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A thousand points of blazing light escape my grasp,
cutting the flesh as they flee.

As, cautiously I finally have time/space on my side to approach a beauty,
Intimidating to me, yet so familiar.

Falling sand, through the hour glass of change has finally brought me before you.

I weep now as she doubts her magnificence of being.

I tear my heart out to show her eyes ancient.

Her presence, that of the goddess fettered in flesh.
Overwhelms me with a sensuality arcane.

Undeniable, as it shatters all.
Breaking apart the sky,
now darkend,
forever.
Of course this would not be a love story if it did not end in some form of tragedy...

Dedicated to someone special to me, an old soul, that I had to wait for the appropriate time to speak with her, but like all stories of the like, she was stolen away..

This is dedicated to you, and only you, Psychoactively impaired improv style.

You are one of the most beautiful and wonderful women that I Have ever had the courage to interact with, but I get the feeling it will never be. I guess like all things pertaining to being a regular truly happy person, it seems that only in my dreams does it last, and only in my tears does it become real.. (I'd cry, but I must save whats left of my tears for the future..)

Oh well.. I have endured far worse, seems that is my lot to fight on and endure to the end.

-The Doctor.
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mdareberaid Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2008
I'm glad I read this today. It reminded me that I had a dream--filled with happines that doesn't exist in the waking world.
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Cygam7 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008
It is beautiful pain. :)
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009
:salute:
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CSnyder Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2008
i love it, really sweet but you are right bout the end
this is fantastic lit my friend
well done
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IRISHWSDM Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
passionate and descriptive well said :)
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ghoulwriter Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
:boo:...8-):sun:
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asiandreajq Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2008  Student
Hey.. I just wanted to say that I appreciate the fact that you sent this message very calmly and mature. I can definitely respect that. If you have to say your mind, I understand. It means a lot to me that you didn't go off on anyone or anything like that. It means the world. It proves to me that you want a mature relationship without drama. I can't take anymore drama. lol.
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2008
:salute:
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:iconneojones777:
neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2008
Also you have know Idea what I think.
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2008
OK I will play nice, but this is a heartfelt gift/dedication, more will come, you certainly are not jealous or over-possessive.

I will not be politely told what to do my friend, yeah I said I'd play nice...

Do not speak to me in this manner ever again, and never tell me what to do.
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ghoulwriter Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2008
:whisper:
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ghoulwriter Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2008
I guess a "flamer" gets in touch with his masculine side by claiming to have an intimate relationship with a lady a continental distance away...it seems he's gotten in touch with it quite often lately:rofl:
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2008
Indeed.
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2008
Roaring laughter
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2008
:) funny
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jodipheonix Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2008   General Artist
tis beautiful :heart:
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2008
Thank you kindly :)
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jodipheonix Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2008   General Artist
you're welcome :)
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2008
;)

:salute:
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jodipheonix Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2008   General Artist
:hug: ;) :salute:
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playacardzright Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2008
Your perspective is astounding. Nice work poet!
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2008
With much humility I do thank you, you Honor my name, thank you :thanks:

:salute:
-The Doctor
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2008
:salute:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008  Professional Writer
I like it, and as a fellow poet, I applaud this wonderful prose... :clap:
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2008
It will approach greatness once I am sober :)

Thank you though...
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2008
well depending on how well the stream of thought writing went, since only one eye was partially functioning :)

It may just need type-O's fixed.

-The Doctor
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creativemikey Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008  Professional Photographer
Interesting wordage and passage of the thought process..
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008
UNSTOPPABLE, CONSTANTLY BUILDING LOVE FOR ANOTHER. HAS THE MOST PROFOUND EFFECTS ON THE MIND, BE IT IMPAIRED DUE TO CHEMICALS OR NOT....
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creativemikey Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008  Professional Photographer
So true:w00t:
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008
:salute:

-The Doctor
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creativemikey Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008  Professional Photographer
:manhug:
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asiandreajq Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008  Student
It's my pimp hat, son!
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008
HeHeHeHeHeHe...

Only the worthy may posses it, and that is me!

And don't call me son, dammit!
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asiandreajq Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2008  Student
Son :giggle:
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neojones777 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2008
:)
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