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Spiderman/ladybug the ultimate enemy EP 18
As the guardians and Spider-Man were battling against Miss Fortune and her new generals, Hawkmoth and Iron Man were battling it out in the lair. Iron Man was flying around the condensed room, avoiding the incoming missiles that were activated from Hawkmoth's security system. As Iron man dodged another missile, he saw Hawkmoth lunge at him with his sword out of his cane with the sword over his head. But Iron Man blocked it just in time, however he was hit from behind by one of Hawkmoth's laser, causing him to skid across the floor.
Hawkmoth landed feet first on the floor as Iron Man was getting back up. A missile was fired him but he turned his head as the rocket flew past him. He raised his arm and fired a wrist rocket at the security system destroying it. Hawkmoth gazed at the destroyed weapons system which gave Iron Man an opening. He raised his right arm and fired a repulsor blast hitting hawkmoth in the chest, sending him crashing into the wall. 
"Stand down," Iron
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Spiderman/Ladybug one shot the proposal
Inspired by Batman rebirth volume 3 issue 24, this one shot takes place in an alternate universe where Ladybug is in new york and meets spider-man after five years of being apart from each other. They have had an on again off again relationship despite certain obstacles being too much for them. But now on a cold snowy night in queens, Spider-Man finds ladybug swinging from rooftop to rooftop as part of their way of competition. However after a few rooftops Spider-Man stopped and Lady Bug noticed he wasn't trying to chase her. She turned around and saw him just standing alone on the roof.
"Ladybug..." Spider-Man started.
"spider? What's wrong?"
"When we started dating..."
"What's going on?"
"I Knew even at the beginning, you were the girl of my dreams. Both as Marinette and Ladybug." He then slowly turns to her removing his mask and approaches her. "Before Aunt May passed away, she gave me her engagement ring that was given to her by my uncle ben. I held on to it for five years b
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This is situational a story that takes place in the universes of Marvel. Susan storm Franklin and Valeria all charged at the cops despite all of the food that she has eaten but it still didn't stop her hunger from going away. The cops that were firing at her were soon trample as she buldozed her way through the brigade that was blocking her path. Then she soon felt her tummy rumble and she tried to rub even though her arms were too chubby. "Ugh how can my belly be complaining even after I've become the size of a house?" Susan moaned. 
"It's as if it is nothing more than a nuisance to us," Franklin chimed in. "I don't how our our bellies can still complain even after we have become so big." Even though Franklin was upset by this, he was unaware that he wasn't the only one until after the other members arrived.
"I know it's causing us so much strain," Valeria added also rubbing her belly. "No matter, nothing will stand in our way until we find a way to satisfy our bellies."
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This is a follow up to part one of the situational story that takes place in the Marvel universe. We now find our heroes now with the completed vehicle getting ready to leave and retrieve the orange stone that had caused their horrendous transformation along with the never ending hunger to satisfy the bellies needs. Doctor doom was in his lair preparing the machine and his robot goons were carefully placing the stone inside the container. Once the door to it was closed, Doctor doom had set a timer for thirty minutes. "You're days are numbered heroes of earth, HAHAHAHAHAHA." His laughing stop when the machine malfunctioned delaying his plans for a few more hours with the sun setting in the background. He groaned in frustration and ordered his robot minions to finish making the final adjustments and clear out any additional bugs.
Meanwhile on the fantastic four jet, the fantastic four and their kids were piloting their ship through the sky despite their chubby hands giving them a hard ti
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Spiderman/Ladybug the ultimate enemy EP 17
Flashback ten years ago
"I am Iron Man." Those were the words Tony Stark had spoken to reporters in a press conference after his battle with the Iron Monger. Gabriel Agresste, his wife Emille, and then eight year old Adrien were among the spectators that were in shock of his announcement. Tony did seem a bit reformed but still maintained his playboy charm after the announcement. However after Emille disappeared, he had grown distant from Gabriel but still has a soft spot for Adrien. Before the Miss Fortune incident, Iron Man did discover Adrien and Marinette were Ladybug and Chat Noir and had known for sometime. Now in the present Tony Stark is at the agreste house believing he has found Hawkmoth End of Flashback.
In his sweatshirt jumpsuit combo, Tony Stark rang the doorbell while also programming his glasses from his mark 50 suit to continue picking up signs of Hawkmoth's aura.
"Gabriel it's Tony can you let me in? I just wanna talk." There was no reply. *Sigh. "I know
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Spider-Man/Lady Bug the ultimate enemy EP 16
Chat Noir and Rena Rogue were knocking on chloe's window. The blonde girl who had been a thorn in Marinette's side was crying because all those years of having a massive ego and being mean to others has finally caught up to her. Next to her was the newspaper with yesterday's headlines' Mayor's daughter is blamed for the fall of Ladybug parisians protest him to resign. She walked to the window and opened it letting the two heroes in, her makeup messy with tears visible, she had a rough two days. Despite Rena wanting Karma to hit Chloe, she knew that Paris was at risk and they needed help and explain the real story of what really happened.
"What do you two want? If this is about me suiting up as Queen Bee then forget it!" Chloe spat. She then continued to cry when she began to think of Ladybug turning to the darkside.
"Listen to me Chloe, everything you heard about Spider-Man being evil and also being responsible for the creation of Miss Fortune, is wrong!" Chat Noir replied. "He
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TT Arkham Aslyum Ep 6 Hunt or be hunted
In Jump City, Adonis was in an interrogation room cuffed down to a table passed out and Robin was inside sitting on the opposite end of the table. When Adonis came to he noticed Robin on the other end. Robin had an angry glare on his brow and he had a birdarang open in his hand. Robin then lunged at Adonis and stabbed the weapon down into the table startling him.
"That was a warning adonis," Robin started. "Don't think this is good cop bad cop; it isn't. It's worse."
"What do you want with me?" Adonis scoffed.
"Payback; because of you Beast Boy is now an inmate of Arkham Asylum!" Robin snapped. That comment did wipe the smirk off of adonis' face. "Not so tough now are you?"
"Arkham Asylum?" Adonis replied in sudden shock. "You mean that place?"
Robin then clenched his eyebrows in anger. "If you're not going to cooperate then, I guess we will arrange for an exchange. A trade. You for Beast Boy and you'll be the one staying at Arkham."
"Wha...you can't be serious! Why do I have to
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Spiderman/Ladybug the ultimate enemy EP 15
Meanwhile, back at Marinette's house in the guest room Alya was pacing back and forth while Trixx and Plagg were floating around fighting over food. Adrien couldn't help but also feel the same way. He then began to think about all that has happened, especially all those years that he was so blind to the fact that Marinette and Ladybug were the same person. But considering now that she also has become the villainous Miss Fortune, the odds were still against the heroes until Adrien suggests recruiting Chloe as Queen Bee. However this decision also put Adrien and Alya at odds with each other.
"You're not serious about bringing back Queen Bee are you?" Alya asked turning to him.
"Do you have a better idea? I maybe back as Chat Noir but even you me and Spider-Man aren't enough, and besides from what you told me Miss Fortune could bring back more fallen akuma's if she could." 
Alya crossed her arms and sighed, "Even if we could attempt to reach Chloe, I doubt she'd want to help.
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Spider-man/Lady Bug the ultimate enemy EP 14
Spider-Man fired another web-string at a nearby building to build up his altitude as the black suit clone was on his radar and on the move. He landed on a rooftop and activated his GPS tracking system. He spotted the clone in a nearby alleyway close to the Françoise Dupont High School. This was his chance to capture the clone and hopefully clear his name. However he wasn't alone, Zombizou and Prime Queen soon then emerged behind Spider-Man and the wall crawler turned around and groaned.
"You two again?! I don't have time to play right now, I'm busy." Spider-Man started. "Tell Miss Fortune I'll deal with her later."
"And what could be more important than Miss Fortune web-head?" Prime Queen asked with her arms crossed.
Spider-Man looked over his shoulder and replied, "This is MY issue. Tell Miss Fortune to meet me later today, without her Supervillain costume." He fired a web string and swung down to the alley way and pulled out the shard. The clone was panting from exha
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A retake on the critique. So Tree-ink actually had done a really good job on his first attempt on Venom. For both Venom and his opponen...


