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6 deviants said link one thumb
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3 deviants said I respond with one word
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1 deviant said want more details? link a critique/intelligent comment you've left in the past week
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1 deviant said otherwise, we good

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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Direction
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:iconmuscularteeth:
muscularteeth Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2017
true
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:iconnebuladreams:
NebulaDreams Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017  Student Writer
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Exposition
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:iconnebuladreams:
NebulaDreams Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017  Student Writer
Dang.
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Predictability
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:iconsrsmith:
SRSmith Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017   Writer
I knew you were going to say that...
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
haha snap
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:iconsrsmith:
SRSmith Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017   Writer
;)
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:iconikazon:
ikazon Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017   Writer
:thumbsdown:

there's my one thumb
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
ur mom
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:iconsrsmith:
SRSmith Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017   Writer
Inverted
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:iconikazon:
ikazon Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2017   Writer
+fav
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:iconsrsmith:
SRSmith Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2017   Writer
;)
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Penultimate
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:iconblackbowfin:
BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017   Writer
Oh yeah, and my comment here......... fav.me/dbc08ha
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright - the thing I liked about this was how grounded your imagery was, and I felt the penultimate verse fouls that up by going all "dreamceiling" on the situation. I'm not sure you need it at all tbh.
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:iconblackbowfin:
BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017   Writer
Btw- I'm thinking about adding that to my parental arsenal of threats.... Don't make me go all dreamceiling on yo a**! :)
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
yes.
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:iconblackbowfin:
BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2017   Writer
Interesting point. It somehow didn't seem oer da top at the time. The fog of literary war must have clouded my scope.  I think there's a pebble or two I like, worth picking outta that stroph, but they'd probably be better placed elsewhere...... damn, it is a bit of a distraction/diversion. Tank-u, awesometype. :)
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, no problem ;p
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:iconnawkaman:
nawkaman Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't stop staring at it

what have you done
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:iconnawkaman:
nawkaman Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I really want a selfie with that thumb.
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh man would definitely have to do fun poses with it.
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:iconnawkaman:
nawkaman Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Of course.
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Focus
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
pseudoscience isn't :P

Explanation
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:iconmemnalar:
Memnalar Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Well done!
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
hee
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
tricky P:

Transition
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:iconxlntwtch:
xlntwtch Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2017   Writer
I like that!
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
;p
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