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neubauten

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Artist // Hobbyist // Artisan Crafts
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My Bio

Current Residence: inside my own little worlds

Favourite genre of music: Theremin and Piano Accordian duets

Favourite photographer: Ansell Adams

Favourite style of art: Hyper-reality

Operating System: all are currently oxymoronic

Music player of choice: Spotify

Shell of choice: Tortoise

Wallpaper of choice: Something by Laura Ashley

Skin of choice: Bare - goose pimply

Favourite cartoon character: Trump

Personal Quote: the albatross did not signify


Favourite Visual Artist
Jean-Paul Goude
Favourite Movies
Forbidden Planet
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
UoD [U]niverse[o]f[D]iscourse
Favourite Writers
Douglas Adams
Favourite Games
Guess that smell
Favourite Gaming Platform
the games I play need no platforms
Tools of the Trade
Bryce, Corel Draw, Apophysis, PaintshopPro, Dreamweaver, Sonic Screwdriver
Other Interests
merkin macrame

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Comments

thx, kludged the top actually but it is working as my piss-take on the original posts

MICROLITH 1
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I like what you are doing here and recognise the scene. You have strategically waited until there is a low sun and the colours and detail clearly evoke warm fading afternoon sun - have you considered cropping the image much closer to the bridge tangle (as the foreground adds little to the rest of the image and pulls at the palette you are establishing further up the image), alternatively a landscape portrait with bridge, building and sky would have had higer impact - was this hand-held or tripod taken? What did you reference the frame edge with (sometimes aligning it with the building can make the tangle seem more obtuse)

I would have liked more contrast on the wire work of the bridge - it is meant to argue with the purity of the sky, the sympathetic burnished colours of the building and it's regimented order create a nice tension between foreground and background.
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Donny_origami was the CP designer, I made the critter

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