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www.instagram.com/p/BieV6Bkn4L… this theme is making me super emotional because it’s a day we all feared. Stan Lee has died. I’ll never forget what he has done for not just the comic world but geek culture as a whole. For the DC and marvel fans let’s put our differences aside and remember a true icon in the comic world. RIP Stan Lee.

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www.instagram.com/p/BieV6Bkn4L… this theme is making me super emotional because it’s a day we all feared. Stan Lee has died. I’ll never forget what he has done for not just the comic world but geek culture as a whole. For the DC and marvel fans let’s put our differences aside and remember a true icon in the comic world. RIP Stan Lee.

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As the guardians and Spider-Man were battling against Miss Fortune and her new generals, Hawkmoth and Iron Man were battling it out in the lair. Iron Man was flying around the condensed room, avoiding the incoming missiles that were activated from Hawkmoth's security system. As Iron man dodged another missile, he saw Hawkmoth lunge at him with his sword out of his cane with the sword over his head. But Iron Man blocked it just in time, however he was hit from behind by one of Hawkmoth's laser, causing him to skid across the floor.

Hawkmoth landed feet first on the floor as Iron Man was getting back up. A missile was fired him but he turned his head as the rocket flew past him. He raised his arm and fired a wrist rocket at the security system destroying it. Hawkmoth gazed at the destroyed weapons system which gave Iron Man an opening. He raised his right arm and fired a repulsor blast hitting hawkmoth in the chest, sending him crashing into the wall. 

"Stand down," Iron Man warned as he raised his arm to fire another blast. Hawkmoth was standing on one knee and was struggling to get up. Iron Man then de-materialized his mask to reveal his tony stark persona. "What were you trying to accomplish Gabriel?" Hawkmoth's eyes widened when he heard the armored avenger call him by his real name.

"This was not how this mission was supposed to go down, I was only trying to akumatize someone to bring me Lady Bug and Chat Noir's miraculous."

