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Here is the third page for my entry into :iconrodcom1000:'s MOCC2 Contest.
MOCC Storytelling competition!
   Star!Star!Star!Star!Star! IT BEGINS!Star!Star!Star!Star!Star!
                      M.O.C.C. 2 page 21-22 by RODCOM1000
Now it's Your turn!


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The artwork here was drawn by the incredible Jay Hernandez :icondingodile24:, A good friend and even better artist who will be drawing all the art for my entry. Thanks Jay! Once again you make Turbulence look incredible! Not only that but Gilead and Herod look like they are going to tear the house down!

And a special thanks to Veronica Smith :iconronron84: for making it all pop with her incredible colors! Excellent Job Roni!


Turbulence is the Intellectual Property of Wayne M. Thomason
Gilead is the Intellectual Property of :iconhulkdaddyg:
Herod is the Intellectual Property of :iconrodcom1000:
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Bracey100Professional Digital Artist
Poor Turbulence its just going from one bad scenario to the next!
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When you have someone with power like Wolverine fight someone with superman's strength and Storm's powers, you have to find a way to get the upper hand. Until you do, you're gonna take a lot of hits.
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Bracey100Professional Digital Artist
That's for sure.
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Not to mention Turbulence was a man on a mission. He was more concerned with shutting down the dimension portal than fighting. Ain't nobody got time for that.
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Bracey100Professional Digital Artist
Its the smart play, eyes on the prize and all that. Dont win the battle only to loose the war.
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Exactly!
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Promises, promises. lol
Great writing on these pages man.
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Someone made a comparison earlier of Turbulence to John McClaine from the Die Hard movies. That's actually pretty accurate. 
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ah yeah I can see the resemblance, Both are hella capable while brimming with snarky banter. :D
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Exactly!
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Lovin' it!!
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Thanks Gabe!
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EricLinquistProfessional Traditional Artist
Wow! Love the John McClain line - one of my all-time faves!  Killer page, man!
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NewPlanComicsHobbyist Writer
Nice catch!!

My writing tends to have tons of references to other movies and series. You should see my intro page for the MOCC.
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RODCOM1000Professional General Artist
You devoted to a really good page to a fellow contestants cameo! That's real sportsmanship :thumbsup:
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I just thought it made for a good story. I can't imagine two power houses like Gilead and Herod being contained to one room if they scrap. And with Turbulence wandering around the ship lost, well it's relatively possible that with all the fighting on board he was bound to bump into somebody.

Plus Turb got to shoot Herod in the face! What's not to love about that?

And it's not like other players haven't had cameos in my pages. Onyx had a good deal of my first page, as well as a pop in and pop out of Respawn. I just hope when I wrote these other characters I've done them some justice.

But this is the last of the cameos from me.  Zepher is coming up fast, and Turbulence is still trying to figure out how to shut down the portal.
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RODCOM1000Professional General Artist
Hmm, well I hope Turb doesn't really s#!t down the portal, that would be messy! :laughing:

I totally agree with you concept on cameos and it's well done.
I just think it's worth pointing out that it is worth the sacrifice to face time for good storytelling.
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Well you know me, Rod. I'm a writer, I'm all about story telling. And in the end with this particular page, I just hope Gary likes it.

(Plus we all know that Gilead can't take down Herod without a little help) ;)
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Don't worry, Turb's got you back!
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RODCOM1000Professional General Artist
Haw! Can't wait to hear a response to that bit of trash talk! :D And I'm not letting the "s#!tting down portal" bit slide either, ha ha! :lol:
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Hey, everybody's fighting. :shrug: Somebody has to stay on the task at hand.
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RODCOM1000Professional General Artist
Not sure you're hearing what I'm saying, reread the last sentence of your first comment to this thread. :giggle:
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D'oh!
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