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Planet Ripple- 41- Cousins

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Hey look, more world building!

You know what I hate seeing writers do? That "As you know" bunk I touched upon a couple of pages ago. But here, a little exposition is okay, because it's being fed to kids who yeah, probably don't know much about these things! They're as unaware and ready to learn about their world as we, the readers, are. And the fact that Minnow's there, just killing time while waiting for her appointment with a case worker, gives us an excuse to tag along with her, so we can see her seeing them seeing this.

I'm doing my best to make the exposition in this story feel as natural and painless as I can by using tricks like this. I hope it helps.

Also, try reading the voice-over with Morgan Freeman or David Attenborough's voice in your head.

That's it for today!

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Who doesn't love a bit of speculative biology?