Flashback to episode 1 Hawkmoth's point of view.
"I felt negative emotion coming from Peter Parker and thought he would've been the perfect Akuma to finally give me what I want. But my plans were temporarily thwarted when he sensed the akuma and trapped it with his webshooter. After the Akuma escaped, it fled and it then saw the Black Suit Spider-Man battling Ladybug and Chat Noir. Then after Chat Noir was injured by the clone the akuma followed the it and it unmasked itself to be none other than parker himself." End of Flashback.

Tony sighed with his repulsor blast still aimed at Gabriel. "What you saw wasn't the real Peter Parker. It was a Klyntar, a being from another planet. They've been around around for as long as the Kwami's have."

"What?!" Hawkmoth replied in shock. 

"I know it's a lot. But enough about them. I already know that you akumatized Lady Bug and taken her miraculous, the only question I have is why her?" Iron Man asked. 

"At first she and I had the same goal, revenge against Spider-Man for hurting my son in exchange for her and his Miraculous-"

"She was the one that purified all your minions, so you went after the main player. That's not a bad move, but does she know that Peter was wrongly framed for that incident?" Iron Man interrupted. "This new Klyntar has the ability to shape-shift into other people."

"If that's true then that means...oh no. She..."

"I know, I saw the crash...she caused it and she was the one that put his friend in the hospital." Iron man added slowly lowering his firing arm. "If one of them dies, it's on both of us. You need to stop this before it's too late."

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Pont de la Tournelle
Rena's flute had clashed with the resurrected Volpina's while Carapace was blocking a downwards strike from Stoneheart. Queen Bee was battling Queen Wasp, while Chat Noir was battling his resurected clone. Spider-Man had spear tackled Miss Fortune to the floor and they struggled until Spider-Man held her down sitting on her pelvis. He used a street lamp that he webbed up and pressed it on her neck to apply pressure until his face was close to hers. While she struggled for air, she briefly looked to see his face to close to his and she smiled.

"Awfully close there spider are you expecting another kiss?" Miss fortune added.

"Flattering but no." Spidey replied with some disgust in his voice.

"Awww," Miss fortune replied as she lit her hand and pressed on his chest. "Looks like you've got a stronger suit, but that won't do you much good."

"What are you...?" Then his parachute was activated springing upwards. Spider-man looked at the parachute before turning to miss fortune and replied, "Oh Come on!" as he was being pulled away by the wind. She got up to her feet and charged towards Rena.

Rena rogue and Volpina were clashing their flutes against each other's like swords. Then Rena looked over to see Miss fortune charge towards her with her butterfly swords drawn. She pushed off Volpina and blocked an upwards strike from Miss Fortune. As Miss fortune and Rena struggled Volpina was about to strike Rena from behind when she was hit by Carapace's shield throw. 

The evil fox villainess then focused her attention to the turtle hero as he picked up his shield and clothes-lined Volpina with it. As for Spider-Man, he detached his parachute from his suit and fired a web shot, swinging towards Chat noir battling his copy. But then he felt his spider sense tingle and saw an army of wasps emerge from behind him. Queen Wasp was summoning her wasps to try and paralyze spider-man.

Queen Bee then used her top to swing up and tackle Queen Wasp to the ground. As they struggled, Spider-Man saw Carapace fighting against Volpina and he swung away to help him. Queen bee was pushed off by Queen wasp and before she could take out her top, one of Queen wasp's wasp stung her in the neck, leaving her paralyzed. 

"Sorry Queen Bee, but I always was strong than you," Queen wasp replied kicking Queen Bee in the stomach and sending her flying into a car.

Chat Noir was battling his copycat when he saw queen bee getting carried by queen wasp. This gave his evil clone an opening and he tripped chat noir with his staff and sent him flying into andre's Ice cream cart.

"Oh no!" The Ice cream man replied in fear. But then he saw the two cat like combatants struggle, and decided to flee the scene. As for spider-man he fired an impact webbing that engulfed Volpina. He helped Carapce up to his feet but was soon slammed to the ground by Stoneheart's fist. Carapace and Rena were soon stung by Queen Wasps. Miss fortune then approached Chat Noir from behind and knocked him out with her stun attack.

"No hard feelings kitty. Stone heart Bring me Spider-Man." She ordered while her akumatized minions had cuffed the other guardians. She also then knelt down and took Chat Noir's miraculous and put it away, causing Adrien to detransform back into adrien. The other villains gathered as Adrien Queen Bee, Rena and Carapace were placed on the sidelines

Spider-Man was then cuffed and placed on his knees in front of her by queen bee and volpina. Miss fortune smirked and knelt down and clasped spider-man's face between her fingers. 

"You've lost Spider-Man, it was a noble effort but..." But before she could finish a tendrill emerged from Peter Parker's hand and it sprung towards Volpina grabbing her by the throat and slamming her into the ground before she was thrown off the Pont de la Tournelle. The villains and guardians were confused by what happened until Miss Fortune saw Spider-Man get to his feet and break away from his shackles.

"What the?!" Miss fortune replied as Spider-Man's suit was changing.

"I'll deal with this myself," The symbiote replied as it consumed Spider-Man's body transforming his armored suit into the form the symbiote had taken when it escaped from shield.

