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Odyssey 2 - Ch 5 Entry - History's Link
Maya walked in, knelt down then placed a hand on Paul's shoulders, right where the tentacles were growing. He felt them pulsate with power, but he also felt that he wasn't in total control of them. Maya stroked the tentacles as if they were something she saw every day. "I know this is crazy Paul. You were the unlucky one." Paul felt a tear roll down his cheek. "W-why me? Wh-WHAT'S GOING ON!?" One of his tentacles lashed out, barely missing Maya by an inch. Maya held the tentacle delicately, massaging it until it relaxed once more. "I'm not sure, honestly. You're the first one to survive all of… well, this." Maya didn't say it, but Paul was
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Odyssey 2 - Ch 2 Entry - A Colourful Find
Hi there :D I'm going to keep this note short and simple: Hope you guys enjoy it, I enjoying writing, I'm terrified of my own ideas, and I REALLY hate cute things because they manipulate me too well. Enjoy. Paul began panicking. He furiously tried to stop the spread of the disease, with absolutely no success. He tried everything from rubbing alcohol, to shaving cream, to soap, and every concoction in between. The mass of colors began to coalesce with one another, forming large puddles of strange mixtures. Paul stopped trying and sat down, looking defeated. There was nothing that he could do besides stare at the abomination that had festere
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Odyssey 2 - Ch 1 Entry - The Start of Everything
Paul wiped the vomit stain from the bottom of his trousers, feeling bad about not doing anything. Thinking back on it, he could've saved the man himself. Maybe even impressed the lady on the other side of the train. He chuckled to himself. "Like that's gonna happen." It occurred to him that she had purple hair. Halfway through his train of thought, somebody knocked on his door. Paul got up to answer, but found that he had left the door unlocked. "You shouldn't do that. Very unsafe." The woman that entered locked the door for Paul. "Uh, who are you?" Paul was backing away from the woman, as if being near her would harm him. He thought she
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Odyssey into 2012 - Chapter 8 entry -Meltdown-
The light train raced towards the final gate, well out of Kaylin's control now. She tried to rest before her final encounter, but the thought of facing Darus scared her. She didn't want to fight him, not alone anyways. Jackson said he would be with her at the final battle, but he seemed to be absent at the moment. The light train started to disappear, and Kaylin floated down onto a gargantuan pane of glass. Beneath her, scenes from around the world, from different times shifted endlessly, images from everywhere blending into one another. Kaylin looked up. Darus was there, standing with his sword at the ready. She said, "So. You versus me." H
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Odyssey into 2012 - Chapter 7 entry - 'Chances'
Kaylin. Darus. The only difference between the two was their goal. Kaylin needed to destroy the 8th and final gate, while Darus must stop her from doing so. Then there was Jackson. An unprecedented piece in the mystical game of chess. He would be the key to Darus' victory, if Jackson was on his side. He had his own Zephyr, much more than either Darus' and Kaylin's combined. A wild thought raced into Darus' mind, and he shuddered at the thought. Zephyrs weren't simply powers granted to a human, they had their own minds, opinions, thoughts. The Zephyr of Destruction was a stable, bland rock, only doing what is told. Darus' Zephyr,  Creation, wa
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Odyssey 2 - Ch 5 Entry - History's Link
Maya walked in, knelt down then placed a hand on Paul's shoulders, right where the tentacles were growing. He felt them pulsate with power, but he also felt that he wasn't in total control of them. Maya stroked the tentacles as if they were something she saw every day. "I know this is crazy Paul. You were the unlucky one." Paul felt a tear roll down his cheek. "W-why me? Wh-WHAT'S GOING ON!?" One of his tentacles lashed out, barely missing Maya by an inch. Maya held the tentacle delicately, massaging it until it relaxed once more. "I'm not sure, honestly. You're the first one to survive all of… well, this." Maya didn't say it, but Paul was
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Odyssey 2 - Ch 2 Entry - A Colourful Find
Hi there :D I'm going to keep this note short and simple: Hope you guys enjoy it, I enjoying writing, I'm terrified of my own ideas, and I REALLY hate cute things because they manipulate me too well. Enjoy. Paul began panicking. He furiously tried to stop the spread of the disease, with absolutely no success. He tried everything from rubbing alcohol, to shaving cream, to soap, and every concoction in between. The mass of colors began to coalesce with one another, forming large puddles of strange mixtures. Paul stopped trying and sat down, looking defeated. There was nothing that he could do besides stare at the abomination that had festere
