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Fairy Tale (Step by, step first patreon reward ^^)

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 Just a few steps of my  art !

Fairy Tale by Nieris

Now I decided to begin to make rewards to my patreon (I had patreon before, but I just showed to free content) 

This is a shortened version of my drawing stages. The full version can be found on my patreon ^ _ ^ (it is much more stages, and there is also an explanation)


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CandyesFox's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

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I really like your style, characters and settings, and you know that - but I have a couple of suggestions this time!
Starting with originality, I've nothing in particular to say, I like this pretty witch and all this cute cats surrounding her in that dark, magic forest - the whole is pretty well built! I keep the 5 stars for strokes of genius you sometimes have (like the revisiting of Red Riding Hood)!
With the impact, I've something to say. I love how you built the scene to carry the idea of the spectator watching hidden in a bush, or even more likely, like the spectactor is a cat himself. It works very well also thanks to the perspective of the trees, that give the idea of a worm-view perspective! The only thing that doesn't convince me completely is the witch: I honestly would have exaggerated the perspective on her, I think that could have improved the impact! But it works also the way it's done, and I know it's also a matter of personal taste, so consider this a totally personal opinion!
Here we go on the technique. You can draw. And we both know you can do it very well. Your style is clear and coherent. The use of light is very good, the anatomy too, and also clothes are well done! I love the colors, the purple was a wise choice. But I do notice a flaw, that honestly I think it's the major issue of the drawing! Look at the witch and at the tree she's sitting on: now look at her butt. It really looks like she's flying! It looks like a tiny part of her butt is on the verge of the tree, making for her impossible to stay in that position, and the legs look like they're laying on the air! It's a pretty strong impression and once you notice it, it's quite a punch in the face considering the rest of the drawing! I still want to give you 4 stars even if it's a major issue - foundamentally because I perfectly know it's that kind of error that everyone can do very easily because of the tiniest distraction - I've seen it lots and lots of times!

Well, conclusions!
I like the drawing and I liked to see how you build them, and I must say, it's the same techinque I'm personally trying to reach! Maybe the artwork isn't perfect, but it's worth following you and being a patron too! Great job, don't stop with the good art, can't wait to see other from you! <3
RADISHEAD's avatar
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The style in which you have drawn this is gorgeous. I love that you have included the different steps of the process as part of your deviant piece. I also love the color pallet. Choosing purple as the highlight plays well with all of the darker tones in the background, and even the greens. I also like the chunkier look of the painting of the cats. They are all so dynamic. This is a character that I think you could do a lot with (though I haven't checked your whole gallery, so you may have already). Great original concept and well done using the digital medium.
mander-lee's avatar
Ah wow! Even the first frame is already really good, lol!
AnimatedGeek100's avatar
Very helpful! Thank you!
termkiller's avatar
I really like that and I wish I could draw just nearly as well as you! :wave:
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artofmerm's avatar
Красиво!!! :love: У каждого этапа есть свой стиль! :)
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Juvartis's avatar
If only I had the pation and the understanding of light and shadow in color, I would try to fallow these steps Sweating a little... 

Really great work! Thumbs up :) (Smile) 
GoldieSmile12's avatar
хорошая работа! это действительно круто
hellphy's avatar
what kind of witchery is that ! its incredible 
Arineange's avatar
Awesome from the beginning till the end :D
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Erzberger's avatar
Top notch, I love it!
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firefysh1140's avatar
This is really very well done.
Ienjoy watching the transformation.  :-)
Nieris's avatar
thank you so much :3
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CandyesFox's avatar
Love it!!! *w* 
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CandyesFox's avatar
You are welcome sweetheart! ^w^
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