"Time to show her how we do things!" 

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Meanwhile in Hawkmoth's lair, Hawkmoth was getting to his feet. He had a somber look as tony was ready to reveal another shocking revelation. But what came after sent a chill down the supervillains.

"Gabriel, during our fight, I managed to record everything from our battle even where your lair is. If you don't call off your crusade, I'm sending this footage out." Iron man warned.

Hawkmoth then raised his head and replied, "Even if you do send out that footage, nothing will stop me from doing anything to bring back Emille...anything."

"Even at the cost of your son's life?" Iron Man replied.

"Are you threatening Adrien Stark?!" Hawkmoth snapped.

The armored avenger bowed his head turning away from. "Gabriel, Before all this, Doctor Strange has traveled through different possibilities of what happens when you get the two miraculous, He told me that it all results in the same thing."

"Which is?" Hawkmoth responded in fear.

He looked back at Hawkmoth and said "Adrien has to die." 

To be continued...
Spiderman/ladybug the ultimate enemy EP 18
sorry it took so long but here's a new chapter. Miss Fortune from the MLB comic broken promise belongs to my friend MegS-ILS 
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Inspired by Batman rebirth volume 3 issue 24, this one shot takes place in an alternate universe where Ladybug is in new york and meets spider-man after five years of being apart from each other. They have had an on again off again relationship despite certain obstacles being too much for them. But now on a cold snowy night in queens, Spider-Man finds ladybug swinging from rooftop to rooftop as part of their way of competition. However after a few rooftops Spider-Man stopped and Lady Bug noticed he wasn't trying to chase her. She turned around and saw him just standing alone on the roof.

"Ladybug..." Spider-Man started.

"spider? What's wrong?"

"When we started dating..."

"What's going on?"

"I Knew even at the beginning, you were the girl of my dreams. Both as Marinette and Ladybug." He then slowly turns to her removing his mask and approaches her. "Before Aunt May passed away, she gave me her engagement ring that was given to her by my uncle ben. I held on to it for five years because I knew I'd need it. Much like how I need you. I know that the last five years of being away from you...I just couldn't stand being without you."

He walks up to her and places both his hands on her face. "Marinette."

Ladybug trembled her breath slowly increasing the adrenaline building up. "Peter."

"I Love you." Peter replies as he gets down on one knee holding her hand with his right and pulls out his aunts ring. "Will you Marry me?"

As the snow continued to fall Ladybug was left speechless and she placed both her hands on her face covering her mouth and turns away. She closes her eyes and tears slowly fill up. Peter bows his head and puts the ring away. He gets up to his feet and puts his mask on. He then walks to the ledge ready to swing away when he feels ladybug grab him by the wrist. Ladybug then slowly wraps her arms around his waist.

"Peter...We were never honest with each other, but after Adrien died...I thought I'd given up on love, because I thought you killed him."

"What are you trying to say?" Spider-Man asked in confusion.
Flashback
"Alya showed what really happened, he was killed when he tried to impale you with his staff but you got out of the way and the blade pierced through his heart. I also discovered he followed in his fathers footsteps; he became the second hawkmoth after I told him I wasn't ready to accept him." 

Spider-Man bowed his head and replied, "I'm Sorry. I know you might not wanna here this but his last wish was to have me look after you."

She gazes up at him and he continues, "I tried to save him, but the influence of Hawkmoth's power drove him over the edge, it wasn't until his last breath that he told me to tell you this."
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"p...Peter. I'm Sorry. I see now that she loves you. Promise...Promise me you'll love her with all your heart. Take care of her...I Know you will." Adrien's last words before he succumbs to his wounds.

Ladybug smiles through her tears and places her hand on his cheek. "I guess he brought us together in his own unique way. So my answer to you is *through her tears....Yes." 

Spider-Man then briefly separates from her and pulls out his aunt's ring and places it on her finger. He removes his mask and pulls her back as they exchange a passionate kiss. However after a few seconds she opens her eyes and pushes peter away.

"What is it Marinette?"

"So if you proposed to me as Peter and Spider-Man...How are we supposed to explain our engagement to the others?" Ladybug asked in confusion while also being a little scared.

"I guess I'll have to repropose to you," Peter replied.

Ladybug groaned, "But it won't be as good."

Peter chuckled and pulled her close. "Don't Worry Milady as Spider-Man and Ladybug we can overcome anything."

"You do realize you're making this harder than it already is?" Ladybug replied.

"You know you're not as cute when you are uptight, but doesn't mean I won't still love you any less." Peter added.

Ladybug chuckled "Alright bugaboo challenged accepted." She ended while returning the kiss to him. As she and Spider-man were kissing, she thought about Adrien and how much she was going to miss him but he would want her to be happy.

"You maybe gone Adrien, but the greatest gift you gave me was uniting me with who I truly love. So...Thank you."

The end
This is situational a story that takes place in the universes of Marvel. Susan storm Franklin and Valeria all charged at the cops despite all of the food that she has eaten but it still didn't stop her hunger from going away. The cops that were firing at her were soon trample as she buldozed her way through the brigade that was blocking her path. Then she soon felt her tummy rumble and she tried to rub even though her arms were too chubby. "Ugh how can my belly be complaining even after I've become the size of a house?" Susan moaned. 

