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Bionicle- Nova Orbis- Return- Chapter 12

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The stage is set.

Originally, this chapter and the next were going to be one, but... yeah, no. The battle to come is BIG. So big, that it's going to need an entire chapter dedicated to it.

And to think, we're still only at the halfway mark of this part of the story!

That's it for today.

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Battledroidunit047's avatar
Well, now that the Novus are wearing dummies, I guess this means we're screwed... And MAN Piras and Venti are such assholes!
finishingthefight's avatar
awesome chapter, though I think I found a spelling error, when Piras says "I've don't have a soul" believe he meant "I don't have a soul"
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Whoops. Thanks.
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That image of the Toa Novus with dummy masks was the scariest thing I've seen in a while. Good job, man. It is surprising that they look different. I assumed all dummy masks looked the same, like Ahkmou's. It helps identify them, but I don't see why the Caelum would care about that.

The Toa Novus can't seem to catch a break, either. The phrase "out of the frying pan and into the fire" comes to mind.
NickOnPlanetRipple's avatar
There are six kinds of dummy masks, made for certain Matoran and Toa. You may've noticed, Imber and Silva are wearing the same kind. I'll make a promotional piece going over the different kinds and how they effect their wearers.
CJGamer99's avatar
'Venti shook his head. "You're all pretty short-sighted.' Couldn't help but notice the Toa with the Mask of Farsight pointing out shortsightedness. XD

Good Arceus, already halfway through book 2? Where does all the time go? Nonetheless, this series is going fantastically.
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Damn this is just like the story of dredgen yor, he was once a renowned hunter in destiny but was consumed by the darkness and became the very thing he fought against, in a pub he shot and killed multiple people just because someone bothered him about where he got his infamous hand cannon the Thorn "Your a guardian?!...Your supposed to be one of the good guys!!" ""Supposed to be?" Maybe I am. Maybe this is what "good" looks like." after that he destroyed multiple settlements including one of their protectors Jaren ward of the Last word, it was only until his surrogate son was able to put an end to the monster.
wjones215's avatar
You ended writing way to much for one chapter. It must be good if that was the case.
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Well, that was an unexpected turn.
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