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Happy Leaf (Commission)

By Nieris
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OstrowskiArt's avatar
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I like how it is not over saturated and colorful. Colour theme in general is very appealing and soothing.
That being said, I think values are not quite there.
It looks a bit washed out and same-ish. Could use bit more contrast. Darker shadows, lighter highlights etc. Especially foreground could use some shade.
Also there should be quite distinct shadow from the log and both of the characters because right now i'm not quite sure where your light source is. It should be more direct. It is a sunny day after all.
Please don't take the above wrong because I like the piece in general. Nice job!
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Rosalina-Prower's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Your technique is impressive. The figures are well shaped, the colors are in complete harmony and your shading is simply breathtaking. I love how you catched the scene so well, as I can feel the mood shown in this picture. Also, the emotions here feel so real I can make out the girl's personality just looking at her face. Her clothes are original, but also familiar, which can say she's been traveling with her pet for quite a long time. I can see she has a strong bond with the pet, looking at the way they are walking and their faces. The background is also impressive, which it's clear you have put a lot of effort into. Sorry for my bad english, but all I want to say is that this piece is incredible.
aNNzaRR's avatar
Impressive !!
Marcotonio-desu's avatar
You have improved so much in 3 years, I'm impressed!

This one is my favorite from your gallery, faved. ^^
ItsMeCerosie's avatar
Calm and relaxing
The-Stormbringer's avatar
This one is fantastic! I hope you wind up making more with these characters. What are they from, anyway?
sebo3e's avatar
Very impressive drawing and nice to
Nieris's avatar
thank you so much!
StreetKombatfighter's avatar
super cute LOVE IT ! :love:
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rbaker923's avatar
This is beautiful, it reminds me of when I used to be little... for a little while I got to go to a nursery school where they had a llama the children could sometimes pet...
Jess--Art's avatar
I have seen this piece somewhere else ... Have you ?!?! Did you steal it or ...
Qube-Core's avatar
Nope, she doesn't.
Nieris is the creator of this artwork.
And I was the commisioner :)
This piece was worth the whole amount money :D
Jess--Art's avatar
Ooooooook sorry I ...^^ I get it 
isabellahuhn's avatar
This is so cute!
Miss-Tbones's avatar
An incredible piece!:clap::wow:
Dyemsi's avatar
I cant believed that someone this good..
added one of my art in her favorite.
WOW your soo awesome ma'am Nod 
 
Cestarian's avatar
This is incredibly good :la:
Artsyrose97's avatar
I love your art style.:) (Smile) 
WairaTimothy's avatar
this is good.............. love the colour
lydell-vik's avatar
This is so cool, the warmth is beautiful.
diggermutant's avatar
What a beautiful day, walking the goat (?) through the enchanted forest.

My critique would be the clouds and the perspective of the log don't quite convey the direction of motion. The clouds seem to have the same level of shading depth as the foreground so it clutters the composition. It's hard to explain without drawing a mockup but if the girl's backside had been shown, or the other end of the bridge was closer to the viewer, I think the composition would be more effective.
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