"It's as if it is nothing more than a nuisance to us," Franklin chimed in. "I don't how our our bellies can still complain even after we have become so big." Even though Franklin was upset by this, he was unaware that he wasn't the only one until after the other members arrived.

"I know it's causing us so much strain," Valeria added also rubbing her belly. "No matter, nothing will stand in our way until we find a way to satisfy our bellies."

The poor cops didn't have a chance and their cars were destroyed by this monstrosity of a woman; they were unsure what they were going to do until Johnny Storm, Reed Richards, Ben Grimm and Jen and Irya arrived on the scene. The now fat and powerless heroes then went to join Susan Frank and Valeria who was about to take down another wave of Swat cars and police cruisers. The bullets that were being fired at them were constantly bouncing off of their chubby bellies, and all of their stomachs began to growl in pain.

"Ugh, where is the food that we need to satisfy our hungry bellies?" Jen Moaned as she rubbed her belly. "If we do not get any food soon, the police officers will have to do. And they are starting to look very tasty." She concluded licking her lips. The cops looked at each other before they fired more shots and turned away to run from the monsters that were supposedly ready to eat them. 

"Fall back! Everyone fall back they're too strong for our weapons we need more help. Spider-Man, Hulk somebody Help!" One police seargent replied as the monstrous beasts soon all charged for the cops. Luckily, One cop managed to launch a tear gas grenade blinding them giving all of the officers a chance to escape. By the time the smoke had dispersed, all the people and the cops were hiding inside of the buildings.

"Where's they go?" Franklin replied and soon his belly was starting to growl and he rubbed it but very aggressively. "Why can't this growling belly ever stop? What is it going to take to give it what it wants?"

"We better find some food soon, other wise we will bring down the destruction of this city!" Susan replied as she ripped apart a taco stand with her bare hands, only to find it empty. She growled as she tossed the pieces into empty cars smashing them and blaring their alarms. That also caused all of their stomachs to growl in anger. They all rubbed their stomachs but Franklin punched his in anger.

"I can't stand our bellies growling in pain, I want an antidote to this disease!" Franklin cried. "Make it stop please! I don't want to eat so much foof anymore, I want my old body back!"

"Calm down Franklin you're complaining and punching of your belly isn't going to help the situation of either of us," Richard replied as he tried to walk with his stubby like legs. "I don't know where those fiends that did this to us are, but once we find them they are going to pay for what they did to us!" 

"Maybe if we find the orange stone we can reverse the effects that it inflicted on us," Susan added. "But oh where could it be?" As the family began to search for the orange stone that caused their hideous transformation, Jen's chubby belly began to start rumbling and she was rubbing it, but tears began to drip down her face. "Ugh why did you have to bring that stone back look what it is doing to me and my poor stomach."

"In all honestly you're right none of these would not have happened if we had taken back that stone. But all that matters now is that we have to find it and figure out a way to reverse the effects, because....I do not feel so good," Susan replied. As she lifted up some debris with her stubby arms, she then felt her stomach growl so hard that the whole earth started to temporarily shake, Even causing some of the damaged buildings to have some cracks in their windows. She moaned and added, "Richard what the hell were you thinking bringing that stone back with us? I know there are others responsible but that stone is the reason all of our bellies are aching in pain. If we continue to search and devour food and our bellies are still not satisfied there won't be enough food for those that actually need it."

"I'm sorry okay it was a hunch and I thought it was going to be a good experiment for us to benefit the good of mankind. I didn't know it was going to make us gigantic beasts with big bellies that are constantly complaining of not giving them enough food until there is no food left on earth!" Richard snapped. The comment alone sent out a wave of silence. Even Richard was angry at himself for bringing that stone back and letting the evil beings use it to disable the fantastic four. He rubbed his belly but then he punched it in anger. "I'm sorry okay that I put you through this all of you! But if we are going to find those that did this to us and cure our bellies we all have to work together."

The other members nodded in agreement and continued to search for food to hold them over or at least give themselves enough time so that they can come up with a plan to figure out how they can make the most of their bad situation. 

As for the cops that escaped one of them a female looked over on a rooftop while her partner was trembling in fear. 
"The X-Men the avengers where are they?" The cop's replied quietly. "Where is the backup when we need it? and of all people why did it have to be the fantastic four?" 

"We could really use their help right now," His partner replied. "hey they said they were looking for food and some alien rock right? Maybe if they are willing to cooperate with us we can give them some food and maybe it'll give us time to contact either the avengers or the x-men and they might be able to find a way to reverse what has happened to the fantastic four." Soon the cop went down the elevator shaft and found a box of protein bars and other miscellaneous snacks to give to the fantastic four and their kids.

Franklin then smelled the scent of chocolate and saw that it was a cop and she was followed by her partner who whispered "Are you sure this is a good idea?" Her partner nudged him and replied, "Do you have any better ideas? Excuse me you're Franklin right? You must be hungry, here is a nice chocolate granola bar to satisfy your hunger." Although Franklin was hesistant at first he slowly reached out with his chubby hands and grabbed the treat slowly from the female police officer. He looked back at her then the snack and then began to eat down on the bar.

