, eating a bowl of ramen he had made from leftovers.
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 23
March 11 Yagura sat in his new office, crying silently to himself. Though he was a warrior who carried out every mission without fail, he was not without emotion. Saizo was more than a mentor, he was a father to him. After Yagura’s parents died in the 2nd Great Shinobi War and the majority of his clan was decimated, Saizo adopted Yagura. Yagura sat in the seat of the “father” he just killed and had to find some sort of solace for his actions. “This was the death he wanted,” he thought. “I hope I can be the Mizukage he expected me to be.” Music started playing outside of his office window. Through t
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Naruto: Obito Daitai Monogatari Chapter 7
Seito stood face to face with the last opponent. “So it’s just you and me. You can still leave if you want.” The ninja removed his ANBU mask. He was mid 20s with green eyes and black spiky hair. His lust for blood was written on his face. “Me? Run? Noooo. I just didn’t want help when I killed you. There's no honor in that.” Seito became curious. “Who are you?” “My name is Hideki Nishimura.” “I’m Seito of Konohagakure.” They each drew kunai and darted toward each other, clashing blades. … Obito’s shadow clone caught up to Kakashi, Asuma and Shizune
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Hopefully I can include them in my story when I get that far
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would be very cool <3
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Sweet. Since their your characters, tell me their personalities and abilities and in make them look great
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I love your page and your Gaara family
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