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Jungle River by NielsHoyle-Dodson Jungle River by NielsHoyle-Dodson
Jungle river concept took about 4 hours. Would love some constructive criticism.
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Shellquake Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I rather be a place like that than in a big, crowded town.
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SlenderCats Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This looks amazing! Could I maybe used this to describe some territory in my group? It is a roleplay about domestic sized cats living in the amazon in the 1600's. :D I would add it to my group so others would know who it belonged too!
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mythmutt Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
ha this is amazing!

would you mind us using it as a room on Exodus? u v u

(full credit  will be given a' course.) 
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TheKiyaGirl Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Beautiful work! (= Do you mind if I may please use this for a Chatlands game? ^-^
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NielsHoyle-Dodson Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
no go ahead
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derbz Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
it just seems slightly at the wrong angle at the moment further in the distance, as if the water was flowing slightly uphill
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derbz Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Hi Niels, as far as constructive feedback goes, you have a solid start here with this image that a few tweaks will push it much further.Firstly, be wary of your perspectives, the middle section of the stream seems off balance a little, the bend in the river should be exaggerated to the right.
Light, you have a strong light source coming through in this from the sun, because of this, where the light hits certain sections of the jungle the colours of leaves, bushes etc would be very bright and strong, don't be afraid to push your colour values.
Another thing to help add more depth to the image, if you have any spatter effect brushes then use them in areas where the foliage is thicker, it gives the impression of vast amounts of leaves and growth.

Good luck with your next concept
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NielsHoyle-Dodson Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much, just reading this critique i know how i can improve a great deal, one question i do have though is what do you meen by bend in the river being exagerated? should it be more imediate as it dissapears?
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NielsHoyle-Dodson Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
also i took a look at your gallery and im adding you to my watch list, very inspiring works :D
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Zaleho Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its very calming :) i like it
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Jocruair Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
I like the atmosphere, nice work!
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NielsHoyle-Dodson Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Student Digital Artist
thank you
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midorinranchan Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
I like the purple flowers
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