Despite the energy bar having a decent amount of protein, Franklin's stomach growled begging for more food, which prompted him to rub it some more. "I'm sorry despite all of your best efforts the food you give us isn't going to be enough satsify our never ending hunger for our hungry bellies. We need to find an orange stone that has magical powers, we believe it can reverse the effects of what it has done to us."

"We'll get back to base and see what we can come up with. Good luck fantastic four." The cops then drove away leaving the fantastic four alone searching for food and the orange stone. After eating some of the snacks that were left by them, the fantastic four continued their search for more food and the orange stone to reverse Johnny Storm lifted up a car with his chubby arms and looked through a window to see if there was any food. Then he saw what appeared to a bag of potato chips. But when he opened them, it was empty and that caused his belly to growl in anger. Johny was so angry he tempoary lit himself on fire and began to angrily punch and his belly while also chanting swear words. "What the %$@* do you want you piece of *&^%# of a belly?! How much food do you want us to eat until there's none left for those that need it, even the homeless and poor countries?!" 

"Johnny enough!" Susan cried in anger to her brother. "Look I know our situation is really bad and that we were cursed with this disease that gave us these bellies that won't stop complaining especially after those snacks, but we are the fantastic four and we have a job to do as superheroes to bring those wrongdoers to justice. So who's with me?"

"Let's do this!" Irya chimed in and thus the search for the stone and whatever food they could all salvage. Ben grimm searched through a garbage can to see if there was any neglected food. But to no avail, which caused his belly to growl in anger. Ben grimm sighed in frustration as he rubbed it, "Reed where did you put that stone, I don't know if our bellies can take the strain of not having food for this long. Does anyone have the contact information for the avengers or the X-men, cause I don't know how much longer we can last in this state that were are in?"

"I think our communicators are in the facility, and I think maybe the rock is still there," Jen replied. "I'm not looking forward to walk all the way back to the facility in this shape with this unattaractive and constantly complaining belly. Is this the price superheroes have to pay for always constantly trying to do the right thing. We've done all this good for the people and this is the thanks we get? This is how they repay us?"

"C'mon jen this is not the end, it's just a minor setback, every superhero that we know has setbacks. Us being big and fat and having bellies that are constantly begging for food, this is just one of those setbacks. But we will all get through this and no matter how much we starve, we have to keep going if we are going to turn this around in our favor," Reed richards replied. After searching the city and all of it's garbage cans for four hours, the team then decided to head back to their home and search their place for the stone and some left over food if there was any. The poor family had to roll back until they arrived in the lobby of the fantastic four building.

The family had to split up into two groups due to their massive weight and take turns going up the elevator. Once all of them arrived at their headquarters, Reed richards used his stubby hands and tried to navigate on the computer and playback footage or what had become of the stone. Then they saw on the footage that it was their long time enemy Dr Doom and he had the orange stone that made the fantastic four the way they were. The sight of Dr doom alone was enough to make all six of their stomachs growl in hunger and frustration.

"Damn that victor von doome, he used our big and starving bellies as an advantage to break into the house and steal the orange stone," Susan moaned as she rubbed her belly trying to calm it down. Johnny rejoined the others and told them that all of the food is gone and that the fantastic four's plane was out of commission. This angered the other members as they now have faced another setback. Not only were they out of food, but the orange stone that could reverse their transformation was now in the hands of their greatest enemy.

"Great now he has the only thing that can reverse this. Where could he possibly be?" Ben grimm added in. Then he noticed a small disk that was sitting on the kitchen counter. He picked it up and placed it with his stubby hands in the computer and played it back. It was a recording of none other than doctor doom himself. "Greetings, Fantastic flub, it appears that in your chubby and fat like state, you are now powerless to stop me. Thanks to your fat and flubby structure I have stone the magical orange stone and have very special plans for the rest of the world."

The comment alone also caused each of the stomach's to continuely growl not only because they were always hungry but Doctor doom was mocking them. Johnny rubbed his belly and replied "What are you going to do with that stone, make everyone else big fat and always hungry with very ugly bellies?" 

"Well the plan was to get rid of you since you all have been a thorn in my side for so many years, but seeing you in the state that you are, means that there is no one else to stop me. With this magical stone, the avengers, the X-men and the defenders, no one will be able to stop me from fulflilling world domination by transforming earth's heroes into fat worthless pigs," Doctor doom laughed maniacally as the transmission had ended. 

Despite having very chubby arms and a very round belly, Ben Grimm smashed the computer in anger. Soon his belly growled again and instead of rubbing it, he slapped it and spat, "Ah shut the hell up you ungrateful belly, we did not ask for this! Well this is just great, We don't know where doom is he has the orange stone and now the other heroes could become victims of Dr doom's machine whatever it is called, a fat hungry wadjamacallet. " Franklin, Susan, Jen, Valeria, Johnny and Reed all bowed their heads; they knew they couldn't quit, but given the state they were in and Doctor doom gaining an advantage it seemed all hope was lost for the fantastic four and their children.

