Halter Entry for 932 Ls Shawshank

Alright, I've scoured your gallery, and I wanted to look specifically at the art you do for others, not because I want to see what you can do for me, but for the main reason that (and even I do this from time to time) you never put the same amount of effort into your own work as you do work for others. And I wanted to see what you could really put out there.

I do love that you took the time to do the background yourself instead of grabbing a pre-made background. I like that you didn't use a reference either. I myself have just started with doing this type of art, used to manips, so I'm still new. But the one thing I'd like to see from your art, is that you take the time to make the lines more defined. More crisp I guess is what I'm trying to say. They look a bit haphazard. You've got the body style down pat, and personally I couldn't do that, not yet. I suck at getting that stuff down right. <3