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The Toa- 128- Translator

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A bit of insight into Matoro, another child of destiny similar to Takua.

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How come your text is still so small? There’s plenty of space
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Wait, THIS is small? Seems about the same size as you'd see in most comics to me...?

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It’s the same size is on Planet Ripple Vol 1
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No, that text was 7.8, this is 10. Sometimes 12.

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That’s still pretty small
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What should the size be, then? 20?30?
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AutisticArtHCHobbyist General Artist
Possibly, like there’s SO much free space on this page
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I just don't get why it needs to be filled up when there's so little dialog. It'd destroy the atmosphere.

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Must be hard on him. Secrets are a burden :/
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I'm sure the other Matoran would understand Matoro's withholding of the truth. Being Nuju's tranlstor, of course he'd need to keep things hush-hush.

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