"So what do we do now?" Franklin asked with a worried look on his face. His mom put her chubby hand on her cheek and told him, "We persevere, because that's what heroes do." Reed pulled up the computer and found all the parts needed to make a new ship, but unfortunately all of the parts were scattered across the building. They all groaned but if they were going to find a way to retrieve the stone stop dr doom and reverse the effects they had no choice.

Johnny storm left the room and saw a staircase headed towards the basement. He groaned at the sight of the stairs, but he went down there anyway. As he waddled his way down the stairs towards the dark basement, he soon felt his big fat tummy growl in frustration. "You know my hungry belly this is seriously not helping the cause." He replied as he rubbed in frustration. But he sighed and remembered that he was not alone in this situation. "I wonder how the other's are doing?" Johnny wondered as he calmly tried to rub his belly even though the situation was still pretty grim.

Meanwhile Jen was in the living room with her chubby hands holding onto a flashlight searching not just for food, but also another part needed for the Fantastic four's new ship. Jen then found what seemed to be a box of cookies, underneath the couch. After a few failed attempts of trying to reach it with her stubby arms, she managed to grab it, only to find that the box was empty with nothing but crumbs. Her poor belly then growled in frustration at the sight of the empty box. "Oh I really need to find some food to satisfy my poor hungry belly. I sure hope the others are having much better luck than I am."

Irya waddled her way down to the same staircase were Johnny was and was having a hard time trying to get through the door that lead down to the basement. After she huffed and puffed with more continuing grunt sounds she finally came through but not before falling down the stairs and landed on her face with her big belly somewhat reducing the impact of the fall. As she struggled to get up to her feet, her belly started to grumble and she rubbed it constantly to try and calm it down. "I don't know how powerful that magical stone was but my poor belly just will not stop complaining. Johnny are you down here?"

Ben Grimm was in the lounge room but instead of searching for the part, He was probably the most hungry out of all the members. He opened the fridge only to find it was nothing but cobwebs and dust, which was also the same for the freezer. After he slammed the door to the fridge, he felt his rocklike belly, despite the size that it was growl, "I know Mr Belly I know. What am I saying, oh man this orange rock has made me feel so loopy, I better find some food and fast. I also hope the others aren't in the same boat that I am."

Johnny waved to Irya and the two of them were in the basement looking for one of the parts that Reed had directed them to find. The two bulgy figures were trying to get through the narrow hallways and stumbled upon a trashcan with pizza boxes. Ignoring the search for the time being, the two giants frantically searched through the boxes in hopes of finding some traces of food but there were none. Irya sat down on the wall and as her belly growled she put her chubby hands on her plump face and started to cry. "Oh Johnny this is horrible, ever since that orange stone was brought back it has brought us nothing but big bellies and never ending hunger. I can't do this anymore, I want to die!" She then felt a tight chubby hand slap her across her face. 

"I'm sorry okay but this is not the time to mourn. I know you're hungry, I'm hungry hell all of us are hungry, But you heard Susan, if we're going to stop doom we can't give up now. So get up off your fat ass and let's keep searching for that part reed wants," Johnny snapped. Irya was stunned by this but she had a determined look on her face as she got up on her feet and continued to search with Johnny for the missing part Reed needed.

Speaking of Reed, he found the first part needed for the ship but he still needed to find more pieces. He then continued to search the lab for other additional parts that he hoped would make a vehicle that was able to fit all of the members together. As he was studying the parts and pieces that were required for the ship, He felt his stomach growl and he began to rub it. "Man I'm starved maybe bringing that stone back was a mistake. I'm willing to bet with all of them combined all of our growling stomachs combined would be sending a loud earthquake that could be heard miles and miles by the X-men." He tried to focus on his work, but the growling was starting to be a little too much for him.

Back in the basement, Johnny and Irya managed to find one of the parts that Reed needed to build the ship after they had temporarily butted heads or rather bumped bellies. When they headed to proceed up the stairs, they got a transmission from Reed asking them if they managed to find the part for the ship. Irya nodded in agreement and as she exited the stairs she felt her tummy growl again so loud that the entire building shook, even cracking more windows. She rubbed it an replied, "I'm so hungry that I could eat an entire fleet of those police cars. My poor belly, I wonder if the others had better luck finding the rest of the parts  for that ship."

"Let's hope we find them in time before doctor doom uses that stone with his own machine and the other heroes end up like us," Johnny added.

Ben grimm was still in the lounge room and after the bad experience he had with the fridge he decided to focus his attention to finding the part needed and he stumbled upon something shiny underneath the table. With his fat and tubby arms and much more struggle due to his fat and stubby legs, he lifted the table up and found another hidden part needed for the ship which brought a smile to his face, despite his plump and overweight stature. As he was leaving the room with the part over his shoulder he felt his tummy growl, and he rubbed it with his free hand and complained sort of, "Ugh I know your hungry little belly but the sooner I get my hands on doom the sooner we can reverse this curse that stupid stone put on us." He then was the first to arrive in the lab with his part that he had found.