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Odyssey 2 - Ch 1 Entry - The Start of Everything
Paul wiped the vomit stain from the bottom of his trousers, feeling bad about not doing anything. Thinking back on it, he could've saved the man himself. Maybe even impressed the lady on the other side of the train. He chuckled to himself. "Like that's gonna happen." It occurred to him that she had purple hair. Halfway through his train of thought, somebody knocked on his door. Paul got up to answer, but found that he had left the door unlocked. "You shouldn't do that. Very unsafe." The woman that entered locked the door for Paul. "Uh, who are you?" Paul was backing away from the woman, as if being near her would harm him. He thought she
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Odyssey into 2012 - Chapter 8 entry -Meltdown-
The light train raced towards the final gate, well out of Kaylin's control now. She tried to rest before her final encounter, but the thought of facing Darus scared her. She didn't want to fight him, not alone anyways. Jackson said he would be with her at the final battle, but he seemed to be absent at the moment. The light train started to disappear, and Kaylin floated down onto a gargantuan pane of glass. Beneath her, scenes from around the world, from different times shifted endlessly, images from everywhere blending into one another. Kaylin looked up. Darus was there, standing with his sword at the ready. She said, "So. You versus me." H
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Odyssey into 2012 - Chapter 7 entry - 'Chances'
Kaylin. Darus. The only difference between the two was their goal. Kaylin needed to destroy the 8th and final gate, while Darus must stop her from doing so. Then there was Jackson. An unprecedented piece in the mystical game of chess. He would be the key to Darus' victory, if Jackson was on his side. He had his own Zephyr, much more than either Darus' and Kaylin's combined. A wild thought raced into Darus' mind, and he shuddered at the thought. Zephyrs weren't simply powers granted to a human, they had their own minds, opinions, thoughts. The Zephyr of Destruction was a stable, bland rock, only doing what is told. Darus' Zephyr,  Creation, wa
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Odyssey into 2012 - Chapter 5 entry
Mhm. Here's my 3rd try at this story. ^_^ Have fun reading~~ And, also, would it be alright if i use this plot for my own story? I like the plot, but i want to put my own spin on it :D If you read that, please alert the Odyssey people about it. :D Thanks, and have fun. With Darus gone -for now- and the light train speeding Kaylin to her next life or death trial, she took a clumsy seat on the floor. Kaylin took out the book Jackson had dropped after he died, and flipped through the pages sans soins. Hm. So she knew French. Nice. On the very last page, scribbled in tiny letters, was the word 'Tokyo – final point'. So her final gate is whe
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2012 Odyssey Ch2 Entry
Here's my attempt at chapter two of the story, hopefully the tone of this is acceptable ^^" Don't count these words as part of the 300 limit. Please. LOL. ------------------------- Within 5 minutes of getting onto the train, the girl realized it wasn't a great idea. Her tip for those thinking of riding a train going at 186000 miles a second, don't do it. Come to think of it, she nearly threw up whatever lunch she had, but she barely held it in. If she had to take the train for every trial she had left, she might just give up. The trial… She took out the calendar and looked at the thing. Every Wednesday and Friday was circled, why? She
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DeviantArt Contest(?) Entry -Story Chapter 1
Okay, so this is my attempt at an entry for the story thing DeviantArt is having. I made this is literally 10 minutes, so if it doesnt get chosen, 8 more chapters to try! LOLOLOL. Well, have fun reading, and enjoy. I might end up making this into my own story eventually ^^ (Begins story here) Journeys Who am I? A name came flickering into mind, but it went away just before i was able to grab it. Whatever it was, it seemed to be important. I reached into my right pocket. Funny lines were on a piece of paper, which made no sense to me at all. I looked around me. On both of my sides, there were tall stone walls, behind me a metal fence. The o
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Hey man thanks for the watch! I only had two other watchers...and one died by way of the dreaded exclamation mark. :iconsadfaceplz: Lol

So thank you very much. :iconicameplz: LOL ^_^
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Thanks for the watch! :hug:
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:iconballoonplz: Happy Birthday Buddy! :iconballoonsplz:
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thank you for the fav!
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No problem! Art like that deserves it! :D
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I haven't talked to you in forever buddy! :iconaawplz:
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You. I love you. XD Thanks for joining. That made my day. Seriously. :D