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Delluna90's avatar
I like her peaceful expression.

It is good. You have used too much shading in the nose area. Do not be afraid of the pencils. Your work is muddled because you didn't commit to the lines.

Claerity19's avatar

Very nice style!

Neivan-IV's avatar

thank you very kindly

Neivan-IV's avatar
Thank you for taking the time to look at my other works too :D
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Thank you very kindly
missblanketburrito's avatar
I like her nose a lot. It's very pleasing to look at, like just a simple picture of a red-nosed teen girl asking you for help on homework. Nice!
Neivan-IV's avatar
Hahaha really loving your description and i am glad you like it
Lolliangel00's avatar
So cute! I like the shadings! :) 
Neivan-IV's avatar
Thank you kindly
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Lovely-Bacar's avatar
I love the texture!
Eapecially the nose
Neivan-IV's avatar
very glad you like it :)
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TunnelRunner's avatar
The roughness of it all looks more human then when most do portraits. They are always so stuff and cookie cutter like. But this is amazing great work. 
Neivan-IV's avatar
I wouldnt call different styles cookie cutter just different styles like more realistic for example? I see what you mean though and am very happy you enjoyed the drawing as much as I do :D
SchattenVWidow's avatar
This is beautiful, I love the movement and smudging of the charcoal to distinguish her hair, and the fine bits of detail around her eyes and nose. Thank you so much for sharing this! <3
Neivan-IV's avatar
Very happy that you enjoyed this. Yeah when I found traditional charcoal sticks I was so happy how much you can play around with it. It was perfect for smooth textures like hair so its a nice fit
Define the nostrils via surrounding tones rather than sharp, dark lines. Other than that it's beautiful.
Neivan-IV's avatar
Often I do that and tried it on this one too. Didn´t look as asthetically pleasing as this version so I left it out. Thank you so much for the feedback though :D
chaotic567's avatar
This is beautiful. good job.
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