Susan was in the ops room looking around for small pieces of food while also looking for the part that Reed needed to finish up building their new ship to travel to Doom's headquarters. Despite the fact that there was no food in the building, Susan had to stay true to her word that they were superheroes and that they should not give up even with the bad situation she and the rest of her family were in. When she stumbled upon another missing part, she felt her tummy growl and she constantly rubbed it but even she was getting fed up with the state that she was in. "I can't believe that despite that orange stone turning us into these beasts with these monstrous size bellies, that we are constantly hungry. Oh well I just hope Reed, Johnny and the others managed to find the parts needed for his ship. We have to stop doom before other people end up just like us." Then after hours of searching through the ops room she managed to find the piece.

Jen was searching under the beds in their own rooms when the scanner revealed that the part was in that part of the building. As she waddled around like a penguin, her belly was knocking various pieces of furniture and accidentally damaging the frames of their family holidays together. When she found the part and picked it up after struggling to get it from underneath the dresser, She felt her stomach growl causing the building to shake even more but this time the windows were all destroyed. She rubbed it and quietly wept, "I just want to find that stone so that my belly can go back to being normal and not always empty and hungry. I just hope the others also found their parts for the ship."

Then a voice appeared on the intercom, "If all of you have found the missing pieces that we need for the ship, come to the lab soon we are going to build this ship and take it out for a test drive, Doctor doom's lair." It was Reed richards, and soon all of the members hobbled and waddled along trying to hold the parts in their stubby hands. Thankfully reed managed to develop a serum that would temporarily restore their normal forms.

When all the members regrouped in the lab, They each drank the serum that temporarily restored their non-fatiness but the hunger of the growling bellies were still there. Reed then started the conversation, "Listen it's only a matter of time before doctor doom uses the magical stone that we recovered to turn the other heroes into hideous fat monsters. We also don't have much time since the serum is only temporary and that our hunger still won't go away. I say we make the most of whatever time we have with the serum in out bodies."

"But once the effects ware off, how are we going to be able to fly the fantastic four jet?" Johnny asked in curiosity. Reed then pressed a button and the seats inside the fantastic four jet automatically adjusted it's seats to when they became that fat ugly monsters again. Just then Johnny's belly growled at he punched again so hard he also hit his crotch. "My belly is empty like a black hole even in my temporarily restored state. Do you think a sample of the magic stone can reverse the effects." 

"We have to take it back from doctor doom first sigh, This has not been easy for all of us. I know that despite all of my good intentions for bringing that magical stone back with us all it has done was make our lives miserable and turn us into hungry freaks with big bellies," The comment alone was enough to cause all of their bellies to growl. 

"Really richard you had to bring that up," Susan added as she rubbed her  "We have all been starving because of what that stone is doing to us. If we're going to stop doom, then let's go and finish getting that jet ready for take off." With no time to lose the fantastic four and all of their kids got up from their chairs and started to begin construction on the new jet to travel to doctor victor von doom's lair. 

Inside the loading bay each member of the fantastic four was working on a part of the jet as the effects of their serum were slowly beginning to wear off. As each memeber was slowly transforming back into the monstrous forms from before, they dropped tools on their feet and were jumping up and down causing the lab to shake and debris to fall down from the ceiling. The first one to complain after he had transformed back into a fat blob was the thing. He punched his belly and said, "I'm so hungry that my stomach could eat itself. Hell why don't you do it already, I'm through."

"Relax ben," Johnny chimed in. "Besides your part of the ship is done so you can go on in and battle it out with your belly in your seat." The thing heads to the seat giving Johnny a fierce glare for reminding him of the predicament that he was in. But soon that confident Johnny Storm was replaced with the sad flubber like creature he was before. It also didn't help that the belly was soon growling and he punched it in response. "Shut the &%$# up you stupid hungry black hole of a belly, I didn't ask for this ****!" Ben Grimm was laughing in amusement despite the fact that he was also in the same situation. 

Once the fantastic four jet was completed and all of the family members were inside the new jet that adjusted to the fat states each of them were in, they temporary serum that had reversed the effects before worn off and they were soon all back to being the same fat chubby monsters that the stone had turned them into before. 

Jen and Irya were crying and it did not help that their hungry bellies were also crying with them because of the massive hunger pains.
Jen rubbed her tummy and said, "Are we going to get this jet started or not my tummy is driving me batty."

"Me too, lets go and beat the snot out of Doctor doom already!" Irya added. As for Franklin he was rubbing his fat belly so much that he fell asleep but not before he rubbed it and said, "When I get my hands on doctor doom, I'm gonna use that stone on him and he will know what it is like to have overly fat bellies that are constantly hungry."

"Don't worry everyone. The ship is ready to go and we will all get our chance for some sweet redemption. Once we get the stone back and reverse the effects of what it did to us then we will use it on Doctor doom." And with that he fired up the jets and the plane was headed towards doctor dooms lair. As they were flying along, Reed managed to get in contact with the avengers who agreed that they will try to get there and help out whenever they can.

As for Doctor doom, the mad scientist was finishing up building his new ray of destruction and hunger causing with the orange stone placed on a different specialized box with special plans to make the world a much more fatter place. His robot minions opened the box and took out the stone with tongs.

"Soon all of earth's heroes and the innocent bystanders will feel the awesome wrath that is Doctor Doom Muwahahahhahhahaha. No one can stop me now!"

To be continued...

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