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Bionicle- Nova Orbis- Mystery- Chapter 22

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Things are coming to a head from all angles. There's only so many ways this can end, now. I should have this story wrapped up in another two chapters... three, tops. Maybe an epilogue that leads to next year's story.  I can't promise the next chapter will come online on Monday, though. No, I'm going to take the next day or two to catch up on commissions. I've been neglecting buyers to get this done, but I'll get to them now. The next chapter will be released soon after I'm done with those. Heck, if I do this right, this story just might get wrapped up by the end of the week. We'll see.


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SILENTPHANTOMOMEGA's avatar
SILENTPHANTOMOMEGAHobbyist Artist
ok getting close now
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steamdieselStudent Artist

“You’d think this was one of your first battles,” Ultio jeered.  “I, on the other hand, have enjoyed the privilege of slaying dozens of your kind.”

Waitasec.  Does this mean Ultio MURDERED the Toa Miro and the Matoran who traveled with them???

Battledroidunit047's avatar
I'm SURE something of the sort has happened
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steamdieselStudent Artist
I don't think so anymore.  This was years and years ago.
Battledroidunit047's avatar
yeah... three years specifically...
toalorikan626's avatar
Wow what got this fleshes gears twisted, i mean why would he have such a grudge against a people who's history has been nothing but creation and peace, hell the Matoran civil war only started because of trading issues and was never tribe oriented, if anything some jabbing at their respective element here and their but they have only judged someone by their personal work ethic and their experience with one another. and they would never raise tool or weapon in intentional offence, so how did these tensions happen?
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ToaAerrowHobbyist Writer
I'm probably wrong, but I think Ultio is Makuta.
Just a theory.
jayzor17's avatar
Is his armor similar to/based off of Marendar? (as little as we know about that thing)
Lo-Ruke's avatar
You've got a typo

"he did it in such a wakward way that it almost hit her in the face"

just wanted to point that out, love the story :)
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ToaArcanHobbyist Writer
Awesome work, and I like Ultio's design.

I've used Mata feet as shoulder parts before too.
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GlenfoxxHobbyist General Artist
So much cool stuff happening!
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jakest123Hobbyist Digital Artist
Loving Ultio's design, especially the mask/helmet.
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TheICombaticonHobbyist General Artist
Everything just keeps escalating. It's really incredible how you've been able to keep the story's momentum going. Kudos.  
IbenTesara's avatar
I loved the references in this chapter, the man-eating rock ref was awesome :D
NickOnPlanetRipple's avatar
That rock has always been one of my favorite weird-ass things Bionicle.
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ExplainerHobbyist Writer
Your story telling is as amazing as ever Nick. But your art gets better and better as time go's on.
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